Akuma Taigākabu toreburu7 Posts : 686 Location : between no and where
| Subject: Luke "Arcainine" Phantom Sat Aug 23, 2014 3:22 pm | |
| |~ Gen. Information ~|Aliases / Names:Luke Phantom {nn} Arcanine Age | Birthplace | Gender:16 Male Kanto, Pallet town Trainer Rank:Aura Trainer |~ Characterization ~|Appearance:- Luke:
Personality:Luke is aggressive during intense situation and believes that the only way to solve most problems are through head on action. Though out of battles he is loyal to his friends and family and always does good when he is able too. Considered to be the best of friends and the worst of enemy's he has a lot of both really. People find him easy to like and talk too and often come out the first time they meet. The enemy's are just the people who hate everyone to try to make things difficult. Battle Style:Luke fights head on and cares little for complex strategy's. He usually the first one to start a fight and the last to lose one. The most common strategy is to wait the last the last second to dodge and then usually allows little recover time. - Past Experience / History:
Luke wasn't born the normal way; by that, I mean he was born the way in which normal humans are: by a father and mother. He was made through science, a little biochemistry of DNA and other hereditary things (I don't want to get into). The project was funded by a private company, and, since then, it has remained such a way. He was created to be the bridge between Pokemon and humans. You see, scientists were obsessed with finding out how to make Pokemon and trainers more compatible; there was no real, deeper motivation than that. There was little dispute about the manipulation of DNA and how it was against natural oder because they saw it as the only way to obtain the desired result.
Luke was a mixture of human and Arcanine DNA. At one point he was unstable, as his heart would beat too quickly or too slowly, or his temperature would be exceedingly high or low. Once he was stabilized, he was allowed to come from the pod that kept him alive. They began to teach him things, such as words, motor functions, and how to handle Pokemon and treat them with respect, and he learned these things kinda quickly. The head scientist, Borak, frowned upon the person that Luke imprinted on; he was the person who spent time to teach him what he needed to live in the outside society, not Torak. Borak tried several times to influence Luke, all of which lead to failure.
When the scientists brought him into publicity, they had him hide his ears and tail through a cloak with a hood attached. He was confused at first, as he thought that the world was all metal, lights, knobs, switches and other mysteries, but he realized that the world was not as he had been taught; it wasn't kind and friendly; it was unforgiving and cruel. He realized this fact when he saw a Pokemon, in particular, a growlithe in desperate need of a Pokemon center. Everyone was ignoring the growlithe.
Luke persuaded the scientists to take the Pokemon to the Pokemon center, and from there, it was given to some guy called Oak. Oak said that it was one of his Pokemon who managed to escape, as well as that he had a younger brother. He said they were in desperate need of a trainer, Luke unable to forget that little Pokemon on the sidewalk all beaten up with everyone ignoring it. He couldn't forget it because he could hear the cries for help, could feel the Pokemon's pain, and could feel its agony. By the time that the lab closed for good due to a lack of research funding by the company, he was 16; he was old enough to start his Pokemon journey.
Luke, before the closing of the facility, was told to go to Professor Oak, of whom gave him his first two Pokemon. Both were growlithes. Oak smiled, as even through his cloak, the professor could recognize Luke as the little kid who helped out the growlith. The two growlithes were still there, and now they belonged to Luke. Oak spoke to Luke before he left that he, "should not be ashamed of who and what you are; others may knock you down, but don't bow down; stand tall and give them a reason to treat you with respect." Luke had felt better, empowered by Oak's words on his way out of the door. He shoved his hooded cloak into his bag, starting his journey proud of what, and who, he was; however, he still uses the cloak in some cases. He was never told the reason why he was created, or that he was even created by science, but it didn't matter to him as he held pride and is now determined to show others what respect he deserves.
|~ Inventory ~|Badges:~Kanto~ ~Hoenn~ ~Johto~ ~Sinnoh~ ~Unova~ ~Kalos~ ~Other~ Money: $11,200 *Do NOT change Items:05x Pokeballs 10x Rare Candy |~ Pokemon ~|Species: Growlthie Nickname: Gender: Male Level: 15 Experience: 0 Ability: Intimidate Personality:Brave,smart,and head strong - Moves:
Bite Roar Ember Leer Odor Sleuth Helping Hand [TM]Toxic [EM] Heat Wave
Species: Growlthie Nickname: Gender: Male Level: 10 Experience: 0 Ability: Flash Fire Personality:Shy, Curious, and adventurous - Moves:
Bite Roar Ember Leer Odor Sleuth [TM] Protect [EM] Fire blitz
Species: Amaura Nickname:Gender: Male Level: 9 Experience: 0 Ability: Refrigerate - Increases the power of Normal-type moves by 30%. It then changes those moves to Ice-type. Personality: This Pokemon knows how to take care of himself, and he seems content in life. That being said, he enjoys adventure and isn't afraid of taking risks and helping others do the same when he's given the chance. - Moves:
Growl Powder Snow Thunder Wave [EM] Discharge
Pokémon: Lavitar Nickname: - Gender: Female Level: 7 Experience: 0 Moves: Bite, Leer, Sandstorm Ability: Guts Personality: Lavitar is a coward of first grade. She hides behind everything that doesn't move, and only fights there is no other option; mostly trying to do something so she can flee the hell away. Pokemon: Lucario Gender: Female Level: 30 Experience: 0 Ability: Inner Focus Moveset:- Extreme Speed - Dragon Pulse - Close Combat - Aura Sphere - Foresight - Quick Attack - Detect - Metal Claw - Counter - Feint - Power-Up Punch - Swords Dance - Metal Sound - Bone Rush Personality:A bit obnoxious, lucario is a bit stubborn. She doesn’t really find ease in listening to her trainer’s commands, which is likely why she’s put up for adoption a lot. She hasn’t found that one trainer she’d approve of yet. The pokemon acts tough, but on the inside is a heart of gold and generosity. The pokemon finds comfort in being around younger pokemon that she can poke around, which is usually where her true nature shows.
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Dragon Kurai12 Posts : 4447 Location : On the hype train .3.
| Subject: Re: Luke "Arcainine" Phantom Sat Aug 23, 2014 5:18 pm | |
| Alright, so this looks good, but I just have a very light problem. Even though the history meets minimal guidelines, I would really recommend putting more details and events into the history; the character isn't exactly a human, after all; I feel as though more explanation would be necessary... Also, how does he hide his tail and ears? |
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Dragon Kurai12 Posts : 4447 Location : On the hype train .3.
| Subject: Re: Luke "Arcainine" Phantom Sat Aug 23, 2014 5:49 pm | |
| You told me you edited, and though I'm appreciative of the explanation you provided in regards to hiding his appearance, there still needs to be more explanation. How was he created? By what means did a project to create someone like him start? Surely there would be administrative and moderative visits by those who created him. Did he come to view someone as a parent? Was he told the truth of who he was, and how did he respond?
There's just so many things you can add that will give a deeper explanation of the character's past that I feel should be there to justify being partially a pokemon. If you need a couple of examples to look at to aid your history, check out Avaritia's character Evangeline, or Chris, Arenzo, and Naga of my character lists to get an idea of how we explained abnormalities.
EDIT: I changed the last word to a few for clarity. |
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Dragon Kurai12 Posts : 4447 Location : On the hype train .3.
| Subject: Re: Luke "Arcainine" Phantom Sat Aug 23, 2014 8:32 pm | |
| Someone directly copied and pasted what I wrote. Shame to you (not really) >:l Anyway, as long as you learned to better write at least a bit it works out. Approved. |
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