Connor, Mystery Trainer

(This will retire Sarah)

|~ Gen. Information ~|
Aliases / Names:
Name: Connor Alena
Nickname: N/A

Age | Birthplace | Gender:
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Region of Birth Sinnoh
City of Birth Eterna City

Trainer Rank:
Aura Trainer/Elementalist(Fire)

|~ Characterization ~|
Appearance:

Personality:
Connor is a kind and caring man, to Pokémon and people alike.  He, like his Pokémon, will do almost anything to protect people and Pokémon.  Connor enjoys battling for fun, and can be a bit silly at times, but can be serious when the need arises.  While a large fan of fire type Pokémon, he enjoys a good swim very now and then.

Battle Style:
Connor fights mainly on defense, however when on offense will not hold back.  He is a very talented actor as are his Pokémon, which is a trait often used in battle.

Past Experience / History:

Childhood:

Teenage Years:

Age 20-Present Day:

|~ Inventory ~|
Badges:
~Kanto~
~Hoenn~
~Johto~
~Sinnoh~
~Unova~
~Kalos~
~Other~

Money: $6,200
Items:
05x Pokeballs

|~ Pokemon ~|
Species:  Charmeleon
Nickname:
Gender: Male
Level: 25
Experience: 0
Ability: Blaze
Personality: Charmeleon is a protective Pokémon, and would do almost anything to protect people and Pokémon alike.
Moves: Scratch, Growl, Ember, Smokescreen, Dragon Rage, Scary Face, [TM] Dragon Claw, [EM] Ancient Power

Species: Quilava
Nickname:
Gender: Female
Level: 25
Experience: 0
Ability: Blaze
Personality: Quilava is a Pokémon of little courage.  However, when angered, Quilava loses all sense of right and wrong, and loses control.
Moves: Tackle, Leer, Smokescreen, Smokescreen, Ember, Quick Attack, Flame Wheel, Defense Curl, [TM] Fire Blast, [EM] Crush Claw

Template wrote:

Starting above the basic pokemon:
Contact a staff member BEFORE you begin working on an application in which your pokemon are shiny or legendary. You may only have a total of 2 pokemon in your party at the start of your journey, and their levels may NOT exceed 25 in total.

You are starting with two pokemon, following the guidelines; however, you are starting both at a level of 25, and as such, are not following the guidelines in regards to starting above basic pokemon.

I notice that for your trainer class you have "Elementalist" listed under the element of fire. Whereas this is logical based on your starter pokemon, your history, as well as other fields, all fail to mention this about the trainer. I would also, personally, recommend that you not use an elementalist as your trainer class and stick just to one, likely aura trainer since that is the other listed.

As spoken earlier, your history fails to mention anything about the trainer's abilities, such as wielding aura or fire in any sort of form. I also feel as though your history is quite a jumper; it jumps from one time to another with a huge gap left inbetween. I would appreciate a more thorough history that flows better to show character development and reference on, at least, a broad scale the character's abilities and other references you have in it.

Your personality is a bit, for a lack of a better term on my part, akward. It holds two contradictions: Connor can be silly, but can be serious; and he likes fire types, yet enjoys swimming. Whereas these can be explained easily, any details that can do so are left out. Using "can be" for his personality also implies that there is another kind of behavior the trainer exhibits, yet this is also left out.

Summary:
1. Pokemon levels total at 50 instead of 25
2. History leaves out important information
-- Aura trainer capabilities
-- Elementalist capabilities
-- Reference to Shade (likely another chr)
-- Details on time gaps
3. Trainer rank should be set to one
-- Aura trainer, or
-- Elementalist
4. Personality should be expanded upon
5. Personality holds a couple of contradictions that can be fixed by the completion of point four