Not Afraid (Craig Marshall Only)

Nonsense Humor:
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It is 10:00 in the morning at Pallet Town where the 14 year-old teenager, Craig Marshall will start his journey as a Pokemon Trainer and put an end to the endless boredom of his life along with his best friend and starter, Charmander. The items are packed, Craig is dressed, Charmander is ready for a fight and they are ready to show the world what they are made of. The world is dangerous. Wild Pokemon and evil gangs are everywhere. Fearless, nothing can stop the two from being the best.

Charmander chooses to stay inside his Pokeball as Craig gives his farewells to his family. He goes outside his house and looks around the town very familiar to him. He smiles but before he could take a step, he heard familiar voices of kids his age. He turns around and sees his friends waving their farewells to him and wishing him a good luck and safety. In return, he smiles.

He turns around and starts walking towards the grass patches at the narrow exit of Pallet Town where Wild Pokemon lurk and New Trainers like him train their respective Pokemon. After a few steps, he stood at the grass patches as he looked around only to be challenged by a/an...

The pokemon that appeared was a beedrill. It didn't seem to be paying much attention to him, though when it saw him it was preparing to attack...

beedrill, Male, Lv 12

Punctuation and grammar errors?

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Charmander's instincts allowed him to know that a Wild Beedrill is about to attack his trainer. A red laser from his Pokeball took him out as he rushed in front of his Trainer and prepared to attack as well. Before giving orders, Craig takes his updated Pokedex out and records the Wild Beedrill's Pokedex Entry.

"#015 Beedrill - Its best attack involves flying around at high speed, striking with poison needles, then flying off."

"We have the advantage. Careful though, Beedrills has the tendency to use the hit-and-run tactic according to the Pokedex." said Marshall. "Ember would be a good move." he added. Charmander clenched his fists, excitement can be seen on his face as small fireballs aimed towards the foe came out of his opened mouth.

((Not sure what you meant by that question, but I'm presuming that you want to know if you had any errors???))

The beedrill, to busy in its attempt to attack, wasn't able to dodge this incoming attack. He got hit by the fireballs, and they burned. It hopped a couple of times, trying to push off the attack. It tried to retailiate by using Fury Attack on the charmander, using some, but not alot, of force as not to tire itself.

((When using plural, such as "beedrills", it would be "have" instead of "has". If you had said "beedrill", then "has" would have been fine. Also, you put a comma after sentences within quotes if you are saying something like "he said" or "she said".

Example:
"Go get that pokemon," Mark said.

Hope it helps.))

OOC: Yes, I was asking if you found any errors in my grammar. It helped. Thank you.

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The duo smiled upon the success of the attack but Craig's smile turned into a frown when he saw the Beedrill prepare for what seems to be a Fury Attack. "In the games they faint right away if Ember hits successfully," he said. After he finished his sentence, Charmander was able to step sidewards and evade the attack. "Good, another Ember," ordered Craig as the Fire Pokemon opened his mouth again and unleashed small fireballs directed towards the flying foe.

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OOC: If you spot another mistake in my grammar, usage of words, punctuations, and the likes, please do correct me every time you can.

((Not exactly sure if Fire Pokemon should be capitalized, but as I said, I'm unsure...))
((The fact you actually referrenced the pokemon games makes me go lol))

The beedrill dodged the incoming ember, hoping that as it did it wouldn't impact the effectiveness of its attack. After it dodged, it immediately went after the charmander, preparing for it's attack.

[Random number 2-5... Number is... 3...]
((3 Hits if the attack lands))
((I didn't see much error in your post, so congrats ^^))

OOC: You did not see much error but it means there are still errors. So could you tell me what those errors are? I want my every mistakes corrected if possible. I am starting to be a perfectionist. :)

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This battle is going to be a sure win for Craig. Charmander tried to jump away from the incoming multiple stabs from the foe's needles but before he could, he already got stabbed on the chest thrice. He steps away from the Beedrill and rubs his paws on the painful part. He turns around the Beedrill waiting for a command. "Never give up, Charmander! Another Ember!," commanded Craig. Charmander once again fired small fireballs towards the foe!

The beedrill was in no state to dodge the incoming attack, being as it was still in mid-attack itself. Unable to dodge, it took the hit willingly, knowing it had done at least some damage to the pokemon. It was knocked backward, and landed a foot away from it's initial standing position. Now was the time to catch or kill.

"Nintendo and Gamefreak just failed on their game. Finish him, Charmander!," commanded Craig for possibly one last time for this match. "Scratch!," he added. "Do not want to hear 'FATALITY!' from out of nowhere." he thought referencing Mortal Kombat. Hearing the command from his trainer, Charmander would grin and run towards the foe to deliver the possibly final blow to finish this match, a Scratch.

((Alright, tone it down a little with the game referrencing. I know it might be tempting, but you just confused me with that post partially...))

The beedrill, laying on the ground, was incapable of moving to dodge the attack. The charmander's scratch instantly put it out, and it disappeared.

Charmander got 12 EXP!
Charmander is Lvl 13!

OOC: :D Eh, okay.

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The little Charmander who had just won the fight pounds his chest in celebration. All of a sudden, he felt stronger as he felt more energy flowing around his veins which is a sign that he leveled up. "You won. No, we won. Nice, Charmander!," praised Craig. The fire type turns to his trainer and grins as if saying, "That their best shot?". Craig knew what that face means, Charmander is all fired up. "Here we go.," he said but before either of them can take a step, they once again get challenged.

Suddenly a pikachu walked out from the grass. It was in a feisty mood today, and was looking for a fight. It was dashing madly at the pokemon, apparently in a mood to attack quick and jump to dodge an incoming attack if one was coming.

Pikachu, male, Lvl 12

OOC: Pikachu? Male? Level 12? I love you, man. God bless you. All hail you.

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Craig erupts a huge smile seeing a Pikachu dashing out from the grass. "Holy f... Ember, quick!," shouted Craig. Charmander knew that Craig wanted this one so he has to do better than what he did from the last match. He chose to dash on all fours as well towards the dashing Pikachu as small fireballs came out from his mouth!

((What, :3))

The pikachu was hit by the ember, though it didn't seem like it did much damage because of the pikachu's speed. It had apparently sped through the attack, with a slight breeze surroudning it, which deflected some of the flame. The pikachu, somewhat more furious, packed in more force behind it's quick attack, still charging at the charmander.

Charmander could avoid that attack by simply jumping but he chose to keep dash and collide with the Pikachu, him getting hit by the Quick Attack and tumbling backwards. He managed to stand up though. "A furious electric Pokemon with a thirst for battles... Cute and cuddly... Dahah!," he thought and it prevented him from noticing that his Charmander just collided himself with the foe. "Charmander, Scratch!," Craig commanded. Charmander awkwardly did not notice that his trainer never noticed that he just collided! He also likes the way this fighting is about to go, speed-dependent and head-on. Charmander retracted his claws out and ran towards the Pikachu for a Scratch!

The pikachu was a little confused about what was happening, being that it had just had an instant headbutt into the opposing pokemon in it's quick attack, though it wasn't confused enough to not dodge. Seeing the charmander charging at it, it quickly jumped to the side, waiting for the charmander to pass by. Once it knew the charmander was by, it jumped behind it and attempted another quick attack. Strategic, this pikachu was.

Luckily, Charmander's reflexes is fast. When the Pikachu dodged, he knew the foe would attack so he immediately rolled back evading the Quick Attack early. "Nice! Scratch!," commanded Craig. Charmander would then try to use this opportunity to Scratch the foe on the back!

The pikachu didn't suspect the charmander to dodge, but it decided it would do another quick attack to combat the scratch. It knew that it would take damage, but it thought that it would be worth it in the end when the charmander was damaged as well. They were headed for another head on collision.

As predicted by both sides, they collided. Charmander did not tumble this time, he managed to keep his balance and then he threw another Scratch all by himself! "Charmander's acting on his own, he is better off on his own whenever he does this." Craig thought remembering their trainings in the past. He learned that if Charmander starts attacking on his own, leave him alone, he knows what to do. He once tried to interfere and Charmander ended up losing and never talked to Craig the whole day.

Not as though pokemon are able to openly communicate with their trainers in plain english, but if one looked at the pikachu, even for a second, they would be able to see that it wasn't giving up, nor was it about to let this charmander win. It let it hit him with the scratch attack, and waited for just the right moment before using quick attack, and using thundershock whilst attacking to create a more uncommon attack. The pikachu was now charging toward the charmander to use quick attack, with a small voltage because of the thundershock that was in front of the pikachu.

(The pikachu is using thundershock whilst charging, allowing the move to build up slightly so it can do damage alongside the quick attack)

Charmander jumped as high as he could in order to avoid the attack but in order for him to land, it is either Pikachu manages to get away or Charmander will fall on him and if it happens, Charmander would go berserk with a Scratch but if Pikachu gets away and not having Charmander fall on him, Charmander would then unleash Ember in a more powerful way.

Pikachu, recognizing the charmander's attempt to jump, decided that it would do the same. It also figured that since it was jumping, it may be a little distracted to attempt to dodge the attacks that were incoming. It jumped as high as the trainer's charmander, intent that its attacks were going to land, or at least one of them would.

The attack collided in mid-air as Charmander falls down and tumbles. He is getting roughed up and the foe getting the advantage. "Come on, Charmander. You told me once that when you are on your own, it's a sure win.," Craig thought. Charmander quickly stood up and grinned dashing towards the Pikachu who will soon land. He would go for a Scratch!

If the charmander had been knocked down by the thundershock, it was sure to take the incoming quick attack whilst it was getting up. The pikachu, slightly overconfident, added a little more force behind the quick attack, hoping to end this battle quickly. As it's vertical velocity increased, that was, as well, to add a little more punch to it.

Charmander got hit by all the attacks. He looks up to the sky and falls on his knees, followed by his body falling flat on the floor like one of those movie scenes. "No...," Craig whispered. Craig watched his fallen Charmander closely, trying to see if the stomach is moving or any signs of breathing. Could it be that Charmander had fainted or playing dead for a trap? Who knows?