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PostSubject: Koori Region[under construction atm srry :P]   Koori Region[under construction atm srry :P] H6Q0F8zTue Oct 16, 2012 11:06 pm

Name: Koori
Location: The very south of the Earth
Area Type: Region
Pokemon Found: Any starter from any region in any form, Pikachu, Raichu, Pichu, Any customs wanted by the creator to be here XD, any ice type, and Magikarp.
Landscape: Mainly Ice and Snow, but at the highest grounds are grassy fields. There are a few volcanoes, none of which are active.
Looks: Koori Region[under construction atm srry :P] Kusarno(elavation map, brighter color=higher land)
Notable Places: The 8 Gyms, Arctic Museum
History: This icy place is home to many Ice Pokemon and not much is known about it. What is known, however, is that it is the most advanced region in technology, and the people here like to remain hidden from the world.


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PostSubject: Re: Koori Region[under construction atm srry :P]   Koori Region[under construction atm srry :P] H6Q0F8zWed Oct 17, 2012 12:53 am

The two custom regions already on the site seem to be enough. Threads barely ever make their way to the custom regions, so I doubt there will be much activity on it, and I find it rather pointless to add this as a third.

On top of that, this is a whole new region. Location is very unacceptable, please actually be specific and descriptive with it. In pretty much every region, there are many more notable places other than the 8 gyms, in order for it to be more authentic, consider adding them. The landscape lacks detail as well. Sinnoh has an icy and snow packed town, but not all towns are like that. Routes and towns differ from place to place, what kind of trainer wants to explore a region that is the same no matter where they are? Make it more different depending on the area, environment, ect.

Speaking of area, there can't be towns without names. Sure there is a dot for each, but they need to be named as well. Also, history is very unacceptable as well. An entire region can't be summed up in mearly a few words. Even if not much is known of it, it is inhabited. You can tell the history of the native Pokemon and people, how it was discovered, technological advancements, ect.

I do not believe another region should be made, but if you make these corrections, perhaps the staff may find it fit to consider it.
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PostSubject: Re: Koori Region[under construction atm srry :P]   Koori Region[under construction atm srry :P] H6Q0F8zWed Oct 17, 2012 12:54 am

thanks for the advice :P
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PostSubject: Re: Koori Region[under construction atm srry :P]   Koori Region[under construction atm srry :P] H6Q0F8zSat Jan 18, 2014 6:15 pm

Good God... Another region? No. Just no.
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