Persona Re: Innocent Sin RP Registration

The city of Kyokou, Japan, a small island off the outskirts of Shikoku, is highly technologically advanced and has been the leader in technology for years now. But suddenly, across the large city, random disappearances have been happening. All of the disappearances, random and placed in different areas, only have one connection. The people who disappear are fans and frequent players of the online game Innocent Sin, an MMORPG. While officials seem to be very calm about this, in actuality, they're scrambling around trying to find information. As the disappearances continue, and the city continues to fear what's to come, could you be the next one to disappear?

Here's the character form
Name:
Nickname:
Gender:
Appearance:
Personality:
Slight History(Optional):

Persona:
Social Links(If you start off knowing someone, you CAN begin with a Social Link):
Arcana:

Name: Kaoil Suika
Nickname: Sui, Kao.
Gender: Male
Appearance:

Spoiler:

Personality: Kaoil is kind and helps whoever he can find. He does have a bit of a streak of irritation towards those who take advantage of him, though. He's adventurous and will quickly try new things. He loves Innocent Sin and several other games, because, well, he's a nerd. He'd risk his life to save his friends.
Slight History(Optional): Kaoil's parents died when he was 6 in a tragic accident. He has no living family aside from his older brother, who he lives with. He inherited his love of games from his father, as his brother says.

Persona: Thanatos, but as holder of the Wild Card, he is not just limited to him.
Social Links(If you start off knowing someone, you CAN begin with a Social Link): Level 1 Social Link, The Magician, with Jonathon Montoya
Arcana: The Fool- 0

Name of Persona: Thanatos
Appearance:

Spoiler:

Arcana: The Fool
Primary element: Mudo

And now for my part in this.  Custom persona template!

Name of persona:(note, everything in Persona and the Shin Megami Tensei is based in myth.  So don't make it something compleltely random.  It has to have some basis in real myth)
Appearance:(A picture is fine, though if none are available, then a paragraph length description will do just fine)
Arcana:Which of the major arcana does this persona fall under(don't know them, a list can be found HERE  Also, just a note, Wheel of Fortune is just fortune and The World is off limits.)
Primary element: every persona besides having an arcana also has an elemental affinty.They are Agi(fire), Bufu(Ice), Garu(wind), Zio(electricity), Hama(light), and Mudo(dark).  A persona can still learn abilities for different elements, but they typically specialize in one.

Now, time for me to make my chars.

First, our villain.

Name:Quinn
Nickname:Quinn
Gender:Male
Appearance:
Personality:Very cold and calculating.  A level headed jester with a master plan.  Never loses his typical cool demenor.
Slight History(Optional):Unknown

Persona:
Social Links(If you start off knowing someone, you CAN begin with a Social Link):None
Arcana:Fool(number 0 in his deck)

And our not a villain.

Name:Jonathon Montoya
Nickname:none
Gender:Male
Appearance:
Personality:Very laid back and relaxed.  An honorable fighter who will defend his friends...yet he doubts himself sometimes.
Slight History(Optional):

Persona:Surt
Social Links(If you start off knowing someone, you CAN begin with a Social Link):Fool rank 1
Arcana:Magician

Name: Lucy Belle Pierson
Nickname: N/a
Gender: Female
Appearance:

Spoiler:

Personality: Lucy is a quiet and shy young woman, who is very intelligent and independant. She relies heavily on her common sense and intuition, which she inherited from her father. She is also very knowledgable and wise. She is great with cooking and persuasion, and seems to have her own lie detector.
Slight History(Optional): Lucy is the daughter of a very well-known private investigator. She is a straight A student and captain of her school's debate team, president of the student council, member of the drama club, and a member of the cooking club.

Persona:
Social Links: N/a
Arcana: The High Priestess

Name of persona: Tsukuyomi-no-Mikoto
Appearance:

Spoiler:

Arcana: The High Priestess
Primary element: Dark

Approved.

Name: Katsuo Hayashi
Nickname: none (at given time)
Gender: male
Appearance:



Personality:  he is shy and timd, feels like he is always letting someone down, once he makes friends(after defeating his shadow) he loyal and caring person , puts others before himself, would never leave a person behind.  But can be quite hot headed if someone threatens people who are close to him.
Slight History: was bullied and isolated, doesn’t trust anybody, feels like the weight of the world is on his shoulders, feels like everybody around him gets hurt, this is because his shadows interference.

Persona: Hama Fujin
Social Links: none
Arcana: chariot

like this but with two swords. instead of white it is extremely dark blue and where the blue is in the original picture it crimson. the wings also look more mechanical.



(as a shadow)

Your form is good, but two things. The Fool Arcana is kind of exclusive(Y'know, due to the evolution of the Arcana that tends to always happen.), I'll have to talk to Mist about it, and if you're going to make a new Persona, you really shouldn't use a currently existing Persona's picture. XD