Korzon Omega

name:Korzon Omega
nickname: horizon
age:13
starter pokemon: tepig
gender:mail
hair color: dark brown with dark blue streak down one side
skin tone:carmel
eye color: blue
birth place: Unova, Accumula town
battle style: fire and water
money: $15,000
rank: rookie trainer
history: Korzon looked into his fathers eyes. fear stricken in his face. the battle of my life was coming to an end. was he hurt or was he always like that. my father was a nice man. no one would hurt him. so why did they do it? he look into my eyes and said" im sorry...korzon. i tried." as he laid me on the soft grass, he looked up and started to run. he didnt look back, not for a last glance at me. a few minutes went by and then i heard it. a man, sounded of the age of 56 was speaking." hello? is some one there" he said. he walk up nearly tripping on my 1 year old body. "al be darned" he said as he picked me up and took me home. thats how my life starts at Accumula town.
looks: black sweatshirt, dark blue jeans, black and green sneakers, hair slicked back and up in the front, wers fingerless gloves (black and blue) white socks, and a blue hat the says
"ready?"
pokemon:
type: tepig
name: piggy
personality: timid
ability: blaze
level: 15
moves: flame wheel, fire ball, scratch, and leer

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