Korzon Omega

Name: Korzon Omega
Nickname: Horizon
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Rank: Rookie Trainer
Birthplace: Unova, Accumula town
Battle Style: Dragon and Fire

Looks: Dark brown hair with a silver streak down the right side. Blue hat with a master ball on the front the hat is always backwards. White undershirt with a star on the right side where the heart is. Black sweatshirt with a red arrow going diagonal the sweatshirts usually unzipped. Navy blue jeans that have no holes. Black shoes with neon green shoe laces. He wears black finger-less gloves. He has light blue eyes and rosy cheeks. Korzon has carmel colored skin. His hair style is laying down in the back then stands up in the front.

Personality: He's really nice. A gentleman. But really likes to win his battles. He's sometimes a show off. He doesn't like people beating him. Or people that are cocky. He likes all pokemon even though people may not like them. Everyone likes him. He loves to eat. He likes to be the tough guy but he doesn't know when to stop being tough, he's really smart. He is a big flirt. He thinks he's friends with everyone. He can be sad at one time then excited the next.

History: Korzon looked into his fathers eyes. Fear stricken in his face. The battle of my life was coming to an end. Was he hurt or was he always like that. My father was a nice man. No one would hurt him. So why did they do it? he look into my eyes and said" Im sorry...korzon. i tried." As he laid me on the soft grass, he looked up and started to run. He didnt look back, not for a last glance at me. A few minutes went by and then i heard it. A man, sounded of the age of 56 was speaking." hello? is some one there" he said. he walk up nearly tripping on my 1 year old body. "Al be darned." He said as he picked me up and took me home. Thats how my life starts at Accumula town.

Badges: Trio Badge
Items: 5 Poke Balls, 1 Ultra Balls, 2 Potions, 2 Super Potions, TM Work Up, Burn Heal.
Money: $8,600


Pokémon: Tepig
Nickname: Piggy
Gender: Male
Level: 14
Moves: Ember, tackle, tail whip, Odour Sleuth, Defense Curl.
Ability: Blaze
personality: Timid
Exp: 6

Pokemon: Ponyta
Nickname: Flame
Gender: Female
Level: 1
Moves: Growl, Tackle, Flame Wheel (EM)
Ability: Flash Fire
Personality: Naive
EXP: 0

Pokemon: Purrloin
Nickname: Kitty
Gender: Female
Level: 7
Moves:Scratch, Growl, Assist
Ability: Limber
Personality: Naive
EXP: 0

Pokemon: Totodile
Nickname: N/A
Gender: Male
Level:10
Moves: Scratch, Leer, Water Gun, Rage.
Ability: Torrent
Personality: Loves to prank.
EXP: 0

Pokemon: Magby
Nickname: N/A
Gender: Male
Level: 1
Moves: Smog, Leer
Ability: Flame Body
Personality: Upbeat
EXP: 0






Credits to Devinhunter from Deviant Art for the moving sprite

Uh, there is an edit button for a reason. The app is meant to be first, but I can fix that. However, what I want you to fix is the fact that Tepig knows Flame Wheel. At level 10 it will know Tackle, Ember, Tail Whip and Odour Sleuth, although you can add a TM if you wish, as long as the TM actually exists. Also it says tht Korzon has a big crush on Dawn, who's Dawn?

you know dawn... one of ash's parters like brock....you know what scratch the has a big crush on dawn.. hows my trainer looking right now? is it good?

I just told you improvements you needto make on the moves, and I have some problems with your character's "crush on Dawn."
1)Dawn never went to Unova, she is only in Sinnoh, so your character wouldnt have met Dawn.
2)Anime characters arent meant to play a role here, except professors, Gym leaders etc.

What DL means to say is that we don't allow members' characters to have any sort of interaction with canon characters (especially from the Anime (ESPECIALLY main, central characters)).

ok well im sorry but could you plz answer how my character is doing in this process nd im gonna change the moves

Get rid of Flame Wheel and add Odour Sleuth. Apart from that I dont see any problems.

ok completed! my first trainer, now can it be my trainer???

Are you guys for real? This is not yet to be approved the way I see it. You got lots of punctuation mistakes, correct them. Be more detailed in personality too. You need much much better detail on looks for it to get approved, didn't you read the template? At least two paragraphs if you are describing him without a face claim.

i edited it. does it look better now?

It says two paragraphs, you barely have one. Also, I do not see the punctuation mistakes corrected at all :/

could you show me the mistakes i cant see them ):/
im not good at this at all

Look for the word "Punctuation" in a dictionary, and recheck your whole trainer application, that is all I can say to help you there.

i tried ok i corrected the mistakes i could fined. ok i tried. im at a young age so i dont know whats wrong with it i cant find anything wrong. and i look up punctuation on dictionary.com and found it to be no help what so ever.

Nice, Approved! :D

Nightmare, they don't have to have perfect punctuation/grammar/spelling. If they did, half of the people on this site wouldn't be on this site. Perfect punctuation/grammar/spelling is a luxury, not a necessity, and not everyone is capable of it.

that's what you get for letting me do the approving crap? im a strict guy? is this annoying. >.<