Apollo Sinter

Name: Apollo Sinter
Nickname: Ape
Age: 20
Gender: male
Rank: Aura Trainer
Birthplace: Unova (Icirrus City)
Battle Style: Flying/Fire
Looks: https://www.google.com/search?q=Flying+fire+pokemon+trainer&client=firefox-a&hs=p8V&rls=org.mozilla:en-US:official&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ei=s_yXUa_aHu_pigLPyoGoCg&ved=0CAoQ_AUoAQ&biw=1366&bih=639#client=firefox-a&hs=0TB&rls=org.mozilla:en-US%3Aofficial&tbm=isch&sa=1&q=created+pokemon+trainers+with+a+pidgeot&oq=created+pokemon+trainers+with+a+pidgeot&gs_l=img.3...20226.24683.2.24869.15.15.0.0.0.0.71.617.15.15.0...0.0...1c.1.14.img.UxeL_eVXm80&bav=on.2,or.r_qf.&bvm=bv.46751780,d.cGE&fp=51e5ebd9acde5493&biw=1366&bih=639&imgrc=pbVTZYfOogfSGM%3A%3Bhn_6EuWCd6jvRM%3Bhttp%253A%252F%252Fimages.wikia.com%252Fpokemon%252Fimages%252Fb%252Fba%252FFalkner_with_Pidgeot.jpg%3Bhttp%253A%252F%252Fbmgf.bulbagarden.net%252Fblogs%252F28634%252Fpokemon-top-100-60-51-57550%252F%3B500%3B500


Personality: Apollo is a rough kid who just wants to fit in. He has a good side at times and then has a bad side, but only if you make him mad. He loves to challenge anyone who asks and most of all, he has to win. He has huge pride issue which is why he doesn't like to say no. When something wrong goes on he tries his best to get to the source of the problem then he eliminates it. When some one he knows gets injured(or dies) he turns into a softy and gets help/helps them.


History: When he was born he was taken away from his family by team plasma. He was drafted in their training program and was forced to be evil. On his graduation day from the Plasma school he went to do his first destruction task. When he got to the designated area he found it to be his hometown, worst of all, his hometown was destroyed. He walked over to the location of his home, all he found was a pile of rubble. In a metallic rage he kicked the rubble and fell on the ground crying. When he opened his eyes a notice a pokeball lying under a piece of wood. He grabbed it, pushed the button in and out popped a pidgeot. He swore from that day forward he would avenge his family and go after team plasma.

Badges: none at the moment

Items: 5 Pokeballs

Pokémon

Pokémon: Pidgeot
Nickname: Samson
Gender: Male
Level: 42
Moves:
-wing attack
-twister
-quick attack
-feather dance

Ability: Keen Eye
Personality: bashful
Exp: 0

Could you please put your looks link inside a spoiler, it's making the page way too wide. There are several things I see that need fixing:

1. Your personality is way too short, please add at least four more sentences to it.

2. History also doesn't meet the length requirement.

3. If I'm not mistaken, isn't your looks a cannon Gym Leader? I'm not sure if you should have a character who looks exactly like him... Unless I'm oddly mistaken and am having a strange case of having seen that trainer somewhere.

You have two weeks to comply with the post above, otherwise this will be moved as a dead topic.

BTW, that's supposed to be an actual image, not a link to google search.

yeah could this be moved to the dead topics?