Black Nova6 Posts : 466 Location : Nuvema Town
| Subject: Darjin Shade Wed Sep 28, 2011 5:39 am | |
| (Remember to remove everything in parentheses!) Name: Darjin Shade Nickname: None Age: 27 Gender: Male Rank: Expert Trainer Birthplace: Kanto - Saffron City Battle Style: Passive and Agressive Looks: Personality: He is closed and concealed in everything that he does. He does not talk at all, unless he has to. And when he does it's usuallya short sentance, or just one word. If he see's something evil or malicious happen, he almost always joins in to make it worse. He doesn't like starting any bad deeds, he just always loves finishing them. History: He was just a regular boy. Nothing weird or bad about his childhood. He had a loving family, and they could accomidate all the expenses that they had. But, something always has to go bad in a childhood, or else it isn't really one at all. Once, when Darjin was hapily skipping home, and then the most bizzare and unbeliveable thing happened. A rift in time and space opened underneath him, and he was sucked into it. For 15 years he was held there, only being kept alive by the dark energy that was engulfing him. All the evil thoughts were surrounding him, and he was feeding off of it, staying alive. 15 years from the time that he was taken there. He was let go, in the exact same spot. He found a black pokeball in his pocket, and he released the pokemon inside of it. It was a Darychy, and without any words, he went on his journey, taking badge after badge after badge. Badges: First 6 Kanto badges Items: 5 Poke Balls (New trainers do not change) Money: $15,000 (Do not change) PokémonPokémon: Darychy Nickname: None Gender: Male Level: 25 Moves: Leer-Faint Attack-Scratch-Dark Matter-Dark Mass-Shadow Slash Ability: Quick Reaction Personality: Always Angry and Agressive Exp: 0 (Leave as zero)
Last edited by Black Nova on Wed Sep 28, 2011 2:31 pm; edited 1 time in total |
|
Ukiki6 Posts : 471 Location : Land Down Under
| Subject: Re: Darjin Shade Wed Sep 28, 2011 6:42 am | |
| (Remember to remove everything in parentheses!) *coughreadcough* :p
Oh and personality needs another sentence :3 other than that I see few problems if your pokémon and all it's moves have already been approved.
Oh...and with battle style does that mean he can battle as either "Passive and Aggressive" or both at the same time (this is just my own curiosity)
|
|
Darkrai12 Posts : 2925 Location : Mal'e Maldives
| Subject: Re: Darjin Shade Wed Sep 28, 2011 8:39 am | |
| Addition: Actually I think personality needs around 3 more sentences, my opinion. |
|
Black Nova6 Posts : 466 Location : Nuvema Town
| Subject: Re: Darjin Shade Wed Sep 28, 2011 11:13 pm | |
| |
|
Ukiki6 Posts : 471 Location : Land Down Under
| Subject: Re: Darjin Shade Wed Sep 28, 2011 11:45 pm | |
| Well, technically that's a paragraph for the personality so he doesn't need any more, so...
APPROVED *Insert awesome stamp of approval* |
|
Tsu7 Posts : 658 Location : Nuvema Town
| Subject: Re: Darjin Shade Sun Oct 27, 2013 7:39 am | |
| Unretired on 10/27/2013 by Goddski. |
|
Sponsored content | Subject: Re: Darjin Shade | |
| |
|