third trainer

name: Kay Sanders
nickname: -
age: 16
gender: male
birthplace: Sinnoh, Twinleaf
battle style: Allways trying to lure the enemy into a trap
looks:

personality: He is a nice guys who likes art and museum's and likes all pokemon and treats them with respect the only thing that he cant do is watch a happy family (see history)

history: Kay was raised by a family who were rich. But one day he heard his father screaming at the telephone. Kay's father had a huge company and a man kept calling with all kind of threats that if he did not sell the company to him he would do something horrible. His father kept saying no so something happend. It was a night before Kay would go on his adventure he heard a strange noise and woke up, he jumped out of bed and went to his fathers and mothers room. When he arrived there he was in total shock his mom and dad where bleeding heavily he quickly called an ambulance but when they were in the hospital they both died of blood loss. Kay was so upset with this he decided to wait for his journey until his parents were buried. On the funeral a man went to Kay and told him his father had left something for him it was a pokemon he wanted to give kay for his adventure. It was a turtwig, it was Kay's only thing that he still had of his parents. So after the funeral he went on his adventure to look for the people who did this to his parents and to make a dream of his father come true to become a gym leader.

Items: Metal Coat, 5 pokeballs
Gym badges: -
Pokeballs: 5
Money: 6,500

Pokemon: turtwig
Nickname: -
Gender: male
Level: 10
Moves: tackle, withdraw, absorb
Ability: overgrow
Personality:kind

can someone please approve so i can start an adventure with SK

Alright, so everything here seems to be fine, except for just one major error that is throughout the post. There are multiple instances where the sentences' first words are not capitalized, and this isn't completely appealing. Also, the character's name isn't capitalized at all in the history, nor is the location "sinnoh, twinleaf." If you go in and change these, alongside the single typo "allways," I'll gladly approve this awesome character :3

i hope it is allright now

Sorry for not posting about this the first time, but I did just notice this. You miscapitalized "He" in one of the sentences [Quote #1 Below], and there is a runon [Quote #2].

Quote 1:
On the funeral a man went to Kay and told him his father had left something for him it was a pokemon He wanted to give kay for his adventure.

Quote 2:
It was a turtwig it was Kay's only thing that he still had of his parents.

better now?

Preetttyyy much. Approved.