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Subject: Re: Sui Naga Mon Jul 28, 2014 6:00 am
|~ General Information ~| Full Name: Sui Naga (Water Serpent, literally) Nicknames: Naga Curr. Age: 18 Years Old Ch Gender: Male Birthplace: Kanto, Veridian City Ch Ranking: Dark-Type Trainer
|~ Appearance ~| ~ General / Physical ~ Naga is of general stature; he is not muscular, nor is he weak. He has hair that is of average length, and his hair is a grey color, though some pale red and blue is present in his hair. His eyes are heterochromatic; the left is a pale red, and the right is a pale blue. Hints of the opposing color are present in his eyes, but are only visible upon close inspection.
Alongside his unique eyes, Naga has a pale blue tail. This tail is capable of wrapping around his leg four times, covering almost the entire leg. The bottom of the tail is a pale red, and it is all covered in scale. There are no special shapes at the end of the tail; it just meets in a fine point at the end.
In addition to this, his right arm is not his own; it is that of a salamence, obviously modified so that there are fingers with claws attached to them. A majority of the time this arm is wrapped or covered, such by linen gloves and his jacket that no one sees it.
~ Apparel ~ Naga wears a plain, dark grey t-shirt. Above his shirt he wears a pale blue hooded-jacket that is never zipped closed. He wears a pair of jeans that are a bit bigger than he can wear, usually so he can hide his tail if he so chooses. He typically wears contacts over his eyes, hiding them behind a blue tint.
|~ Characterization ~| ~ Personality ~ Naga is a bit carefree. He tries to do what is right, but usually at the expense of someone else taking the fallout. He doesn't like wallowing too much on the past, preferring to move forward. He tries to be persuasive and use a logical argument, though he has a bit to learn.
Naga tries to be observatory; see everything so you can know everything. He doesn't like having secrets hidden from him. If one is hidden, he can be a bit stubborn and intrusive to figure out the mystery. He doesn't toss that much of a fit if he doesn't figure out what the oddity was though.
Naga cares more for his pokemon than himself; he'll jump in front of an attack if it would mean keeping his pokemon safe from over-exhaustion. He tries to take caution in his battles, keeping a check on his pokemon's status so he doesn't have to make emergency trips to the pokemon center.
It is due to this care for his pokemon that he has a large regret for a few events of his past, preferring to not talk about it or even think. If approached about it, caution has to be shown or else his emotions can become a series of kind and spiteful remarks, mostly due to not wanting to talk about it, yet showing happiness that someone recognizes the series of events.
~ Battle Style ~ Naga's battle style depends entirely on the circumstances in which he is battling. If he is being evasive, he will not battle with as much force, showing more of a focus upon status impacts. If he's trying to push his way through, he may use more blunt force than status impact.
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Subject: Re: Sui Naga Mon Jul 28, 2014 6:01 am
|~ Historical Archive ~|
Ep 01 : Fire and Sacrifice:
Naga's life started as a fine one. As he grew up, he got to be around a few different pokemon because of his parents. The two were avid breeders, always trying to make the brightest and the finest in their lives to gain a large profit... They were unlike other breeders; they wanted to train the pokemon they bred so that they would fetch a higher price. After all, a trainer pokemon meant less hassle for the trainer, and that made such a bigger difference.
When Naga turned five, he got his first pokemon; it was a salamence, strong, pale blue and red scales and tail put together. The two quickly hit off as friends, Naga constantly playing with the pokemon. It wasn't that often until his parents began leaving the pokemon to tend to him during their absences, which began to become many and short time inbetween. Salamence quickly became an adopted parent of sorts, getting Naga to remember to eat and take care of himself when his parents were absent.
Such a magnificent life lasted until Naga was ten; by complete accident, a fire began in his home in the kitchen. Naga and salamence both attempted to put the fire out at first, though when their attempts became futile, they attempted an escape. His pokemon companion got away without much problem, but Naga's arm was broken when a board fell and held him down as the last minute. The board did more damage than just that, leaving Naga unconscious as his companion freed him and escaped to a nearby hospital.
Naga's eyes were open dimly as he watched many people run out to take care of his house, and he was wondering where his parents were. They had promised they would be home long before the fire had even started, and it worried him even to the point he ignored his twitching arm. After a thorough inspection the doctors saw that the child's eyes had been burnt, resulting in his blurred vision (his eyes being open dimly), his arm was broken as obvious, and the broken arm was burnt beyond typical repair.
Seeing this, his pokemon put up a show, caring for her trainer just as much as he did about her. She communicated to the child and doctors to use her as a means of helping her trainer, and despite the minimal chance of survival for the pokemon, the doctors could only begin operating against Naga's wishes. It lasted for hours, and was definitely painful... The doctors had to remove one of salamence's legs, replacing the child's arm for it before manipulating it to have fingers... They had to constantly keep their eyes open for changes while the boy was unconscious.
It was shortly before the operation was over that the doctors operating knew that Naga's pokemon wasn't going to make it; realizing it, the pokemon communicated, albeit weakly, that she wanted him to have her tail. As such, the doctors continued the operation, and hours later it was revealed Naga was alive while his companion's sacrifice would be one all who were present that day would remember.
Ep 02 : Denial and Final Choice:
After Naga awoke from the pain-staking surgery that had been committed, he could not help but notice the presence of his new and twitchy tail, his mind still adjusting to its presence. Being presented a mirror, he could also see his eyes, the replacements being his own companion's after the doctors had put her down to let her have peace. His friend had sacrificed herself to keep him alive, and even though he knew this, he was upset.
His parents showed up at the hospital, and despite the comfort they tried to give, there was no immediate recovery for the loss of Naga's dear friend. His parents could only show pride and joy that their son was alive, showing immense pride in his new, unique features. Ultimately they were forced to move into a new home, and even though they were capable of forgetting the fire they had heard about, it stuck with Naga.
It was the last few moments before he had been in the hospital; it was the last few moments he had seen his close friend in action. Whereas others around him would celebrate the passing of their friend, Naga only felt regret for the fire and the sacrifice his friend had to give. As such, he tried to hide his eyes and arm, purchasing contacts and wrapping the latter as to just look like he was keeping something secret he didn't want anyone to see.
Despite trying to hide his tail, it was both too large and long to conceal... He couldn't wrap it around his leg without his jeans showing that it was there, and it couldn't wrap it with linen or bandage since it would hurt him too much. Having tried to do so for two to three years was why he developed the ability to move it in many different directions and styles. He eventually just gave up on it and figured it for the best that he couldn't hide it.
When he turned sixteen, Naga was out of school. He had skipped a few grades because of his astounding performance, and he had all the credit to give to his salamence from years prior. The pokemon always seemed to keep him cheerful and focused, even when he had wanted to play games and go out and meet with his friends; the pokemon wanted the best for him, and even after her passing, her actions were continuing to impact him...
With nowhere to really go besides staying at home and the lack of companionship and his sorrow, Naga eventually began to hang out in the woods near his home. It was there that he was put in the face of death a second time, though an absol saved him. This absol would be of a great importance to Naga, especially when he got home that same day and found his parents were gone.
The next two years were the absol checking up on Naga, having not been captured yet growing to care for the trainer and be just as protective as the salamence from before... The two had a strange relationship at the start, but as the pokemon grew to care and protect, Naga began to accept it and be grateful, much so to the point that he captured the pokemon a year after they met (1 of the 2 years) with her willing.
The locals began to make presumption that his parents' disappearance was his own doing, but before they could do anything to investigate, Naga had grabbed backup currency and a few belongings before he ran with the absol, whom he had grown to start calling "Angel." Eighteen and figuring he needed some sort of goal, he decided to find his parents, possibly obtaining a few badges on his travels...
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Dragon Kurai
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Subject: Re: Sui Naga Mon Jul 28, 2014 6:01 am
|~ Current Inventory ~| Items: 05x Pokeballs
Key Items (Plot): 1x Set of Contacts ~ Blue This is an item that Naga purchased himself to hide his true eye color. He typically wears them but can be known to have them off if he has shown someone the reality of things. 1x Golden Wedding Ring w/ Diamond This is an item Naga wound up being given by a friend. It signifies his marriage to Angel as a husband.
Badges: (Region, Badge name) No badges present yet
Pokedollars: $6,200
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Dragon Kurai
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Posts : 4447 Location : On the hype train .3.
Subject: Re: Sui Naga Mon Jul 28, 2014 6:02 am
|~ Pokémon Status ~| Party Pokémon:
Absol [Trainer-Specific Pokemon]:
Note: Angel is a trainer-specific pokemon. This means that she cannot be traded to other trainers or adopted away into the adoption center. She must be on this trainer application at all times. She is still capable of utilizing pokemon attacks and gaining experience, but she CANNOT leave the trainer's app, ever.
Appearance: Angel's eyes are as a typical absol's. Her hair is long, pure white as it reaches down approximately half of her back. One of her eyes is covered by her hair (left eye). Her elbows and the back of her knees have small spikes protruding from them as though she is a pokemon, her toenails sharp and colored darkly unlike her fingernails. She also has a tail like an absol, the feature not hidden well with her outfit. She sports darkly-colored (black) jeans and a shirt with a short-sleeved jacket stitched to the shirt, the jacket usually kept open. On her right ring finger is a golden ring with a diamond in it, signifying her marriage. Angel wears no footwear due to her toenails and nature having been a pokemon.
Personality: Even as a humanoid-pokemon, Angel is capable of sensing danger. Sometimes this is blocked out by her affection towards Naga, but sometimes she can give him a warning when she gets a bad vibe. She is very protective of Naga, acting a bit more like an older sibling than his wife at times. She is also a bit un-trusting of strangers, usually giving her trust only to those her trainer trusts. She has a fond hatred for chocolate, though doesn't mind a cup of hot chocolate, and alongside this all, she likes other pokemon like herself. She lightly doubts her own abilities, though doesn't stop to attempt cheering up others.
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