xXStitched-LipsXx3 Posts : 74
| Subject: Rose Light Sun Mar 02, 2014 7:27 am | |
| Name: Rose Light Nickname: None Age: 10 Gender: Female Rank: Trainer Birthplace: Kanto, Pallet Town Battle Style: She believes in her Pokémon, that they will do they best even if they win or lose. She battles with honor and pride. Looks: Personality: Rose is a bossy at first, but once you get to know her, you'll see that she's friendly. History: She grown up in Pallet Town with her friend Lily. The two of them began their Pokémon journey together and are now traveling the world together. Badges: None Items: None Money: $6,200 Pokémon Pokémon: Spuirtle Nickname: Crush Gender: Boy Level: 5 Moves: Tackle, Bubble, Water Gun, Tail Tip Ability: None Personality: Out going Exp: 0 |
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Dragon Kurai12 Posts : 4447 Location : On the hype train .3.
| Subject: Re: Rose Light Sun Mar 02, 2014 4:01 pm | |
| 1. The major issue is that you need more detail for your battle style, history, and personality. I don't think this meets even the minimal requirements. 2. If you haven't already, you can add an egg move to your pokemon's moveset. Just make sure to identify it by EM, etc 3. Your squirtle needs to have an ability. Each pokemon should have 1 ability or 1 hidden ability, though the one that isn't considered a hidden ability is typically used for starting trainers. |
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