CANCELLED - 04\02\2013 - Tasha Lucenda - Da Bomba - Lori

A stranger ran up to Lori. "Lori! Have you heard about the new bounty," she asked, rushing over towards her with a paper in her hands. "The bounty you can get is 1000 pokedollars! That's a lot!"

Woah! :shock: Thats a lot of money. Have you heard why she is being hunted? I want to fand Tasha as soon as possible! Are you hunting as well?

[Please learn to use quotation marks to separate dialogue in your scenes]

The girl looked at Lori. "Tasha is running from hunters, though there is something a bit mysterious about her. But who cares, capturing her is worth 1000 pokedollars!"

(I encountered a typo in my post.)
"Well, I better get going. I'm going to teach Remoraid and Omanyte Scald and teach Stone Edge to Omanyte by TM. Hmm, she could be anywhere."

The person looked at Lori. It didn't seem that she was that interested in capturing Tasha. The person left, Tasha watching closely.

Hmm, is there anything here? She's going to get off the list soon.

The piece of paper had some information. Her first name was Tasha, last name Lucenda. She only had two pokemon, and they didn't seem to be that strong. She typically were a longcoat, and she would run I she didn't want to fight back. [check bounty topic for more information]

Ok. Now where is she?

[You really should use quotation marks so I can separate dialogue from other text]

The paper gave a couple of locations as to where Tasha would be, but there was a chance that she could be anywhere. The stranger, Tasha, that was watching Lori started moving about a bit to not make herself openly known.

"What was that? Omanyte!b come out and rapid fire Stone edge!"(I want to teach TM 80)

[I would recommend waiting until you are back in regular roleplay to teach your pokemon a move]
[It looks that your post seems a bit godmoddish. I said that Tasha was attempting to blend in, and you posted your going to make your pokemon randomly fire a move, and without a direction for me to write about]

Ok. Change of roleplay. Omanyte comes out to sense anything suspicious. However, there was no sucess. (Plus, I barely get any posts in my roleplays anyway)

[Hate to be picky, but making your pokemon automatically fail at finding anything suspicious is a bit over, in my opinion. Once again, hate to be picky, but it should scope for suspicion, then the moderator have a random chance at making something random that is suspicious occur or not [which, if suspicious, is probably Tasha]]

"Omanyte! go roam around and see if you are sucessful in finding something, tell me. You can use Constrict if a pokemon attacks you. Remoraid! You are coming with me." Omanyte went dashing to find Tasha and Lori went roaming around with Remoraid.

Lori's pokemon wouldn't really see anything. Tasha was following the trainer froma distance in investigation.

"Now where is she? i can't just jump into a battle, unless..... Omanyte! Use Tackle when you see anything suspicious, like a tree or rustling bush!"(I don't want to trigger a wild battle)

Tasha listened to the trainer telling her pokemon to just randomly attack should something that was mostly normal occur. "Kinda strange," she said to herself as she hid behind a building.

"Let's ask people if they saw Tasha." thought Lori. "Omanyte! Stop attacking! Remoraid! I choose you!" Lori whispers the plan so Tasha couldn't see it.

Lori went crazy. She went in houses to ask if Tasha was seen. She climbed trees and walls. Omanyte and Remoraid were searching for Tasha so that she would be caught.
Lori didn't think she would make it.
Her pokemon were lost.
Her egg seemed frozen.
Lori thought she would get pummeled like a punching bag by Tasha's pokemon
Lori thought "Tasha must be hard to find"!

[Um, that post makes no sense. Please re-word it or re-write it altogether so I can actually read and reply]

Fixed it. Sorry if that messed you up

Sorry for double post, but this hunt has been CANCELLED