Training in Petalburg Woods!

A Male Level 4 Poochyena had appeared walking care-free around the tall grass.The Poochyena had taken notice of Wally and Seedot and aggressively growled before leaping at Seedot.The Poochyena was very territorial and he had attacked anyone who had dared to approach his so called domain.

Wally was stunned by the sudden threat by Poocheyna. "Seedot!!" He yelled as he saw Poocheyna leap at it. Seedot, luckily, panicked and dodged the move by running in the opposite direction. Seedot turned to Wally, as if it were eager to run away. "No, we're not going anywhere!" Wally ordered. Seedot whined and turned to Poocheyna. "Seedot, Bide!" Seedot glowed red as it got ready to endure the pain for a little while.

Poochyena charged with it's only move a bit satisfied that the Seedot was afraid.Poochyena slammed onto Seedot with Tackle throwing it back a meter or two.

~Error -.-
Don't edit that post, try again below this one. This is a trial thread, after all. You can't say you hit Seedot even though it is using bide and is unable to move for a couple of turns, the opposing person will have to include that it hit in their post. Don't worry. It's not too much of a problem, a tricky spot, actually.

Poochyena satisfied that the Seedot was afraid of him charged recklessly at the Seedot with tackle.

[That's better, just be a little detailed next time.]

Wally was not happy with this, he though he made a silly move, but boy he hadn't. That was the only damaging move it knew, the other ones being Growth and Harden. This was the reason why wally wanted to train Seedot so much. Seedot was unable to move as it was storing energy. Seedot couldn't even look as it saw Poocheyna charging. Seedot began crying before Poocheyna reached it halfway! Poocheyna hit Seedot, and Seedot was sent literally flying away. Seedot slammed to a tree, and came down, still on the game. "Hold on, Seedot!!" Wally screamed from a side. Seedot was still storing energy, so it couldn't move.

[Like that, get me? Just that little incident I tried to explain thoroughly. Describe how it moved, how the land reacted, what it hoped, what it was thinking, more importantly, what move he was using and HOW he was using it. I know you explained that but be a little detailed, and don't forget. Remember to read the rules too, as a mod, might come in handy in your future tests.]

Poochyena raised it's head and he began to charge towards Seedot once again with a fiery look on his eyes as Poochyena was determined to win this battle.Poochyena's trampling feet caused a lot of dust to emerge from the ground and Poochyena jumped a bit and used his only move tackle to strike Seedot.

Seedot, being unable to move through Bide, and also being weakened by the last move, was hit for the second time this battle. Seedot was sent a few feet back, and it growled. Seedot then charged at Poocheyna with bide! It's speed seemed to have doubled, it came rapidly fast. The ground below sent flying rocks and dust, and Seedot's usually soft feet crushed the ground as it went. "Go, Seedot! Bide!" Wally yelled from the side, happily. Seedot, charging, hoped to send Poocheyna flying away this time, for revenge in what Poocheyna did to it a little while ago.

Poochyena flinched at the sight of the previous defenseless Seedot who was charging at him at a great speed.The Seedot hit the Poochyena and sending him flying until Poochyena hit a tree causing tons of damage.The Poochyena had fainted from the powerful attack of Seedot and it was a victory for Seedot.

Seedot has gained 4 EXP from defeating Level 4 Male Poochyena.

Wally was proud of his Seedot, he smiled and picked it up. He was not done training yet, but he figured Seedot needed some relief before going for another battle. Wally was very sensitive, he took out a berry from which Seedot had got, and fed Seedot. After a short break, he took Seedot again. Seedot was begging for mercy, Wally giggled and told Seedot that it will be alright. He kept smiling and listening to the tune as he looked around for another wild pokemon. He saw that Seedot was scared, but he didn't bother to cheer him up anymore as he believed that without training, Seedot was useless on his team, he didn't want that, nor did Seedot. Seedot kept whining as Wally saw a wild _________ walking close by.

Zizagoon walked around in zig zag directions in his own little world as he travelled through the tall grass.Zigzagoon had not taken notice that he was spotted by Wally and Seedot.Zigzagoon had smelled some berries and he followed the scent which led him to Wally.Zigzagoon carelessly and with his eyes closed crashed into Wally which made the little Zigzagoon mad.

Level 3 Male Zigzagoon.

(Nightmare, there is a fine line between "Detailed" and "Unnecessarily long, boring, agonizing, drag, waste of time to read, makes-you-want-to-rip-your-eyes-out-and-eat-them, etc.". It's better in any RP situation to post nice and pithy things that get the point across, rather than drawls of completely unnecessary nonsense. You can even detail them just as much as a post ten paragraphs long, but it just doesn't take up quite as much space. I mean,

Nightmare wrote:

the beautiful, tall, huge tree.

What the heck? Also, the "error" that you "caught" earlier wasn't really much of an error at all; Tackle's accuracy is 100 and Seedot doesn't have any evasiveness raises, and Poochyena didn't have any accuracy decreases. Therefore, Poochyena couldn't have missed so it wasn't GMing to say it hit. Also, you missed a real error- Abyss never edited Seedot's EXP after it beat the Poochyena. You failed to mention this in your post. Perhaps this thread can be used to evaluate not only Abyss, but you as well...)

((He talked to Abyss about the EXP in the CB. Also the rules DO STATE the attacker isn't allowed to say a attack hit, no matter what the stats are))

@Qboy: Hey, it's none of your business to judge my RP. I'm not so good at it, just a little imaginative yet so poor at wording things. If it's boring for you to read, just don't read it. If you feel I need improvement, why don't you teach me how to RP? I think I can spot out a hell lot more of flaws than you did. She's my student, I'm training her the way I was RPing, leaving space for the others to join in. Well, tackle problem, can't say you hit it and sent it a few feet back, then it can say it hit it and killed it or something. That's why I always RP telling I attempted to attack and not I attacked, even though the accuracy of my move is 100. Hell, I think just around every move my pokemon used in my gym battle against you, had 100 accuracy, I missed it sometimes though it was 100 accuracy. I told Tsu in chatbox to add the exp, and she did so. Besides, I don't think any of this is your business, it's me training Tsu to be a mod. Just what on earth have I done to you, anyway? -.-

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"Whoa!" Wally cried. Zigzagoon maybe small but it was bulky enough to make him fall. Wally noticed the anger in Zigzagoon. "Uh, Seedot?" He called. Seedot made noises to annoy Zigzagoon, trying to get it to Seedot and not Wally. Seedot did that and used Bide again, knowing this was the only damaging move he knew.

Zigzagoon felt something else moving on the other side and turned around and sighted Seedot who was starting to use Bide.Zigzagoon ignored him and raided where the berry scent last came from.Wally's bagpack.Zigzagoon tracked his bag pack and when Wally was down,Zigzagoon started raiding his bag pack in search of the berries.

"Hey!!" Wally called, getting up. He saw Zigzagoon was going through his berries, so he decided not to disturb this one. "Alright, have them." He muttered and looked over at Seedot. It was using bide so it couldn't move. Poor guy He thought. I should really set to training him well, and soon![/i] He approached Zigzagoon with caution. "Little fella, will you accept a battle from us?" He asked, sounding awkward. He knew Zigzagoon cannot understand human language, but he tried anyway.

Zigzagoon looked at the human in front of him before squeaking."Zig zagoon!" not understanding the human but he got irritated ith the human so Zigzagoon used growl on the irritating human before going back to his gluttonous ways and digging for more berries which Zigzagoon loved.

"Goon!" Wally muttered. "Zig Zag Zig!" He imitated the wild Zigzagoon, an idiotic thing to do but he did it anyway, "Zag Zig Goon!" He kept getting on it's nerves, he wsn't enjoying this, either but he wanted a battle anyway. Seedot was almost finishing his bide which was of no use since it wasn't attacked at all. "See.." Seedot struggled to talk. Wally looked over, and seeing Seedot get free, Wally decided not to back down. "Zig Zag!"

Zigzagoon got irritated that the human was trying to speak Pokemon language and it charged at Wally with a tackle because Wally had getting on his nerves for a long time and not taking notice that Seedot had finished Bide.

"Be happy I fed you the berr-" Wally was interrupted by Zigzagoon charging at him, "eeeess!!"
He came to the end of 'berries' as he was tackled by Zigzagoon and flat on the ground. There was nothing Seedot can do but watch, the only damaging move he knew was bide which required some damage to be done to him. "SEEEE!!" Seedot yelled, he couldn't watch his master get pushed around! Seedot used bide and began charging at a tree, hitting it hard a couple of times.

Zigzagoon satisfied with the trainer on the ground flat.Turned around to see Seedot charging towards him and squeaked 'Zig' in a high voice.

Seedot had hit the tree hard enough, he charged at Zigzagoon, with all it had left. like always, the ground blasted rocks as Seedot stamped it, but he knew he was much weaker than before, for he had hit a tree real hard and didn't know this will even work.

Zigzagoon was too shocked to even move and Seedot struck Zigzagoon hard enough to send him flying.Zigzagoon tried it's hardest to stand up but failed to do so resulting in a victory for Seedot.While 2 shuffling noises were heard at the sight of the fallen Zigzagoon.

Seedot has gained 3 EXP and has leveled up to Level 8.No new moves are learned.

[Don't give out wins easily next time. I'll send this topic to Luna to see how you did on your first test.]