Evan Buttercup [WIP]

Name: Evan Buttercup

Nickname: E Dawg

Age: 10

Gender: Male

Rank: Dark Aura Trainer

Birthplace: Hoenn; Lavaridge City

Currently lives in: Lavender Town, Kanto

Battle Style: Attacks without regard for health for his other pokemon
Looks:

Spoiler:

Personality: All people know is that he was kidnapped by aliens.


History: When he was 7, Aliens invaded and transformed him into a big blob of humanoid shape goo. When he was 4, he gave Lori an injured Remoraid.

Pokemon: Nidorino

Level: 16

Gender: Male

Personality: Is cookoo in the head and just flat out attacks. He has a heart of iron.

Moves:Gunk Shot, Sucker Punch, Leer, Peck, Poison Sting, Focus Energy, Double Kick

Ability: Poison Point

I'm adding WIP to your title, since this trainer isn't finished. Remember to do that if you decide to save finishing a character until later.

Im ready for it to be approved

1] Dark Aura Trainer isn't a gender. This would be the rank if that's what you wnat the character to be
2] 7 is a bit young to be a pokemon trainer
3] Your looks are a bit awkward. Please make the character a human. If you really want some piece of pokemon in it, then please just make it, for example, a human with pokemon wings
4] You're missing a personality and history
5] Your pokemon is missing moves
6] "Obviously" isn't needed in the pokemon gender
7] The battle style is for all of your trainer's pokemon, not just one.

Fixed it

1] Personality says nothing about hte character or how he acts
2] The history needs to be longer and slightly more detailed
3] The battle style needs to be tweaked
4] The character's appearance is not accepted

That's all i have. I can't improve anymore.

NOT approved.