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PostSubject: Yuki Yamauchi    Yuki Yamauchi H6Q0F8zSat Jun 21, 2014 8:27 pm

|~ Gen. Information ~|
Name: Yuki, Yamauchi
Nickname: Yu, Yu-Chan, Yamauchi

Age | Birthplace | Gender:

Age: 19
Gender :Female
Birthplace: Rustboro City, Hoenn
Trainer Rank:
Rank: Breeder

|~ Characterization ~|

Appearance:
Yuki:

Personality:Yuki unlike her Pokemon has very little confidence in herself, despite her skills often doubting her abilities as a breeder and as her Pokemon trainer.

But Yuki also has another side to her, her side of curiosity and wonder, a side that often put her in danger, but with danger comes adventure! Like that time she looked inside a beedril'ls home to see how it lived, then causing her to run from said angry beedrill and in turn discovering a cave full of bright glowing gems!

It's in cases like this that Yuki is seen as just a dense idiot but when you've been stuck in a hospital for as long as her wouldn't you be amazed at every little thing about the world of Pokemon?

Likes: Cooking, Drawing, Puffins and Studying Pokemon

Dislikes: Large crowds, People who take advantage of pokemon, Deep water

Battle Style:
"Do your best it doesn't matter if you win or lose!"

Yuki's Battle style can often change with different situations where her usual opening move would be something that would rasie a stat for her pokemon, like double team but if battling a pokemon stronger then her own she could poison them our out right go on the offensive trying to make the pokemon faint before it does to much damage..

Past Experience / History:
Yuki had spent her entire life inside Rustboro City Hospital due to a heart condition, she would remember watching every year as trainers started their journey's their new life long partners by their sides. Every year wishing she could go to.

When Yuki wasn't bed ridden she often wandered over to the Pokemon wing to watch her mother work with the injured and sick Pokemon and sneak peeks at the Pokemon nursery were unhatched eggs were kept and watched until they hatched.

One day Yuki asked her mother about one of the eggs, one that was much smaller then the rest and why it still hadn't hatched for she had seen it in the nursery for as long as she could remember. Her mother explained that the egg wasn't healthy and that despite everything the hospital did it was unlikely that it would ever hatch.

Yuki was sadden by this but refused to give up on the egg like the others had so later that night she sneaked in quietly and took the egg back to her room.

So from then on when ever she had a chance she cared for the egg, read to it, sang to it and poured her feelings into the little egg, and slowly day by day the egg grew warmer.

Weeks later as the the egg was only days from hatching Yuki came down with a terrible fever, the doctors were sure she would die as her heart grew weaker and weaker.

Then on the night when the fever was the worst she pulled the egg from its hiding spot and held it close to her chest. She told the egg of her dream to go on a journey, to make friends and help cure Pokemon. She also told the egg that more then anything else she wanted it to live to make her dream its own.

With that finally said she finally lose conciseness the fever becoming to much for her.

She awoke the next morning to the feeling of something poking her face, her fever broken in the night. When she opened her eyes she sees that in the place of the egg sat a Ralts.

From that day onward Yuki and her ralts who she named Gemini were thick as thieves and were always together.

Years later with the help of advancing medicine Yuki grew stronger , no longer bed ridden Yuki decided that she would finally chase her dream and with Gemini by her side she stared on the long path of her new life.

|~ Inventory ~|

Badges:
~Kanto~
~Hoenn~
~Johto~
~Sinnoh~
~Unova~
~Kalos~
~Other~

Money: $6,200
Items:
05x Pokeballs

|~ Pokemon ~|

Species: Ralts
Nickname:Gemini
Gender: Female
Level: 10
Experience: 0
Ability: Synchronize

Personality:
Gemini is often the one who gives Yuki confidence always putting a smile on her face, she is always rushing into things witch shows her hasty nature.

Moves:
Growl
Confusion
Shadow Sneak
Double Team


Last edited by Sweet Dreams on Sun Jun 22, 2014 12:35 am; edited 2 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Yuki Yamauchi    Yuki Yamauchi H6Q0F8zSat Jun 21, 2014 10:15 pm

Sorry, I need you to put some detail into battle style, whether it's that Yuki has none or what. I'd also like more detail on her personality, something thorough that gives me a real sense of who she is.
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PostSubject: Re: Yuki Yamauchi    Yuki Yamauchi H6Q0F8zSat Jun 21, 2014 11:01 pm

Is this better?
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PostSubject: Re: Yuki Yamauchi    Yuki Yamauchi H6Q0F8zSat Jun 21, 2014 11:10 pm

The personality still feels generic and flat. I'd advise looking around at other applications to see how others write theirs. For example my own, Slowpoke, Ava, Wolfie, Hana and Mord-Sith immediately spring to mind when thinking of detailed apps although there are plenty of others.
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PostSubject: Re: Yuki Yamauchi    Yuki Yamauchi H6Q0F8zSun Jun 22, 2014 12:45 am

I normally don't have this much problem with and app even more so with Personality, but ill try and fix it up even if it takes a few dozen tries!
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