Trainer

Name: Derik Thomas
Nickname: None
Age: 11
Gender: Male
Rank: Trainer
Birthplace: Hoenn Petalburg City
Battle Style: Offensive
Description: Derik has long brown hair that covers his eyes. His eyes are blue. He is 5ft 3in tall and weighs 99 pounds.
He usually wears a white t-shirt with jeans.He has black tennis shoes. His skin is normal colored. He is athletic. He has scars on his right arm.
Personality: Derik likes to get stuff done quick but will take his time if one of his friends, family, or pokemon get hurt. Likes- get things done quick, pokemon, blue, running Dislikes- death, his pokemon getting severely hurt, thieves, Beedrill
History: Derik was born in Petalburg City and is the son of John and Emily Thomas. When he was 7 and exploring the woods behind his house he got jumped by a wild beedrill and got scars on his right arm. He got his Ralts when he rescued it from a mightyena when he was 9. When he turned 11 he decided to go on a pokemon journey.
Badges:
Items: Five pokeballs
Money: $6200

Pokemon: Ralts
Nickname: Lizzy
Gender: Female
Level: 10
Moves: Growl, Confusion, Calm Mind
Ability: Telepathy
Personality: Shy
Exp: 0

Can you make the description and history just a bit longer?

ok

I made it longer

(Try not to double-post. XD)

They're still a bit short... But, since this is your first trainer application, I will accept this. But try and make it even longer in the future, okay? The history, personality, and description is usually a block paragraph about 7 lines (think of the lines as 'enters' when typing), okay? Anyways, this is approved unless a higher power says otherwise.

thanks