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TyranitTitan12 Posts : 2302 Location : Stop stalking me, creep
| Subject: jey luckar Mon Jun 04, 2012 1:28 pm | |
| Name: jey luckar Nickname: jacky Age: 14 Gender:Male Rank: dragon tamer Birthplace: Kanto, pallet town Battle Style: analyzes the situation then picks the most suitable attack Looks: Personality: A full bully. Cares more about pokemon then humans. Hates the weak but instead of beating them he helps the training to become stronger. He likes to travel alone. But if a very strong trainer beats him he would want to travel with him. History: Always loved pokemon. He dreamed to be a trainer. At school he never had friends. It was his choice though. One day he thought he was old enough so he went to his house and said the big goodbye he promised to call every day. His family were the only humans he liked but before he left to the lab his grandfather walked up: "Wait, take this pokemon" "Why?" "Its the last pokemon i caught before i stopped being a trainer. It will be a higher then any other starter pokemon." "Great. What pokemon is it?" "Haha im sure you will like it" After another half an hour of goodbyes he left. Badges: Items: 5 Pokeballs Money: $15,000 Pokémon Pokémon: gible Nickname:gib Gender:male Level: 14 Moves: tackle, sandstorm, sand attack, dragonrage, fireblast Ability: sand veil Personality: brave Exp: 0
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Mew12 Posts : 8407
| Subject: Re: jey luckar Mon Jun 04, 2012 4:58 pm | |
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GuestGuest | Subject: Re: jey luckar Mon Jun 04, 2012 5:02 pm | |
| and the picture is obviously not a 12 year old :/ |
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TyranitTitan12 Posts : 2302 Location : Stop stalking me, creep
| Subject: Re: jey luckar Mon Jun 04, 2012 5:21 pm | |
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GuestGuest | Subject: Re: jey luckar Mon Jun 04, 2012 5:24 pm | |
| err... that looks like a 12 years old to you? |
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TyranitTitan12 Posts : 2302 Location : Stop stalking me, creep
| Subject: Re: jey luckar Mon Jun 04, 2012 5:25 pm | |
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GuestGuest | Subject: Re: jey luckar Mon Jun 04, 2012 5:26 pm | |
| .......ill leave this to the admins' decision. |
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Lucretia10 Posts : 1281 Location : Institutionalized
| Subject: Re: jey luckar Wed Jun 06, 2012 7:00 pm | |
| Okay, we don't have many standards here, but I'm going to ask that you at least fix your typos and use capital letters. You've made many characters, so I know you have the time to do these things. |
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TyranitTitan12 Posts : 2302 Location : Stop stalking me, creep
| Subject: Re: jey luckar Wed Jun 06, 2012 7:13 pm | |
| fixed all the typos i could find but WHAT capital letters? |
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Lucretia10 Posts : 1281 Location : Institutionalized
| Subject: Re: jey luckar Wed Jun 06, 2012 7:36 pm | |
| Names and the beginning of sentences are supposed to be capitalized. As you used capital letters to type "what" it's clear that you do have the capability. |
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TyranitTitan12 Posts : 2302 Location : Stop stalking me, creep
| Subject: Re: jey luckar Wed Jun 06, 2012 7:57 pm | |
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Lucretia10 Posts : 1281 Location : Institutionalized
| Subject: Re: jey luckar Wed Jun 06, 2012 8:01 pm | |
| For future reference, "I" is supposed to be capitalized, as well as your trainer's name. Approved though. |
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