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PostSubject: Blake Oak    Blake Oak  H6Q0F8zTue Dec 02, 2014 1:56 am

|~ Gen. Information ~|
   Aliases / Names: Blake Oak
   
   Age | Birthplace | Gender: 16/Kanto/Male
 

   Trainer Rank: Pokemon Trainer
   

   |~ Characterization ~|
   Appearance:
 
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   Personality:
   
The personality of Blake is rather unique then most seeing how growing up the way he did had no effect on him at all. He is your average 18 year old male, sarcastic and funny. His jokes normally get him into a lot of trouble but he doesn't really mind because he is all about the next part of his life. He can be the friend you have been looking for or the person that you hate the most. While it may not seem like it Blake is rather scary when it comes to fighting because his personality changes drastically. He starts plotting out his next move and what not by letting his opponent take the lead just to get the just of his abilities.

When hyper Blake's personality changes drastically. He is always talking and doing it as a super fast rate. The anger of his in this stage is rather funny because he doesn't really know what he is angry about nor what had brought this on. While like this Blake likes to train with Squirtle.


   Battle Style:
   
The battle style of Blake is usually counter striking and timing. He usually lets his opponent kick the gear higher before setting his own pace so he can gauge what his opponents can do. With that knowledge figured out then Blake can feel comfortable having his pokemon move about as he now has proper direction on how to guide them in battle.

   Past Experience / History:
 

Born and raised in the Kanto region was Blake. Not much of his life was fun except for the fact his mother was a famous tv personality. She would travel the world for time on and leaving Blake home with his nanny most of the time. Blake's father is part of team rocket and is one of their commanding officers. One day Blakes mother decided that it was time she got remarried and this is how Blake found his step father. A man named Nendo. This man was a legendary trainer who had actually won the sinnoh league many years ago. This man would inspire Blake to become a great trainer and follow in his footsteps.

Now he was 10 years old actually able to start his journey. Blake was happy that he could actually go out and do what he has wanted to do since he was in diapers. He had no pokemon yet but he still wanted to get one. He would actually ask his stepfather for help. The man told Blake in return to start his journey in a few years. This was something Blake did not want. He wouldn't be able to start his journey like everyone else he would start late but he would have experience. Something that seemed more appealing than running in with no training. This was something Blake would indeed agree on. Upon his answer his stepfather Nendo took him to his personal gym under the family home.

Things were actually getting serious. Upon going downstairs into the gym it was beautiful it consisted of all 4 elements but on different sections. Blake didn't know how he could fight without a pokemon but that would be solved by his stepfather Nendo. He pointed Blake towards a whole bunch of glass tanks which appeared to whole a bunch of eggs. Blake walked over to them and began to look around. As he was looking at one egg with a blue color to it and beige dots around it he knocked over one accidentally. His reflexes were able to let him catch the egg. "I highly doubt that was accidental Blake. Maybe that's your pokemon in that egg" said Nendo. Blake looked at his stepfather before he nodded his head. This was a sign this egg was meant for Blake and he would take it. For the next year Blake would lock himself inside the gym with his egg watching his stepfather train. He went through heat, water and earth. Those were three of the gym types Nendo had. He offered to show Squirtle and Blake how to coexist here even showing Squirtle how to use Ice Beam. Something the small pokemon picked up with much ease considering his experience. Finally 1 day the egg hatched and was a Squirtle. This was on the minute of Blakes 11th birthday. This was actually weird for a pokemon and its tamer to have the same birthday. Now things were different. Blake had his first pokemon.

Awhile after this Blake and Nendo would go on a trip to the Johto region where Nendo intended to show Blake the spoils of battle. They would venture around the forest for a few weeks where Blake was subjected to random pokemon attacks for his and Squirtles future journey. One of those attacks happened to be an Gligar who just couldn't be taken serious. He thought it would smart to steal Blake's food which caused Blake and Squirtle to chase the Gligar throughout the entire forest until the Gligar decided it wanted to fight Squirtle. Because of Squirtles advanced moveset for such a young pokemon he made quick work of the fast flying type Gligar. In return Blake captured the pokemon because he knew he and Gligar could become good friends.

5 Years later Blake was now 16 and his now Squirtle was rather comfortable. They both seemed to be happy as it was time for them to set off on their journey. Blakes mother came to wish him off as he said his farewells to Nendo. It was time for Blake to finally go to a new region and get into the league there and win it. As Blake got on the cruise him Squirtle and Gligar looked back at his parents and waved them goodbye as the ship sailed off. He was going to the Hoenn league.


   |~ Inventory ~|
   Badges:
   ~Kanto~
   ~Hoenn~
   ~Johto~
   ~Sinnoh~
   ~Unova~
   ~Kalos~
   ~Other~

   Money: $6,200
   Items:05x Pokeballs
   

   |~ Pokemon ~|

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   Species: Squirtle
   Nickname: N/A
   Gender: Male
   Level: 6
   Experience: 0
   Ability: Torrent
   Personality: The leader of the team. Always cool and calm and making sure everyone of the other pokemon are okay. Commonly finds himself doing all the hard week of the team.
   Moves: Tackle, Ice Beam, Water Spout , Tail whip

Blake Oak  207-f
Species: Gligar
  Nickname: N/A
  Gender: Male
  Level: 6
  Experience: 0
  Ability: Immunity
  Personality: He is a joker. He loves to play pranks on Squirtle and Blake. Even tho he isn't the strongest pokemon he uses his speed to make up for it and show his enemies that he is fierce.
  Moves: Poison Sting, Poison Jab, Razor Wind , Sand Attack


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PostSubject: Re: Blake Oak    Blake Oak  H6Q0F8zTue Dec 02, 2014 11:09 pm

Things I See Here:
1. Somehow every bolded field "Names, Gender, Etc" is spaced from the margin somehow ;p
2. You write in the battle style that Blake usually counter-strikes and times his moves and that he watches the moves of opponents and gauges them; however, there is no mention of how he uses this measurement he gathers.
3. You write that he didn't want to wait a few years to start his journey but then state he "indeed agrees" upon it so he'd have experience. This is a contradiction of behavior.
4. Not quite understanding how Blake knocking over an egg suddenly means it's a "sign" for him to take that pokemon in placement of others. Perhaps his stepfather mentions it and Blake believes him (of course, another detail is necessary about how long he searches).
5. "He went through heat, water, and snow" doesn't seem like it belongs in the history to begin with; I'm under assumption that you're trying to put emphasis on the year that he spent watching his relative train, but this phrase isn't the best to utilize.
6. You mention squirtle having an "advanced move set," but it isn't really detailed anywhere how this was achieved. You state the egg hatched and that the pokemon has a birthday similar to the trainer's, but you then timeskip to the event this is mentioned.
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PostSubject: Re: Blake Oak    Blake Oak  H6Q0F8zWed Dec 03, 2014 3:14 am

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