Angel Roy [Done]

|~ Gen. Information ~|
   Aliases / Names:
   Angel Roy

   Age| Birthplace | Gender:
   Age: 16
   Birthplace: Fuschia, Kanto
  Gender: Female

   Trainer Rank:
   Pokemon Coordinator

   |~ Characterization ~|
   Appearance:
 

   Personality:
    Angel is a very mysterious girl in the way that she likes to keep to herself a lot. She isn't necessarily shy, more anti-social than anything. Angel just happens to have a problem voicing her opinions and thoughts, which is why she just chooses to keep them to herself.  She usually only opens up to her (and other) Pokemon, and in these occasions, she is a very kind and gently spirit that cares greatly for each and every Pokemon she meets. When meeting strangers she will only give her first name as she prefers it when other people don't know much about her. Once she opens up, she is sometimes very sarcastic and witty, appreciating a good joke every now and again.

  Angel likes to believe that Pokemon and people are one in the same, though even she herself is unsure as to why it is easier for her to trust Pokemon than it is for her to trust people. Growing up knowing that she was abandoned effected her more than she had realized as she grew to fear that everyone would abandon her, making her not want to form these relationships in the first place.

Overall, She is a quiet teen looking for her place in this world of Pokemon. She aspires to be top coordinator someday as she figures this will help her progress as a human being and finally give her the ability to be open to all of those she meets. When she is in contest, she sometimes likes the idea of dawning a mask as to hide her face as well as to present a certain elegance as she loves masquerades and the like. Angel retains a very good heart even though she doesn't show it.

   

   Battle Style:
   Angel, when she does, battles very strategically and intelligently. She likes to play onto the enemy’s weakness and exploit any available advantage. Angel prefers to use psychic, dark, and ghost types but branches out just to expand her team. When battling, she makes sure to keep a strong mind at all times and not to let anything get to her. No matter if the opponent is known for being strong or is wielding a legendary Pokemon, she will give it her all no matter what. Angel likes to deploy status effects whenever possible to weapon her opponents and take them down easier though when seeing the opportunity, she let her Pokemon attack with all the strength that they can muster.

   Past Experience / History:
    As an abandoned child, Angel was left at the doorstep of a home of two adults whom took her in and raised her. Angel grew up knowing that they weren’t her real parents but she always thought of them as if they were. She was very unsure of who to trust though, leading her to be a very quiet person when it came to most things. While she played by herself most of the time, she couldn't help but wonder why her parents abandoned her in the first place. She wasn't sure if it was because they didn't like her or if maybe they just didn't feel like caring about her. This lead her to believing that eventually everyone would abandon her if they had the opportunity to do so, which caused her to be very cautious when meeting anyone new.

  Growing up though ,she had gained a fascination in the idea of pure elegance as a preteen. This was all birthed during one day that her mother had been watching a Pokemon contest on the television and Angel just so happened to have been peeking from her shoulder. The coordinators had been dressed in dazzling outfits and their Pokemon had been dressed to the nines as well. From this day forward, she tried her best to be as elegant as possible, even going as far as wearing dresses casually. Her mother thought this would be a great way for her to bond with her so she figured she would help her achieve her dream as much as she could.

 After one day of wandering off and getting lost at the age of fourteen, Angel was ambushed by a duo of Electabuzz and she had no Pokemon at the time. The Electabuzz had been destroying trees and wreaking havoc everywhere. The wild Pokemon spotted her and she wasn't sure what to do at all.  At this moment, she wasn't sure if she could trust people or Pokemon anymore. After losing all hope, a random Ralts approached her and used Confusion on the Electabuzz, this making them fight each other and giving them a chance to escape. Ralts followed after the girl as she ran away as he knew he knew he wouldn't be able to face the Pokemon himself as well. Angel and the Ralts had successfully escaped from the Electabuzz though they were still lost in the forest. The girl was very grateful for the Ralts saving her and having experienced such a thing restored her faith in Pokemon but not so quite the human race.

 Due to having encountered the Pokemon out in the middle of no where by itself, Angel guessed that the Ralts must have been abandoned from its parents as well, making her feel as if though she finally had something in common with someone. The Ralts had lead her home and her parents decided to let her keep it, later figuring out that his name had been Freed.

 Freed and Angel did many things together though their dream had been to compete in a competition as Freed also grew to liking elegance in the same way that Angel did after they had gotten to know one another. After man days of practicing and even studying, he two would go on to do their best to complete that goal as they bonded. It was from one day forward that Angel finally decided that she would become an official Pokemon Coordinator just like the ones she had seen on television and be the best that Pokemon History had ever seen.

   |~ Inventory ~|
   Badges:
   ~Kanto~
  ~Hoenn~
  ~Johto~
  ~Sinnoh~
  ~Unova~
  ~Kalos~
  ~Other~

   Money: $6,200
   Items:
   05x Pokeballs
   

   |~ Pokemon ~|
   Species: Ralts
   Nickname: Freed
   Gender: Female
   Level: 12
   Experience: 0
   Ability: Synchronize
   Personality:
   Shy - Freed can be very careful when approaching people, only being open towards people that he knows though is very expressive around Angel.
　　　Moves:
　　　-Growl
　　　-Confusion
　　　-Double Team
　　　-Teleport
　　　
　　　TM: Psyshock
      EM: Misty Terrain

Appearance:
Question: does the character actually have weapons on her?

Battle Style:
Couple of extra spaces that aren't necessarily (such as between the word "No").

History:
I think the history, overall, is a really good base, but it really only depicts a few events. Surely there is more than one cause to the chr growing distrust towards everyone, and no explanation behind why she had such a fascination with elegance is given. I also can't discern when (or where) the Ralts was met, or if there was any tension between the pokemon and trainer on their first meeting as opposed to the pokemon simply assisting her and then suddenly becoming her friend and partner (especially given her issue with trusting strangers, etc). Angel's sudden knowledge of Ralts' abandonment is also unexplained, nor is the events of the day that inspired her to finally be an "official Pokemon Coordinator."

Overall, there's a really good character in the works here. There's a magnificent base; the history just needs a bit more expansion/explanation [I may or may not say something about the personality down the road; I'm still debating on that to myself] o3o

Dragon Kurai wrote:

Appearance:
Question: does the character actually have weapons on her?

No, I just had trouble finding a picture without any weapon

Dragon Kurai wrote:

[Battle Style:
Couple of extra spaces that aren't necessarily (such as between the word "No").

Yeah, I use a word document to type up my posts and stuff and sometimes it doesn't catch things like that. I think I cleaned them up.

Dragon Kurai wrote:

History:
I think the history, overall, is a really good base, but it really only depicts a few events. Surely there is more than one cause to the chr growing distrust towards everyone, and no explanation behind why she had such a fascination with elegance is given. I also can't discern when (or where) the Ralts was met, or if there was any tension between the pokemon and trainer on their first meeting as opposed to the pokemon simply assisting her and then suddenly becoming her friend and partner (especially given her issue with trusting strangers, etc). Angel's sudden knowledge of Ralts' abandonment is also unexplained, nor is the events of the day that inspired her to finally be an "official Pokemon Coordinator."

Overall, there's a really good character in the works here. There's a magnificent base; the history just needs a bit more expansion/explanation [I may or may not say something about the personality down the road; I'm still debating on that to myself] o3o

I threw in some more stuff as I see what you meant. There were definitely some holes in the story. Also added in a bit on the personality just in case :)

Hopefully fixed everything up

Personality:
That one-in-the-same comment though (don't change it, just had to comment on it o3o). Overall, I'd like to see a few more interests and dislikes, just so there's a bit more to her personality. You could use what we already know to define a few of those if you want o3o

History:
Most of these are minor things, but there are a couple of major questions to be pondered. If you have any questions, feel free to post them in a response.

1. I'm still curious as to the incentive of the Ralts to save a random stranger that he/she didn't know. Was it just that the Ralts didn't like seeing innocents beaten up, or was it for personal gain, etc?
2. How does a wild pokemon ambush result in loss of trust in humanity? Did it, perhaps, remind the girl of another incident where someone she trusted betrayed her, reinforcing the idea (which could be another addition to the history if you want o3o)?
3. I wonder if you have a backup reason behind how Angel could've guessed the Ralts was abandoned? A pokemon living in the wild isn't necessarily the best reason to presume it was abandoned; the pokemon could've reached an age he/she left. (If that makes any sense)
4. How did Ralts lead her home if he/she didn't know where her home was to begin with? Also, how did Angel learn of his name? Did he, in some way, communicate it, etc?
5. How did the Ralts establish the same dream as Angel? Was this simply because she's his trainer, or did he also become infatuated with the idea of competing?
6. The "one day" in which Angel decided to be an official cordinator is unexplained. Perhaps the migration of this sentence is possible, or the removal of it entirely given the rest of her history explains her dream.

["He knew" is repeated twice in the same sentence]
[I think you mean "many" in "After man days"]
[I think you meant "the" in "he two would go"]