Snowflake crystal

Posts : 172 Location : lumiose

|~ Gen. Information ~|
Aliases / Names:
*Snowflake crystal

Age | Birthplace | Gender:
*15, female
*Vaniville town, Kalos

Trainer Rank: Tamer

|~ Characterization ~|
Appearance:

Personality:
*Snowflake is very shy, but not to her pokemon. She loves petting pokemon and taking care of them. She is also very lonely at times since she doesn't have friends. She does not like fire types, due to her history with them. She does get scared often, though.

Snowflake is scared of hights and would rather stay down low. Her pokemon are the only reason why she will do things that she would rather not do. If, lets say, her pokemon was stuck up on a cliff, she would rescue it. She is not scared of adventuring, though.

Battle Style:
*When battling, she usually paralysis the opponent and then attacks. She also likes to defend and not fight a lot. Her battling style is weak, but that's what she prefers.

Past Experience / History:
Snowflake grew up in a farm on a little island on the hoenn region. when she was born, it was during a blizzard, which is how she got her name. She always loved to go out in the morning and watch the sun rise. Her parents were poor, so Snowflake didn't get a lot of stuff that she wanted. Her farm grew mareep, and some skitty.

A few years passed, when she was finally 15, and then they decided to move to the Kalos region. From there, she found a noibat and decided to catch it. Since then, her only friend was a noibat, which she learned to talk to.

Then one day she was walking with her noibat when a charizard came flying from the santalune city direction. Luckily, her noibat stopped the charizard. Nobody is sure what happened, but snowflake keeps saying noibat talked to charizard. before the charizard left, he burnt her leg, which is why she hates fire types..

|~ Inventory ~|
Badges:
~Kanto~
~Hoenn~
~Johto~
~Sinnoh~
~Unova~
~Kalos~
~Other~

Money: $6,200 *Do NOT change
Items:
05x Pokeballs

|~ Pokemon ~|
Species: noibat
Nickname: shimmer
Gender: female
Level: 6
Experience: 0
Ability: frisk
Personality: noibat is very friendly, and alaways riding on snowflakes head.
Moves: tackle, leeche life, (TM) solar beam, (EM) snatch

Posts : 1696 Location : England

Given that she grew up on a small island in Hoenn, what made her parents decide 'Snowflake' was a good name? Just intrigued.

This needs a lot more detail. I like the battle style, though. We need more about her personality and on her history. Where did the Charizard come from, and how did a teensy Noibat stop it when its trainer's style is generally so weak? How did moving affect her? Why did the parents move? What about life before that? What else does she like and dislike, what are her strengths and flaws?

Our rules and standards for applications have changed and become higher since you left a year ago, so keep that in mind when making your character.

Posts : 172 Location : lumiose

fixed, I will do more on the history if you need me to.

Posts : 1696 Location : England

You still need a lot more detail and personality as well as history. She's fifteen years old, a lot more must have happened in her life that influenced who she was. Why doesn't she have any friends? Did being raised on a farm make any difference in how she turned out? What about being poor? People are complex with many dimensions to them, and your character can't be approved until we have a lot more depth written here.

Posts : 172 Location : lumiose

never-mind, I am just going to stick with my other characters.

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