I would like a little more information everywhere. As of right now, you have nothing here. Her personality is simply says that she likes cute pokemon. Where it says "She hopes to make great friends and travel around the pokemon world." That isn't a personality trait, that is stating something she wishes to do. You need to add more to her! What makes her the way she is? Is she nice? What makes her angry? These are just examples, I'm gonna need to see a lot more to approve.
Now history needs a lot more info. Whats the city name? What was her childhood like? Tell a few stories from her child hood. So please add some details to this!
Edited by: Slowpoke: Vulpix's level is too high at level 15. Please reduce the level to 12 or lower, and adjust any moves accordingly. Please add ALL moves that Vulpix would naturally know by the level. This site does not have a four-move limit, and to keep things in accordance with the rest of the site, Vulpix needs all moves present.