Jordan Edwards

Name: Jordan Edwards
Nickname: LJ
Age: 10
Gender: Male
Rank: Trainer
Birthplace: Kanto in Pallet town
Battle Style:  LJ always likes to use his opponents weakness so he can win.
Looks:

Personality: LJ is a young and good looking boy and loves pokemon and trys to help everyone as much as he can except his rival Chris who he hates dew to Chris's bullying to LJ.
Still LJ tries to be nice to him but never works. LJ is a funny guy and is very serious as well, when he  wants to be.
History: The young boy’s life began in pallet town as a premature baby, seemingly the reason for his small size. On the day of his birth his parents (Dirk and Anna) bought him a Squirtle Pokedoll, which gave him the love for Blastoise, and it’s evolutionary line.


When he turned three his parents also bought him the second evolution of Squirtle which was Wartortle. When he was around the age of three he started having a small rivalry with a boy called Chris living in the same town.


A year before he was due to go to school he was found playing with a Aipom which shocked his parents at first but then gave them a piece of mind that he was going to be great with the small creatures known as Pokemon.


The year he was due to turn five he began school to learn all about Pokemon and how to pursue an adventure as whatever life they wanted to live. The day he first went to school he got the nickname LJ (Little John) that has stuck with him to date. His 5th birthday occurred that year and he finally got the last Pokedoll from the Squirtle evolutionary line, Blastoise.


He enjoyed school but got bullied by Chris throughout his five years at school. At school he would train with Pokemon like the rest of the students but he shined through like no other. He decided to travel to threw the region of Kanto and begin his Pokemon journey. His parents were extremely distraught but it seems like the have finally accepted the fact that their boy is all grown up.
Badges:
Items: 5 Poke Balls
Money: $6,200


Pokémon: Squirtle
Nickname: Tiny
Gender: Male
Level: 12
Moves: Water Gun,Tackle,Tail whip,Withdraw
Ability: Torrent
Personality: Tiny is a very cool pokemon and loves his trainer.
Exp: 0

1st: The first evolution of Squirtle is Squirtle (From the second paragraph of history)

2nd: He is from Pallet so, why did you say in the last paragraph of your history: "He decided to travel to the far off region of Kanto". He is in Kanto, He lives in Kanto so, really he doesn't even need to travel.

3rd: Squirtle's Ability is Torrent so, put that just before the description of the ability.

4th: Withdraw is one word

Fix these things and I guess it'll scrape through for a pass

Yeah sure I guess it'll scrape by. Approved