Subject: Trainer applcation Mon May 27, 2013 2:09 am
Name: Isaac Siegik Nickname: can it be Isaac? :I Age: 13
Gender: Male
Rank: Psychic
Birthplace: Azalea Town, Johto
Battle Style: Uses mainly offensive moves and rarely defensive or something like sand-attack
Looks: Black hair, plain white shirt, brown eyes, pfft shoes that look like uh well shoes, pants that are blue and look like pants, uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh skinny, I'm just trying to get 2 paragraphs in here ._., eh his shirt has a square on it WAIT EVEN BETTER A RECTANGLE WAIT NO AN OCTAGON BWHAHAHHAHAHA!!!!, he has a face a nose ears hands 2 to be exact he has pupils oh he has feet he doesn't wear socks (shoes are bad enough) and that's it I tried.
Personality: Shy, paranoid, dislikes snow, mountains, caves, towers with wild Pokemon, graveyards, and shoes. Likes ruins, books, Pokemon (who doesn't?), candles, sticks, and blahghghghghgh
History: He was born and raised in Azalea Town, he got his first Pokemon from his aunt (which was an Abra) he developed his love for candles when his deceased mother lit one every night before he went to bed (he was afraid of the dark) seeing one shine in the dark makes him feel happy. I tried tomake a paragraph I'm a terrible writer ;n;
Badge s:
Items: 5 Pokeballs
Money: $6,200
Pokémon: Abra
Nickname: none Gender: Male Level: 5 Moves: Teleport and Confusion Ability: Inner focus Personality: Timid Exp: 0
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Lapis Lazuli
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Subject: Re: Trainer applcation Mon May 27, 2013 2:56 am
I love this. I would probably approve it for the laughs, but no. Even if I was still part of the staff; No.
youarereta98
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Posts : 606 Location : Common I'm a ghost, I can be anywhere.
Subject: Re: Trainer applcation Mon May 27, 2013 3:02 am
1: Dont need a nickname, it is optional.
2: psychic is not a rank
3: your missing a paragraph for looks
4: you even admitted that your trying to simply fill it in. If your having that hard of a time, find a picture.
5: your personality is not a paragraph.
6: your background is not a full paragraph.
7: you can have a TM and HM for your pokemon.
8: there are multiple spelling and Grammar mistakes in your app
Try again, this time add as much detail as you can think into everything your write about. Your ability to write is only limited by your ability to imagine what it is your writing about.
Ghytuoise
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Subject: Re: Trainer applcation Fri Jun 07, 2013 3:01 am
okay so I have to have proper spelling, more detail, and longer paragraphs? WELL WON'T THIS BE SO MUCH FUN :D and sorry about the psychic thing, I know what I'm thinking of but... Is it an "Aura Trainer"?
youarereta98
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Posts : 606 Location : Common I'm a ghost, I can be anywhere.
Subject: Re: Trainer applcation Fri Jun 07, 2013 3:24 am
Aura Trainer is a thing, yes
Bryan
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Subject: Re: Trainer applcation Mon Jun 10, 2013 9:03 am
Oh God I would so approve this priceless little creation.
*pats Ghytuoise on the head*
Ghytuoise
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Subject: Re: Trainer applcation Mon Jun 17, 2013 8:45 pm
Name: Isaac Siegik Nickname: can it be Isaac? :I Age: 13
Gender: Male
Rank: Psychic
Birthplace: Azalea Town, Johto
Battle Style: Uses mainly offensive moves and rarely defensive or something like sand-attack
Looks:
Personality: Shy, paranoid, dislikes snow, mountains, caves, towers with wild Pokemon, graveyards, and shoes. Likes ruins, books, Pokemon (who doesn't?), candles, and sticks.
History: He was born and raised in Azalea Town, he got his first Pokemon from his aunt (which was an Abra) he developed his love for candles when his deceased mother lit one every night before he went to bed (he was afraid of the dark) seeing one shine in the dark makes him feel happy. I tried to make a paragraph I'm a terrible writer ;n;
Badge s:
Items: 5 Pokeballs
Money: $6,200
Pokémon: Abra
Nickname: none Gender: Male Level: 5 Moves: Teleport and Confusion Ability: Inner focus Personality: Timid Exp: 0 Sorry but I didn't really have time to revise this or add on to it, also I can't seem to find out how to add a picture on here.