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PostSubject: Trainer Red   Trainer Red H6Q0F8zWed Nov 30, 2011 4:02 pm

Name: Red (Ketchum) Ash
Nickname: Reddy
Age: 10
Gender: Male
Rank: New
Trainer Birthplace: Hoenn, Mossdeep City
Battle Style: Very Fierce
Looks:Trainer Red Trainer
Personality: (What your Character Acts like, His Likes, and Dislikes, must be at least 1 paragraph)
History: (Background Story of your Character, must be at least 1 paragraph)
Badges: (New Trainers leave blank, earn through RP)
Items: 5 Pokeballs(TMs, HMs, Medicine, etc. New Trainers leave blank.)
Money: $15,000 (Do not change)

Personality: Red is a guy who loves spaghetti and meatballs. He doesn't like bedtime. He acts like any other person in the whole wide world. His favorite hobbies are: betting, go karts, computers as well as Science. History: Red really wanted to become a pokemon trainer when he was 6 but his mum woudn't let him. He tried to be like Steven, The Hoenn champion. Steven inspired Red to do what he did. He went out into Route 201 once, showing off to his friends. A level 3 Zigzagoon attacked him. Luckily, he had a Psyduck, which he lent off his friend. He fought the Zigzagoon and fainted. The friend moved away to Sinnoh and he said: "Keep the Psyduck Red! I don't need it!" Badges: (New Trainers leave blank, earn through RP)
Items: 5 Pokeballs Money: $15,000 Pokémon: (New Trainers choose 1 starter)
Nickname Psyduck
Gender Female
Level: 5 Moves: Scratch, Water Sport Ability Drizzle Personality: Jolly Exp: 0

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PostSubject: Re: Trainer Red   Trainer Red H6Q0F8zWed Nov 30, 2011 6:34 pm

Alot alot alot of problems
1: We don't do canon characters

2: A enlarged back sprite isn't really Looks, try this site for a picture http://animecharactersdatabase.com

3: Personality is in the wrong place and not much of one. Add how he acts, what his normal emotions are and such. Like:
Red is a guy that doesn't like spaghetti or going to bed because.......
Explain why your character doesn't like certain things and why he does like some things. Explain how he feels being around pokemon, humans, ect.

4: History isn't really much of a history. Explain who people are, what made him want to be a champion, ect. A good history is normaly about 2 paragraphs with 5-6 good sentences each though we'll settle for one long paragraph of around 10-12 sentences
Here's some examples
My main character's history, I don't expect anyone's history to be so long
Alice's character's history
Another member's character
A staff member's character
Several examples, each different but to show you what I basicly mean

5: Keep the areas separate so we can read the app
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PostSubject: Re: Trainer Red   Trainer Red H6Q0F8zWed Nov 30, 2011 9:29 pm

Ok.
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