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PostSubject: Luke "Arcainine" Phantom   Luke "Arcainine" Phantom H6Q0F8zSat Aug 23, 2014 3:22 pm

|~ Gen. Information ~|
Aliases / Names:
Luke Phantom
{nn} Arcanine

Age | Birthplace | Gender:
16
Male
Kanto, Pallet town

Trainer Rank:
Aura Trainer

|~ Characterization ~|
Appearance:
Luke:
Personality:
Luke is aggressive during intense situation and believes that the only way to solve most problems are through head on action.
Though out of battles he is loyal to his friends and family and always does good when he is able too.  Considered to be the best of friends and the worst of enemy's he has a lot of both really.  People find him easy to like and talk too and often come out the first time they meet.  The enemy's are just the people who hate everyone to try to make things difficult.
Battle Style:
Luke fights head on and cares little for complex strategy's.  He usually the first one to start a fight and the last to lose one.  The most common strategy is to wait the last the last second to dodge and then usually allows little recover time.

Past Experience / History:

|~ Inventory ~|
Badges:
~Kanto~
~Hoenn~
~Johto~
~Sinnoh~
~Unova~
~Kalos~
~Other~



Money: $11,200 *Do NOT change
Items:
05x Pokeballs
10x Rare Candy


|~ Pokemon ~|
Luke "Arcainine" Phantom 058
Species: Growlthie
Nickname:
Gender: Male
Level: 15
Experience: 0
Ability: Intimidate
Personality:
Brave,smart,and head strong
Moves:

Luke "Arcainine" Phantom 058
Species: Growlthie
Nickname:
Gender: Male
Level: 10
Experience: 0
Ability: Flash Fire
Personality:
Shy, Curious, and adventurous
Moves:

Luke "Arcainine" Phantom 698
Species: Amaura
Nickname:
Gender: Male
Level: 9
Experience: 0
Ability: Refrigerate - Increases the power of Normal-type moves by 30%. It then changes those moves to Ice-type.
Personality: This Pokemon knows how to take care of himself, and he seems content in life. That being said, he enjoys adventure and isn't afraid of taking risks and helping others do the same when he's given the chance.
Moves:

Luke "Arcainine" Phantom Larvitar
Pokémon: Lavitar
Nickname: -
Gender: Female
Level: 7
Experience: 0
Moves: Bite, Leer, Sandstorm
Ability: Guts
Personality:
Lavitar is a coward of first grade. She hides behind everything that doesn't move, and only fights there is no other option; mostly trying to do something so she can flee the hell away.

Luke "Arcainine" Phantom Lucario
Pokemon: Lucario
Gender: Female
Level: 30
Experience: 0
Ability: Inner Focus
Moveset:
- Extreme Speed
- Dragon Pulse
- Close Combat
- Aura Sphere
- Foresight
- Quick Attack
- Detect
- Metal Claw
- Counter
- Feint
- Power-Up Punch
- Swords Dance
- Metal Sound
- Bone Rush
Personality:
A bit obnoxious, lucario is a bit stubborn. She doesn’t really find ease in listening to her trainer’s commands, which is likely why she’s put up for adoption a lot. She hasn’t found that one trainer she’d approve of yet. The pokemon acts tough, but on the inside is a heart of gold and generosity. The pokemon finds comfort in being around younger pokemon that she can poke around, which is usually where her true nature shows.


Last edited by Pup on Sat Aug 23, 2014 8:28 pm; edited 6 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Luke "Arcainine" Phantom   Luke "Arcainine" Phantom H6Q0F8zSat Aug 23, 2014 5:18 pm

Alright, so this looks good, but I just have a very light problem. Even though the history meets minimal guidelines, I would really recommend putting more details and events into the history; the character isn't exactly a human, after all; I feel as though more explanation would be necessary... Also, how does he hide his tail and ears?
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PostSubject: Re: Luke "Arcainine" Phantom   Luke "Arcainine" Phantom H6Q0F8zSat Aug 23, 2014 5:49 pm

You told me you edited, and though I'm appreciative of the explanation you provided in regards to hiding his appearance, there still needs to be more explanation. How was he created? By what means did a project to create someone like him start? Surely there would be administrative and moderative visits by those who created him. Did he come to view someone as a parent? Was he told the truth of who he was, and how did he respond?

There's just so many things you can add that will give a deeper explanation of the character's past that I feel should be there to justify being partially a pokemon. If you need a couple of examples to look at to aid your history, check out Avaritia's character Evangeline, or Chris, Arenzo, and Naga of my character lists to get an idea of how we explained abnormalities.

EDIT: I changed the last word to a few for clarity.
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PostSubject: Re: Luke "Arcainine" Phantom   Luke "Arcainine" Phantom H6Q0F8zSat Aug 23, 2014 8:32 pm

Someone directly copied and pasted what I wrote. Shame to you (not really) >:l
Anyway, as long as you learned to better write at least a bit it works out.
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