Cyrus Blaze6 Posts : 417 Location : Behind you
| Subject: Cyrus Blaze The Lost Warrior Mon Oct 28, 2013 12:16 am | |
| Name:Cyrus Blaze Nickname:Cyrus Age:??? Gender:Male Rank:Aura Trainer,Lost Spirit Birthplace:Sinnoh,Snowpoint City Battle Style:Specialises in Dark and Ghost types. Looks: - Cyrus Blaze:
Personality:A kind but solitary spirit. He does not speak at all and shows little to no expression. He lives to enjoy battles like he used to when he was alive. He dislikes everything evil and so does whatever he can to eradicate all evil. History:When Cyrus was born his father was away fighting for the Ice Kingdom. His mother took care of him for five years of his life, with no news of his father. Then suddenly a messgae was brought to the house where they resided. It told of the demise of the Ice Kingdom and his father. After the tears brought moments of recognition of honour. Cyrus, nine years later had finally decided to leave his mother and go on a journey to explore the world fully. The day before Cyrus left his mother had given him a package containing a single green flute. She told him that the flute was a remainder of his fathers musical prowess. She told him to remember his home and his family and to return one day. The next day Cyrus left waving goodbye to the people who had comforted him since birth.However his journey did not go on for very long as mysterious events in Eterna Forest caused his disappearance. It turns out that he had been killed and left to rot hanging on a branch on a tree. However later on through the years Cyrus had come back in spirit form roaming the many regions but only appearing when he had recognised a worthy challenge for him. Badges: Items: 5 Pokeballs Money: $6,200 Pokémon Pokémon:Spiritomb Nickname: Gender:Male Level:25 (level 1-12 for first Pokémon) Moves:Curse,Pursuit,Confuse Ray,Spite,Shadow Sneak,Faint Attack,Hypnosis,Dream Eater,Ominous Wind,Psychic,Destiny Bond Ability:Pressure Personality:Brave Exp: 0 Pokemon:Sableye Nickname: Gender:Female Level:15 Moves:Astonish,Foresight,Fury Swipes,Night Shade,Dig,Sucker Punch Ability: Keen Eye Personality:Loyal Exp:0 Pokemon:Scraggy Nickname: Gender:Male Level:15 Moves:Leer,Low Kick,Sand attack,Faint Attack,Headbutt,Stone Edge,Ice Punch Ability:Intimidate Exp:0 |
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SaxAppeal6 Posts : 424 Location : You wish you knew.
| Subject: Re: Cyrus Blaze The Lost Warrior Tue Oct 29, 2013 8:55 pm | |
| I like the direction this app is going in, but I think that for an experienced Trainer it's kind of short. Especially since his journey supposedly ended so abruptly during his "normal" life; if you can come up with 1-3 scenarios (The longer and more detailed they are, the less of them you need) where he arose to battle these challengers, or maybe how he got his Pokémon, then I think it'd be where it needs to be. |
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Cyrus Blaze6 Posts : 417 Location : Behind you
| Subject: Re: Cyrus Blaze The Lost Warrior Fri Nov 29, 2013 7:47 pm | |
| I am retracting this application. |
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Bryan12 Posts : 3201 Location : Parts Unknown
| Subject: Re: Cyrus Blaze The Lost Warrior Fri Jan 17, 2014 8:22 am | |
| Retired or moved to Denied? |
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