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PostSubject: Violet Jackson   Violet Jackson H6Q0F8zFri Feb 27, 2015 3:14 am

|~ Gen. Information ~|
Aliases / Names:
Violet Jackson

Age | Birthplace | Gender:
Age: 13
Birthplace: Lavender Town, Kanto
Gender: Female

Trainer Rank:
Pokémon trainer

|~ Characterization ~|
Appearance:
Violet Jackson Ldjdi15

Personality:
Violet is oftenly forgetful and will sometimes forget to buy or do something. She is arrogant and feels as though she is better than everyone else. Violet is one of the most awkward pokemon trainers ever, tripping and slipping all the time.

Violet is cocky believes that she can take on any challenge and oftenly gives herself way too much credit, sometimes for things she didn't do. She openly says that she caught Vincent herself despite the fact that her father gave him to her as gift. Violet is also very impatient hating to have to wait for something. Violet is sometimes indecisive and doesn't know what to do when she is in a tight corner in a battle.

Violet is spirited and always full of energy (except when she wakes up) and always stays positive. Whenever she loses a battle, she shrugs it aside, promising to try again and be successful.Violet is caring and always displays kindness to others (so long as they don't annoy her) and always shows concern for others. If Violet were to see someone wounded, she would attempt to help them in any way she possibly could.Violet is loyal and will always support what she believes to be right and will never betray the cause or person. She would stick with someone until the end of her life.

Violet likes adventuring and will always explore somewhere new and never minds taking up time exploring places. Violet loves having a good meal and will always stop for some food. Violet likes others who are loyal to friends and would only be their friend if they were loyal.

Violet dislikes littering and despises the site of garbage on the ground and not where it belongs. She will confront anyone who she sees littering.Violet never knew how to dance and thus never likes to dance. She doesn't mind seeing others dance but she hates doing it herself.Despite being cocky and giving herself way too much attention, Violet fears having so many people watch her.Violet despises seeing others being mistreated or abused. So whenever she sees such a thing she will confront the one abusing or mistreating the victim and will help the victim. Violet always despised the mistreatment of others because she always felt as though she was mistreated when her mom was in her life and thus hates seeing others feel that way.


Battle Style:
Violet likes to get straight to the point of battles and will use harmful moves against her opponent. As opposed to being smart and using moves that will help her pokemon's improvence, she prefers to attack using type advantages and other moves or using status effects.

Past Experience / History:
When Violet was a young child she grew up in a small house in Lavender Town. Violet however never complained about the size of the house she lived in. Violet grew up with her older brother Nicholas, her father Pa, and her mother Ma. Nicholas would go to school and her parents would work so Violet was usually left alone with her male babysitter John. Violet would always pester John because she was lonely. John had eventually grew tired of this, and quit his job.

Since there was no one to watch Violet, her father quit his job and would watch her while Nicholas and Ma were gone. When Violet was old enough to go to school her Ma and Pa decided to homeschool her instead because Ma wanted to ensure that her family would be able make sure she would be safe since Nicholas was a weak kid and could only do so much. So whenever Nicholas was at school and Ma working, Pa would teach Violet important things.

Whenever Nicholas finished his homework, he, Violet, and Pa would go outside. Pa would watch them while they would play. One day when Violet was 10, Pa took her and Nicholas to Route 8. He told them that pokemon were always on Route 8. He then showed them how to catch pokemon. The pokemon he caught he had given to Nicholas.

However, Ma never approved of pokemon trainers and released the pokemon that had been given to Nicholas back into the wild. Ma had given them a lecture on how catching pokemon was cruel and Nicholas believed her. Violet however, didn't believe her mom and then had a growing desire to become a pokemon trainer.

Violet continued on to read books about pokemon and study the ones she would see in the wild. When Violet turned 12 her father said that she could become a pokemon trainer. Ma had overheard their conversation and warned that if Violet caught a pokemon, Ma would leave them and Nicholas said that he would go with Ma as well. Violet had still said she would become a pokemon trainer so Ma and Nicholas left to Littleroot Town.

After a year of regret and impatientness because she wanted pokemon, Pa presented Violet with a pokeball. Violet opened the pokeball to find a male Gastly inside. Violet named the male Gastly Vincent and left her hometown to become a pokemon trainer.

|~ Inventory ~|
Badges:
~Kanto~
~Hoenn~
~Johto~
~Sinnoh~
~Unova~
~Kalos~
~Other~

Money: $4,200
Items:
05x Pokeballs


|~ Pokemon ~|
Species: Gastly
Nickname: Vincent
Gender: male
Level: 10
Experience: 0
Ability: Levitate
Personality:
Loyal, caring, and playful, will never hesitate to protect others
Moves:
Hypnosis
Lick
Ice Punch
Spite
Mean Look

Violet Jackson Igglybuff
Pokemon:Igglybuff
Gender: Female
Level: 6
Ability: Friend Guard – In double and triple battles, the damage that ally Pokemon receive from attacks is reduced by 25%
Moves:
- Sing
- Charm
- Defence Curl
- Pound
Personality: Igglybuff may be brave, but she's clingy, and doesn't like doing anything solo. She will try to make friends or tag along with others wherever she can. This isn't to say she isn't capable of being independent, it just isn't in her nature to go it alone.
Experience: 0

Dragon Type Egg


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PostSubject: Re: Violet Jackson   Violet Jackson H6Q0F8zFri Feb 27, 2015 3:19 am

This app needs a lot more detail. There is little to the personality whatsoever, giving me few clues to who she is or what she's like. You describe a few bits of her history, but nothing in depth as to what shaped her or the effects of divorce, moving, having an older brother, being home schooled, etc had on Violet. The battle style also has nothing to it. What about those moves? What does she do with them? Have a look around other approved apps if you need a clue about what we're looking for. Your character should be a highly developed, complex person. Remember that.
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PostSubject: Re: Violet Jackson   Violet Jackson H6Q0F8zFri Feb 27, 2015 4:15 am

Is that better?
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PostSubject: Re: Violet Jackson   Violet Jackson H6Q0F8zFri Feb 27, 2015 4:28 am

I wouldn't bullet point for personality, and all you've listed are positives. There's no depth here. Violet must have flaws and weaknesses as well as positives and strengths. Why is it she reacts so strongly to people being mistreated? You recount events but don't deliver anything on the effect these events have on her, like a divorce or having a babysitter or a stay at home father or familial conflict or anything. There needs to be depth, cause and effect. Detail.
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PostSubject: Re: Violet Jackson   Violet Jackson H6Q0F8zFri Feb 27, 2015 4:49 am

Is this one any better (I'm literally falling asleep there are probably lots of mistakes)
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PostSubject: Re: Violet Jackson   Violet Jackson H6Q0F8zSat Feb 28, 2015 12:28 am

Tbh there are gaps in the history that I really would like filled in, but I feel like it scrapes minimum requirements, so I'll approve it.
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