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PostSubject: Re: LediThunder Splash   LediThunder Splash H6Q0F8zSat Mar 23, 2013 4:46 am

Though I am not a staff member and I am supposed to refrain from posting here, I must point out:

Despite the fact that there are absolutely no rules against your character being a pokemon, that is not what is rped on here. It would be perfectly acceptable if, you were to create a custom pokemon with the ability to transform itself into a human. That was previous done here and was accepted, however the application of said pokemon is no longer here. I advise that your character either be a pure human, a pokemon capable of being human.

Moving along, though you are entitled to say as you please in your history and personality, try to stray away from using Gym Leaders and other canon characters. It is, usually frowned upon due to the fact many people will say they are related to that person and it becomes a hassle to deal with. Besides, how in the bloody world is Misty going to find a shiny Suicune?

Otherwise I have nothing to speak about.
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PostSubject: Re: LediThunder Splash   LediThunder Splash H6Q0F8zSat Mar 23, 2013 1:23 pm

Yes, point taken. But I can't help but say that Atlas and C have a point. Also, could you refrain from using all Caps?
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PostSubject: Re: LediThunder Splash   LediThunder Splash H6Q0F8zSat Mar 23, 2013 1:47 pm

I say it seems great for an idea :P
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PostSubject: Re: LediThunder Splash   LediThunder Splash H6Q0F8zSat Mar 23, 2013 2:32 pm

Yeah, sorry I can't approve it, I'm not staff :P
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PostSubject: Re: LediThunder Splash   LediThunder Splash H6Q0F8zSat Mar 23, 2013 2:42 pm

Listen, I've asked you to write a better history for this character. As well, I'm not the only one tht thinks the character shouldn't be a pokemon unles there is something further, such as being able to shift formes or justbeing human with pokemon traits. While I'm at it, I don't see a bttle style, and I apologize for not getting that earlier.

And please, if you aren't staff or C, please refrain from posting in this app...
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PostSubject: Re: LediThunder Splash   LediThunder Splash H6Q0F8zSat Mar 23, 2013 3:08 pm

I agree with what the staff has said. Also, how can he win a battle with Flannery if he didn't have any Pokemon before Surskit?

And I may point out that meeting so many powerful people is nearly impossible, and if your character did, you should state how, not just that he did. Also, if your character was turned into a Pokemon by Team Galactic, shouldn't you have stated it in your history, and not in a later post? I'd also like you to add the events that caused his transformation, as something like that doesn't happen just out of the blue.

I'm frowning opon the fact that a trainer is a Pokemon, it may not be stated in the rules, but it's a given. Also, how can your character even meet gym leaders and such if he can't speak? You stated no where in your app that your character can speak human, so I assume he can't. I won't even mention the Shiny Suicune, as it's been brought up before...
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PostSubject: Re: LediThunder Splash   LediThunder Splash H6Q0F8zSat Mar 23, 2013 5:04 pm

Please remove the shiny suicune from the history. Even though it is possible this could have happened, I doubt that it would actually happen, and it doesn't seem realistic. Also, you should still add a bit more to the history. It didn't seem to logical in the first place; the added pieces don't make it any better.
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PostSubject: Re: LediThunder Splash   LediThunder Splash H6Q0F8zSat Mar 23, 2013 10:29 pm

Alright, that was pure random, ad I have no clue what you just said. Please do the suggestions we all have given, such as history changes and considering other suggestions.

And do not spam caps and yell.
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PostSubject: Re: LediThunder Splash   LediThunder Splash H6Q0F8zSun Mar 24, 2013 12:21 am

See, now that's what I call a good history. Despite him being a pokemon still, it'll have to do... Approved
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