Akuma Taigākabu toreburu7 Posts : 686 Location : between no and where
| Subject: Drake Phantom Sun Jan 25, 2015 1:43 am | |
| |~ Gen. Information ~|Aliases / Names:Drake Phantom Age | Birthplace | Gender:16 secret lab in Laverre City Male Trainer Rank:Aura trainer |~ Characterization ~|Appearance:- Drake:
Personality:Drake is head strong plain and simple he think's his way correct and only way. He is also usually down talking everyone he meet's pointing out there weaknesses rather then there strength's. He much rather talk to his Pokémon then most other people. Though if caught at the right time is calm nice and collective, this is usually while he is meditating but, toward his Pokémon he is nice kind and cheery and love's to play with them. Though being a half breed of Pokémon and human it would be sort of hard not to see why he prefers Pokémon over human's. He doesn't really see human's as any better than he is but he tends to get quite and shy around them. Battle Style:Drake see's battling as an opportunity to show who's superior. he attack's head most of the time letting his Pokémon do what they want to defend them selves. Past Experience / History:- 3rd person history:
Drake woke up on his bed, in his metal room. It looked much like a solitary confinement cell but, with the fact it had a T.V. games cases strewn about a bright colored bean bag chair, pool table, maple book shelf, and a bright colored yoga mat, it livened the place up. He found a tray with a chesto berry on top of oatmeal with some moomoo milk next to it and a tasty looking rose bud next to it. After he ate his breakfast the door opened as a scientist named Mr. Finch came in with his clip board of today's schedule. You see Drake is not a human in most aspects. Drake is part Pokémon part human, he was made through human science. They wanted to make a hybrid for a long time. Most of the other subject's didn't make through the first day before they died. "So, Mr. Phantom today we're going to practice your aura ball today." Mr. Finch said smiling taking Drake's vitals' quickly. Drake knew Mr. Finch was really only worried about him since he was made from his own strand of DNA and the Lucarios' who he trained with many time's. Though at first they were both just Riolu's (In a basic kind of way). He was really being trained to defend wild Pokémon but, lately they were also training him to do a little bit of aura trainer stuff now that he was a lucario and could control his aura a lot more then when he was a Riolu. Other than that they were good friend's they were a lot like father and son, he was his only real friend but also the furthest, he often got to talk to the Lucario and they often meditated together.
Drake was blown across the field by the pure blooded Lucario he has trained with since he was nothing more then a Riolu gajinka. "Again" Mr.Finch said over the intercom that looked into the training field. Drake stood up wobbly. The Lucario though wasn't going to let him hit once at all. He ran up and jabbed him in the side harshly. The scientist on the other side looked at a computer screen that hung over the arena showing lucario's status. Lucarios adrenaline was out the chart's meaning that he was going to be in responsive to any of his commands. Drake ran around the field yelling in terror as the lucario kept shooting aura ball's his way. Drake quickly slid back the way he came. he stood still for a second to catch his breath. He took one breath in deeply as an aura ball started to charge slowly as he held his hand's apart and slightly dragging them away from each other as it got bigger and bigger. The lucario started to charge his own but, it was too late as Drake shot his off it slamming into the lucario sending him flying and slamming into the wall. The scientist put the dazed lucario in his poke ball. Mr. finch ran in smiling. "You did it you passed the test" he said hugging him tightly. The other scientist walked over and handed him Lucario's pokeball and a Rilou's.
Drake stood there a bit confused. Till Mr. Finch spoke again. "Your ready to go on you're own journey Drake, you can finely leave this place." he said quickly handing him a pokedex a map and a lucario headed back pack. Mr. Finch lead him out of the lab and out side to the warm sunlight and sweet smelling flower's. "Thanks' Mr. Finch for everything" he said before heading off to start his journey.
|~ Inventory ~|Badges:~Kanto~ ~Hoenn~ ~Johto~ ~Sinnoh~ ~Unova~ ~Kalos~ ~Other~ Money: $6,200 Items:05x Pokeballs 05x Rare Candies 01x Lucky Egg 01x Oval Stone 01x Egg Move Stone (Teaches Compatible EM) 10x Special Pokeball Seals |~ Pokemon ~|Species: Lucario Nickname: N/A Gender: Male Level: 15 Experience: 0 Ability: Inner focus Personality:Lucario is a reliable friend he's always there to cheer other's up, and love's to train and fight he is also very protective of his little brother Riolu, though in battle's he has a tendency of getting out of controllable in battles, when he is like this he won't listen to any order's at all going completely wild and unpredictable. Moves:Extreme speed Dragon pulse Close combat Aura sphere Foresight Quick attack Detect Metal claw Counter Feint Power-up punch [tm] focus blast [em] Bullet punch Species: Riolu Nickname: Ray Gender: Male Level: 10 Experience: 0 Ability: Inner focus Personality:Ray is always happy, he love's to help his brother Lucario. He like's to seem all big and tough though when some one threatens him he run's back behind either Drake or Lucario who's ever closer. Moves:Foresight Quick attack Endure Counter [tm] shadowclaw [em] Mind reader Pokemon:Chikorita Gender: Female Level: 16 Ability: Leaf Guard – Prevents the Pokemon from receiving status afflictions in strong sunlight. Moves:- Heal Pulse - Ingrain - Tackle - Growl - Razor Leaf - Poisonpowder - Synthesis Personality: Chikorita is an energetic Pokemon, although she noticeably suffers from seasonal depression and tones down in bad weather. At those times she can be grumpy and anti-social, a far cry from the adventurous and positive soul that she is otherwise. Experience: 0 Sparkling Egg (Hatches into a shiny of one of these Pokemon: Buneary, Torchic, Togepi, Happiny, Fletchling, or Bunnelby)
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Fox Demon Avaritia12 Posts : 3342 Location : On her train, her hype train o3o
| Subject: Re: Drake Phantom Sun Jan 25, 2015 5:17 pm | |
| Although I don't mind the idea of a hybrid person, I feel as if Drake's personality and history could have more improvement. Personality-wise, how has being what he is affected him? Does he resent people for being what he's not? Why does he prefer Pokemon over people? As for history, you do well to highlight and describe the important day of Drake starting his journey, but there are so many other things that could be explained. What were Mr. Finch's motivations? Why was Blake being trained? Why does the facility exist? In the end, Drake thanks Mr. Finch for "everything", so does that mean they're on good terms? I probably wouldn't have liked the person that constantly took my vitals and made me fight in painful, unfair duels. So, how did they become friends?
This app has a lot of potential, but I feel as if the details need to be fleshed out just a little more. You probably don't need to answer everything I've laid out, but I do want some more insight into the history and personality, the questions are there as prompts for things you could cover ^^ |
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Fox Demon Avaritia12 Posts : 3342 Location : On her train, her hype train o3o
| Subject: Re: Drake Phantom Sun Jan 25, 2015 6:10 pm | |
| Since the changes have been edited in, approved unless stated otherwise. |
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