Hope4 Posts : 172 Location : lumiose
| Subject: new character Sat Feb 22, 2014 4:38 pm | |
| Name: Serena roseflare Nickname: N/a Age: 15 Gender:Female Rank: Trainer Birthplace: Kalos, lumiose city Battle Style: She takes it easy, unless feeling competitive Looks: Personality: Serena Roseflare, A trainer who at first comes of as shy and timid, If you were to get to know her you would find her relaxed and out going and relatively kind hearted once comfortable in the company of those she has gotten to know. She adores the Pokemon that grace this world and likes the nature and complex beauty of the world she lives in from the color of the grass to the dull grey of stones. Her own pokemon receive special treatment due to the bond from battling and roaming together, These pokemon that are noted as her companions are graced with love and adoration. She is not a massive fan of battling yet aspires to beat the elite four thus setting up a goal to try to get past her distaste of pokemon battles giving a small taste of her determination. History: Serena Rosenflare born in the beautiful Kalos Region in the large city of Lumiouse, Within this large City as Serena grew she found she had the ability to befriend other's easily and became one of the most like citizens within the city. Many knew of her from a young age from the hair dresser to the smallest of the cafes in the large city. A fatefuly day would have destiny play its course as she came across an injured and scared Eevee, This eevee would be cared for by Serena whom had taken the young one to a pokemon center before taking it home to care for, Over the year's Serena and Eevee's bond grew to powerful heights and Serena knew she had felt love for the first time. as there bond grew Serena decided it was time for her to start a journey to go on an adventure and increase her potential by meeting new friends and taking on her dream of battling the elite four of the Kalos Region. Badges: none yet Items: 5 Pokeballs Money: $6,200 Pokémon Pokémon: eevee Nickname: eve Gender: female Level: 6 Moves: helping hand, growl, tackle, tail whip, sand attack, round (tm), covet (em) Ability: adaptability Personality: shy just like Serena. very cautious, and always protecting Serena. Exp: 0 Pokémon: Fletchling Nickname: Scout Gender: Female Level: 6 Moves: Tackle, Growl, Quick Attack Ability: Big Pecks Personality: Shows traits of over protectiveness Exp: 0 Pokémon: Porygon Gender: Genderless Level: 8 Moves: Conversion 2, Tackle, Conversion, Sharpen, Psybeam, Hyper Beam (TM) Ability: Trace Personality: Calm and collected, hates meddling in things that waste time.
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Leo12 Posts : 4328 Location : Sunagakure
| Subject: Re: new character Sat Feb 22, 2014 5:01 pm | |
| hey serina ^^ ok there are a few things that need adjusting, - the history needs to be longer - the personality needs longer - the pic needs to be put in the post, no links sorry The rest looks good but just a reminder you can give you're eevee an egg move and a Tm |
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Markj1998Administrator Posts : 3831 Location : Definitely not in the cupboard... what i said not in the cupboard go away!
| Subject: Re: new character Sun Feb 23, 2014 11:25 am | |
| Eevee had the wrong moves but, they've been corrected and now your app is approved. |
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