joey Catch-the-rare [DONE]

Name: Joey Catch-the-rare
Nickname: "the legendary pokemon collector" "the seeker" "the perfect friend"
Age: 16
Gender:Male
Rank: collector
Birthplace: snow point city, sinnoh.
Battle Style: countrary to most collectors joey loves to battle, he doesn't really have a battle style though
Looks: http://www.animecharactersdatabase.com/character.php?id=28741
Personality: Very friendly and kind. Curious, adventurous. Joeys main goal is to catch powerfull, legendary or rare pokemon. Joey has a lot of freinds but he preferd a girl called artemis before she disapeared, joey never believed she was dead though
Likes: Legendary pokemon, Traveling, Totodiles, Most water types, Most fire types, Most electric types,Martial arts,
Dislikes:Sentrets, Magikarp, Geodudes, Unova region,
History: Joey was a friend of artemis aten before everybody though she was dead, But knowing artemis well he knew she was alive. He started looking over whole sinnoh for her. He first spent six month looking for something that would be a clue to saying if she was dead or where she was. On the way he developed a interest in collecting legendary pokemon even if he didn't have any pokemon, One day he decided he needed pokemon help. He decided to become a pokemon collector and use his pokemon to find artemis. His first pokemon was a totodile. He later cached more but he didn't train them enough for them to be very powerfull. When he searched in all sinnoh without finding he started to search in unova.
Badges:
Items: 5 Pokeballs
Money: $6,200

Pokémon

Pokémon: Totodile
Nickname:Tsunani
Gender:male
Level: 17
Moves:
Start Scratch
Start Leer
6 Water Gun
8 Rage
13 Bite
15 Scary Face
EM: hydro pump
TM: blizzard
Ability: torrent
Personality: funny, playfull, hyper active,
Exp: 0

Pokémon: Whismur
Nickname:Echoe
Gender:male
Level: 16
Moves:Start pound
5 Uproar
11 Astonish
15 Howl
EM:circle trow
TM: fire blast
Ability: soundproof
Personality: shy
Exp: 0

Pokémon: Skarmory
Nickname:Screech
Gender:male
Level: 16
Moves:
Start Leer
Start Peck
6 Sand-Attack
9 Swift
12 Agility
EM:sky attack
TM:fly
Ability: sturdy
Personality: rude
Exp: 0

Pokémon: Tedduresia
Nickname:Roar
Gender:male
Level: 16
Moves:
Start covet
Start Scratch
Start Leer
Start Lick
Start Fake Tears
8 Fury Swipes
15 Faint Attack
22 Sweet Scent
EM: metal claw
TM: earthquake
Ability: qiuck feet
Personality: enthousastic about battling, like totodile
Exp: 0

Pokémon: Chikorita
Nickname: Leafy
Gender: Female
Level: 9
Moves:
Tackle
Growl
Razor Leaf
PoisonPowder
Ability: Overgrow
Personality: Loving, Shy, Playful
EXP: 0

DONE

If your character is done, please replace the [WIP] with [DONE] in the topic title.

srry forgot

Also, the default money is now $6,200 instead of $15,000 please change it.

edited

If I remember right, didn't you go through the whole capitalization thing with Lucretia at some point, or am I imagining things???

If not, I suggest going through your application and capitalizing what needs it to make it look somewhat proper. Also, boldening things such as "Likes", "Dislikes", or "History" makes the application easier to read and easily separable.

Also, one question. How exactly does the trainer dislike the Unova region, yet he|she is traveling in the region?

If I remember right, didn't you go through the whole capitalization thing with Lucretia at some point, or am I imagining things???

If not, I suggest going through your application and capitalizing what needs it to make it look somewhat proper. Also, boldening things such as "Likes", "Dislikes", or "History" makes the application easier to read and easily separable. edited

Also, one question. How exactly does the trainer dislike the Unova region, yet he|she is traveling in the region?

read the last sentence of history

Alright, so that solves that [I apparently didn't see the last sentence o.o].

Also, there are still a few capitalization errors.

like what?!?!

I realize it sounds picky, but "likes" and "dislikes", and half of the history.

edited

Subtracting a few other miniature errors with spelling, this seems pretty good.
Unless otherwise stated, I say approved.