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PostSubject: Kyfuji Kang   Kyfuji Kang H6Q0F8zThu Mar 19, 2015 9:23 am

|~ Gen. Information ~|

Aliases / Names: Kyfuji Kang
Age | Birthplace | Gender:
-16 Years Old
-Pallet Town
-Male
Trainer Rank: Pokemon Trainer


|~ Characterization ~|

Appearance: Kyfuji is 5'8 and weighs about 160 pounds. He is lean and muscular, but not super bulky or anything like that. His body is fit and very athletic looking. Kyfuji's skin is a light tan color and is very clear and smooth. He has medium size facial features such as his nose mouth and eyes. His eyes are a light sea green color and are keen. His teeth are all straight and white and clean. Kyfuji has black hair that is spiky and all over the place. Kyfuji wears an all black windbreaker over a white shirt. He wears khaki cargo pants and black and white sneakers. He also wears a black and white snapback hat on his head. He carries a white backpack most of the time too.

Personality: Kyfuji is overall a relaxed individual and is usually pretty calm. He is very sarcastic, but not to be mean, that's just his humor. Kyfuji is very kind when you get to know him though. He is loyal to all his friends and family and doesn't like to lie to the people he know's but wouldn't mind doing it for the benefit of his friends and family. Even though he's calm, he is very competitive and doesn't like to lose to others. Kyfuji is flirtatious when it comes to pretty girls he likes and can sometimes get distracted by them. He is very intelligent and likes to learn new things through experience. He enjoys food, nature, and pretty girls. He doesn't like reading and mistreatment of pokemon.


Battle Style:
Kyfuji tends to switch up his battle styles depending on what pokemon he's using. All pokemon have different abilities so it's hard to do the same thing with each one. His style varies when it comes to the size and unique characteristics of each pokemon. One thing that he uses in common with all the pokemon he uses is trying to use the environment to his advantage.

Past Experience / History:
Kyfuji was born in Pallet Town into a small family. His mother was a stay at home mom and his father was an assistant at the pokemon research lab. Kyfuji got a lot of exposure to pokemon at an early age because of this. His father taught him a lot about pokemon already, so he'd be better off later. Kyfuji spent most of his time at school. He learned a lot of things from the place, even though he hated reading books. Kyfuji was involved in many sports after school, but basketball was his favorite to do. Sometimes he visited the lab in Pallet Town and would play with the pokemon or help his father observe the outcome of pokemon that get a lot of interaction from humans to those that were in the wild, and how the pokemon reacted to different situations. When Kyfuji got to 16, he decided he wanted to get his own pokemon and go on a journey. One day his father brought home a squirtle to give to his son. Kyfuji named the squirtle Sea and the two got along rather quickly. He was ready to leave home and start his journey.

|~ Inventory ~|

Badges:
~Kanto~

~Hoenn~

~Johto~

~Sinnoh~

~Unova~

~Kalos~

~Other~

Money: $6,200
Items:
-05x Pokeballs

|~ Pokemon ~|

Kyfuji Kang 7
Species: Squirtle
Nickname: Sea
Gender: Male
Level: 12
Experience: 0
Ability: Torrent
Personality: Loyal
Moves:
-Tackle
-Tail Whip
-Water Gun
-Withdraw
-Aqua Jet *Egg
-Dig *TM


Last edited by Kyfuji on Sat Mar 21, 2015 9:56 pm; edited 1 time in total
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PostSubject: Re: Kyfuji Kang   Kyfuji Kang H6Q0F8zSat Mar 21, 2015 8:02 pm

Personality:
While the personality wields a couple of unique points, it feels a bit too short. Perhaps you could expand more upon what you've already given to give him a bit more depth. For example, he doesn't like to lie; however, would he in a drastic instance? In what ways is he loyal; is there, perchance, a limit to his loyalty? So on so forth.

Battle Style:
I'm a bit intrigued by his style of battling. What aspects does he consider in regards to the pokemon he uses; their types? Their physical abilities based on appearance?

History:
The history is quite short and doesn't show much of his history other than a few major plot points. Has there been negative events that happened to him? What took place throughout the first sixteen years of his life? Was there a rival lab, or some sort of research that he discovers in the lab his father works for without permission? There's many ways for you to expand the history.

That's about it for the moment. I'll wait for your edit ;3
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PostSubject: Re: Kyfuji Kang   Kyfuji Kang H6Q0F8zSat Mar 21, 2015 9:57 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Kyfuji Kang   Kyfuji Kang H6Q0F8zSun Mar 22, 2015 1:42 am

The history is still a bit short, and while it does now include a few more things, those things are not really major historical points for the character. Hasn't something happened that motivates him? Is there some major goal he aspires to that can be revealed by expansion of his history? Also, I notice you wrote about sports in teh history, which is something also includable in the personality.
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