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PostSubject: Rosalie Ostermann ~ Finished   Rosalie Ostermann ~ Finished H6Q0F8zWed Jul 23, 2014 10:40 pm

|~ Gen. Information ~|
Aliases / Names: Rosalie Ostermann

14 | Hoenn | Female

Trainer Rank: Pokemon Trainer/Coordinator

|~ Characterization ~|
Appearance:Rosalie Ostermann ~ Finished A684f5d0-5f71-49c8-af94-dca30d3e86b8_zpse3e864f5

Personality: Rosalie likes having cute pokemon. She loves to show them off in contests. She enjoys meeting new people and going on adventures. She hopes to make great friends and travel around the pokemon world.

Battle Style: Rosalie likes to use her opponents moves to make her pokemon look good, since she only likes contest battles. Finding her in an actual battle is rare.

Past Experience / History: Rosalie was born in a small town in the Hoenn region. Rosalie has always been attracted to pokemon that she finds cute, the one pokemon that she has always wanted to start with was a Vulpix. She decided it was time for her to begin her journey and get herself one of those pokemon. She now want's to become a top coordinator. She wants to find herself good friends as well as pokemon. She is excited to begin her journey.

|~ Inventory ~|
Badges:
~Kanto~
~Hoenn~
~Johto~
~Sinnoh~
~Unova~
~Kalos~
~Other~

Money: $6,200 *Do NOT change
Items:
05x Pokeballs
*Do NOT change the item field unless you have permission from staff

|~ Pokemon ~|
Species: Vulpix
Nickname: No Nickname
Gender: Female
Level: 15
Experience: 0
Ability: Flash Fire
Personality: Shy except when performing.
Moves: Ember, Quick Attack, Flamethrower (TM), Firespin.
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Posts : 232
Location : Traveling the Kanto

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PostSubject: Re: Rosalie Ostermann ~ Finished   Rosalie Ostermann ~ Finished H6Q0F8zWed Jul 23, 2014 11:21 pm

I would like a little more information everywhere. As of right now, you have nothing here. Her personality is simply says that she likes cute pokemon. Where it says "She hopes to make great friends and travel around the pokemon world." That isn't a personality trait, that is stating something she wishes to do. You need to add more to her! What makes her the way she is? Is she nice? What makes her angry? These are just examples, I'm gonna need to see a lot more to approve.

Now history needs a lot more info. Whats the city name? What was her childhood like? Tell a few stories from her child hood. So please add some details to this!

Edited by: Slowpoke: Vulpix's level is too high at level 15. Please reduce the level to 12 or lower, and adjust any moves accordingly. Please add ALL moves that Vulpix would naturally know by the level. This site does not have a four-move limit, and to keep things in accordance with the rest of the site, Vulpix needs all moves present.
 
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