Kurai torēnā new trainer

Name: Kurai torēnā
Nickname: dark aura
Age: 13
Gender:Male
Rank: dark aura experienced trainer
Birthplace: Sinnoh, sunny shore
Battle Style: shady and high accurcy little power moves
Looks:

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Personality: Kurai is a bit of a perfectionist. He can be pessimistic and gloomy.Kurai is a obscure character nobody Knows his past realy.
Kurai hates the "Hero" publicity hogs. He is the complete opposite .so he can be evil and very alluring.

History: Kurai started off as a regular Trainer and was awful at doing it. He was taunted and thrown around for not being able to catch anything . So he joined a branch off of team rocket.He found out that he had been signed up as a servant grunt so he quit. He kept the rattata he was given to fight with. That kept his Fight up.Him and Rattata he named scoundrel had ran down the road to a bus stop to go to twinleaf in Twin leaf he had gotten a capsule with a red and white ball he opened it and a little baby pichu had came out the note said- Dear Trainer,
My name is professor rowan here is your fist pokemon.In all the confusion he had forgotten to pick up his pokemon when he had joined.Kurai had improved since then.ratta refused to evolve

Badges: Coal badge,Forest badge

Items: 5 Pokeballs

Money: $15,000 (Do not change)

Pokémon

Pokémon: Rattata
Nickname: scoundrel
Gender: Male
Level: 21
Moves:

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Ability: Run Away
Personality: shady
Exp: 0

Pokemon: Pichu

Gender:female

Level:14

Moves:

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ability: static

personality: joyful

EXP:0

By Dark Trainer do you mean Dark Aura Trainer?

yes

So change it to Dark Aura....
If Rattata is level 21, it should be Raticate unless it doesn't want to evolve.

fixed told story

You just made their nickname Dark Aura, not their trainer class like I asked.

opps sorryi fixed that

Even though the personality has 5 sentences it doesn't really seem deep, could you add more and fix the spelling mistakes?

did i fix it

Good enough, approved