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PostSubject: Finally at Oreburgh.   Finally at Oreburgh. H6Q0F8zSat Jul 21, 2012 7:43 pm

After a couple of days travelling, Zane and his pokemon - Chimchar and Eevee, finally arrived at the first city in Sinnoh with a gym - Oreburgh! It was a bit dusty here and there, but that's because of the coal mines. The first thing Zane did, when he entered the city, was to go to the Pokemon Center...Not only to heal up his pokemon, but to take some new ones! He got a message on the Poketch, saying he has a Snortus and two random eggs waiting for him. Zane let all his pokemon out, and then started looking for the Pokemon Center. After a couple of minutes, they found it, and went straight in. The trainer gave all his pokeballs to the nurse and asked if there are any pokemons and eggs for him.
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PostSubject: Re: Finally at Oreburgh.   Finally at Oreburgh. H6Q0F8zSun Jul 22, 2012 2:46 pm

"Let me check after we fix up your pokemon," the nurse said, putting the pokeballs into a machine. A few moments later, she took them out and handed them to the trainer. She then proceeded to checking a computer to see if there were any logs on what pokemon or eggs had arrived. "May I ask your name," she asked, obviously needing it to check the records.
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PostSubject: Re: Finally at Oreburgh.   Finally at Oreburgh. H6Q0F8zSun Jul 22, 2012 2:48 pm

"My name is Zane.Zane Wade. There should be 2 eggs, and one Snortus for me." He said, while putting his pokeballs back at his belt.
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PostSubject: Re: Finally at Oreburgh.   Finally at Oreburgh. H6Q0F8zSun Jul 22, 2012 2:54 pm

"Alright, let me check," she said once again, typing a few words into the computer. It was more than obvious that it was the trainer's name, as that was what she needed to access the records. "Ah yes, your pokemon are in your PC. Have a nice day," she said, gesturing to the nearby PC if that was what Zane was looking for.
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PostSubject: Re: Finally at Oreburgh.   Finally at Oreburgh. H6Q0F8zSun Jul 22, 2012 3:30 pm

Zane walked to the PC and booted it up. He logged into his account and got his pokeball and the two eggs. After that, he gave his new pokemon - Snorunt, all of his Rare Candies(5), so he can level up(to lvl 14), so he can become stronger for the fight that will be happening soon.
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PostSubject: Re: Finally at Oreburgh.   Finally at Oreburgh. H6Q0F8zSun Jul 22, 2012 4:42 pm

The snortus, now strengthened, had learned two moves! [Bullet Seed, and Headbutt]! Congratulations.

"Is there anything else you may need," the nurse asked joyfully.
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PostSubject: Re: Finally at Oreburgh.   Finally at Oreburgh. H6Q0F8zSun Jul 22, 2012 5:49 pm

"Well, yes..I would like to keep these pokemon in here, until I return with my Eevee. We're going to train!" Zane and Eevee got out of the Pokemon Center and went outside of the town, searching for a good spot for training. "Aha! I know just the place! Let's go Eevee!" Zane started running, and after that Eevee followed his action too! After a couple of minutes they were right infront of a small flatland with a few trees around it, and one right at the center of it. "Alright, you ready? I am going to train with you, just so you don't feel lonely!" Eevee, was ready, and just waited for the trainers' command. Zane was thinking a lot, until he finally decided what they should train on. "Okay Eevee, first off we are going to make a couple of laps around the flatland, just so you can get a little bit faster! After that, we are going to train your Tackle on those threes over there, and finally, we'll get training on this!" Zane took out a TM from his backpack. The Machine contained the move Hidden Power. It could help them in the battle with Roark - Oreburgh Citys' gym leader Roark! "Okay, let's start!" After that, the trainer took off his hoodie, streched a bit and started running. Eevee was just looking at him, when she remembered she has to run! The pokemon started following his trainer, and after a while she caught up to him. They were on teh same pace, maybe Eevee was a bit faster, probably because she was on four legs, while Zane - on two. They made the first lap, and continued with a second. After a while, they made the second lap. The flatland, acctually wasn't that small, Zane thought it was, so they got tired on the third lap.. "Okay, let's take a quick rest, okay?" Zane said, while trying to breathe and...take a good rest! He took out the remaining seven Pecha berries, and gave two to Eevee,,"I hope you like them sweet!" After that he ate one too. The second part of the training, was to train her Tackle on the tree at the center. "Alright, you know what is coming next! Since we just made a few laps, you should be a bit faster! That should add a bit more power to your move. Now, use Tackle on the tree!" Eevee lowered her head, and charged right at the center of the tree. After she hit it, the pokemon was knocked back a little from the hit. It was quite strong, even a few leaves came off. "Again! Use Tackle!" Eevee stood up, shaked her head a bit, and charged again. The hit was the same. This proccess was repeated a couple of times, when finally Zane interrupted her move. "Okay, enough! You're going to get a headache. Let's continue on." The boy took the disc and touched Eevee's forehead, which should make her use Hidden Power. "Um...Okay... Now use Hidden Power!...I guess.." Zane was unsure if it worked, because it was his first time teaching a TM to a pokemon. Eevee looked at Zane, and right after that, she started creating a small green ball.. The ball started enlarging, and soon after, two smaller orbs formed around the bigger one. For a finish, the three balls were shot at the trainer, which then exploded. Zane was knocked back, all smoky, but glad the move worked. "Great job Eevee! We are ready for the gym battle!"
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PostSubject: Re: Finally at Oreburgh.   Finally at Oreburgh. H6Q0F8zSun Jul 22, 2012 6:20 pm

[Since you spent 50 words on just looking for a place to train, and some dialogue for that, I cut out what is said to be 30 words of dialogue...]

Pokemon Used:
Eevee

Word Count [Total]: 595
Word Count [After Cut]: 565

EXP [Total]: 56.5
EXP [Rounded Down]: 56

Eevee Gained 56 EXP!
Eevee got to Lvl 12, with no remaining XP!
Eevee learned SandAttack!
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PostSubject: Re: Finally at Oreburgh.   Finally at Oreburgh. H6Q0F8zSun Jul 22, 2012 7:44 pm

"Okay, now it's time to challenge the leader - Roark!" He just got to the Pokemon Center, took his pokemons and eggs, and wandered off to the Oreburgh Gym, where he intended to challenge the leader.
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