My Character

Name: Beth Bethersmith
Nickname: Betty
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Rank: Breeder
Birthplace: Olivine City Johto
Battle Style: Very defensive at first, agility plays a big factor. Once the opponent starts to tire, she becomes very brutal and ruthless
Looks:
Personality: Beth is extremely timid, and reluctant to socialize. She becomes embarrassed easily and blushes often. She holds her friends dear and finds all life has meaning. Beth is passionate about helping and learning more about pokemon and knows its her calling in life. Beth likes vegetables, climbing trees, roller skating, and reading poetry. She dislikes honey, sweaters, bug pokemon, rain, and rude people. When confronted with a challenge she is very logical and looks at the situation from all perspectives. Though her ideas are brilliant she is yet comfortable with openly speaking about them for fear of rejection. She is in many ways a follower rather than a leader but when provoked can take charge. Beth is clearly guarded will open up to those closest to her.
History: Beth was raised by a single father, because her mother passed away when she was a young girl. When she was in school she always excelled but never bragged. Beth never had any strong friends growing up, which is why her father encouraged her to travel the region; to further her studies and meet new people. She became interested in breeding when her mother introduced her to the trade before she died. Her and her father are extremely close.
Badges: none
Items: 5 Pokeballs
Money: $6,200

Pokémon

Pokémon: wartortle
Nickname: Solar
Gender: Male
Level: 11
Moves: Tackle, tail whip, bubble, withdraw
Ability: Torrent
Personality: very hotheaded and willing to fight at any time
Exp: 0

Alright, I'm going to ask that you fix a few things.

1) Please don't use vulgar language in your application. I'm going to ask that you revise and remove that. (as a warning, this should not be used elsewhere on the site either)
2) Your app should be in 1st or 3rd person so as to avoid confusion. Not contain both. And please also remove the unnecessary words in parentesis, scratched out, and smilies.
3) Squirtle can't learn howl. At level 1 he knows Tackle and you have the choice of adding a TM and EM.
4) The Ability is not something random you can add. Squirtle's abilities happen to be Torrent or Rain Dish.
5) The Badge section needs to be left blank or have actual badges, there is no such thing as a disneyland badge.
6) Your battle style needs to be how you handle battle situations with pokemon.

Since ya told me you editted this, I came to check it out.
The history could use maybe one or two more sentences, and possibly move the picture up to the "Looks" section, instead of having it immediately after your pokemon starter, though these are just recommendations.

It seems like the application is correct to the template.

I must stress the second thing said by Liara. It's breaking a rule, rule breaking has consequences you wouldn't like. :/

Well, have fun with your character!

It is APPROVED. :3