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PostSubject: Drake Phantom   Drake Phantom H6Q0F8zSun Jan 25, 2015 1:43 am

|~ Gen. Information ~|
Aliases / Names:
Drake Phantom
Age | Birthplace | Gender:
16
secret lab in Laverre City
Male
Trainer Rank:
Aura trainer
|~ Characterization ~|
Appearance:
Drake:
Personality:
Drake is head strong plain and simple he think's his way correct and only way. He is also usually down talking everyone he meet's pointing out there weaknesses rather then there strength's.  He much rather talk to his Pokémon then most other people.  Though if caught at the right time is calm nice and collective, this is usually while he is meditating but, toward his Pokémon he is nice kind and cheery and love's to play with them.  Though being a half breed of Pokémon and human it would be sort of hard not to see why he prefers Pokémon over human's.  He doesn't really see human's as any better than he is but he tends to get quite and shy around them.
Battle Style:
Drake see's battling as an opportunity to show who's superior.  he attack's head most of the time letting his Pokémon do what they want to defend them selves.
Past Experience / History:
3rd person history:

|~ Inventory ~|
Badges:
~Kanto~
~Hoenn~
~Johto~
~Sinnoh~
~Unova~
~Kalos~
~Other~

Money: $6,200
Items:
05x Pokeballs
05x Rare Candies
01x Lucky Egg
01x Oval Stone
01x Egg Move Stone (Teaches Compatible EM)
10x Special Pokeball Seals

|~ Pokemon ~|
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Species: Lucario
Nickname: N/A
Gender: Male
Level: 15
Experience: 0
Ability: Inner focus
Personality:
Lucario is a reliable friend he's always there to cheer other's up, and love's to train and fight he is also very protective of his little brother Riolu, though in battle's he has a tendency of getting out of controllable in battles, when he is like this he won't listen to any order's at all going completely wild and unpredictable.
Moves:
Extreme speed
Dragon pulse
Close combat
Aura sphere
Foresight
Quick attack
Detect
Metal claw
Counter
Feint
Power-up punch
[tm] focus blast
[em] Bullet punch
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Species: Riolu
Nickname: Ray
Gender: Male
Level: 10
Experience: 0
Ability: Inner focus
Personality:
Ray is always happy, he love's to help his brother Lucario.  He like's to seem all big and tough though when some one threatens him he run's back behind either Drake or Lucario who's ever closer.
Moves:
Foresight
Quick attack
Endure
Counter
[tm] shadowclaw
[em] Mind reader

Drake Phantom Chikorita
Pokemon:Chikorita
Gender: Female
Level: 16
Ability: Leaf Guard – Prevents the Pokemon from receiving status afflictions in strong sunlight.
Moves:
- Heal Pulse
- Ingrain
- Tackle
- Growl
- Razor Leaf
- Poisonpowder
- Synthesis
Personality: Chikorita is an energetic Pokemon, although she noticeably suffers from seasonal depression and tones down in bad weather. At those times she can be grumpy and anti-social, a far cry from the adventurous and positive soul that she is otherwise.
Experience: 0

Sparkling Egg (Hatches into a shiny of one of these Pokemon: Buneary, Torchic, Togepi, Happiny, Fletchling, or Bunnelby)


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PostSubject: Re: Drake Phantom   Drake Phantom H6Q0F8zSun Jan 25, 2015 5:17 pm

Although I don't mind the idea of a hybrid person, I feel as if Drake's personality and history could have more improvement. Personality-wise, how has being what he is affected him? Does he resent people for being what he's not? Why does he prefer Pokemon over people? As for history, you do well to highlight and describe the important day of Drake starting his journey, but there are so many other things that could be explained. What were Mr. Finch's motivations? Why was Blake being trained? Why does the facility exist? In the end, Drake thanks Mr. Finch for "everything", so does that mean they're on good terms? I probably wouldn't have liked the person that constantly took my vitals and made me fight in painful, unfair duels. So, how did they become friends?

This app has a lot of potential, but I feel as if the details need to be fleshed out just a little more. You probably don't need to answer everything I've laid out, but I do want some more insight into the history and personality, the questions are there as prompts for things you could cover ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Drake Phantom   Drake Phantom H6Q0F8zSun Jan 25, 2015 6:10 pm

Since the changes have been edited in, approved unless stated otherwise.
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