Subject: My Random Poetry Thu Apr 26, 2012 8:52 am
**Constructive criticism only! I already know I suck so I don't need to hear it from you!**
**will randomly post a poem here from time to time**
Desire
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Should I give in to temptation, and to his desires? What will they think of me, what will they say? All for a kiss, just to give him happiness. He'll complain if I don't, they'll complain if I do. With all of this friction, which do I choose? What I want? No, that can't be right. What I want cant be found in the day or night. I want to want, to feel the desire... But all that I feel is the lack of the fire.
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Subject: Re: My Random Poetry Thu Apr 26, 2012 8:56 am
its short but its awesome. love it. :3
Lucretia
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Subject: Re: My Random Poetry Sat Apr 28, 2012 7:42 pm
::Parchment::
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Life is but a blank canvas, Parchment awaiting ink. My quill is dipped and ready, But I can't seem to think.
How can I progress in life, When writer's block holds me down? So instead I sit at home alone, In this dusty little town.
I watch from my window silently, As others write with ease. Impatiently I tap my quill, Life is such a tease.
Only when I truly look, Do I really see... My empty book has filled right up, For what I am is me.
Lucretia
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Subject: Re: My Random Poetry Tue May 15, 2012 8:53 am
::Our Garden::
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That which is required, that of what we need... indeed it can be overdone, and all due to greed... With pain and corruption laying the seed... When gone unchecked shall grow like a weed.
However in moderation, and carefully tended... Using the tools at hand, and even those lended... When the fighting and bickering and drama has ended... You will find the garden is a beautiful place, and can surely be mended.
Lucretia
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Posts : 1281 Location : Institutionalized
Subject: Re: My Random Poetry Sun Jul 15, 2012 5:23 am
::B.S.::
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I have no muse to write poetry, as such I will simply type. Whatever comes to my mind as I write this is probably less than the hype.
Say what you will, say what you must. Just remember your duties, and always be just.
I'm not making sense now, it's probably true. How long can you read this? Will you make it through?
Of course you will, unless you have issues. Like ADHD, or needing some tissues.
Did you laugh right there? No? Well how 'bout right now? Yeah, I didn't think so. How now, brown cow?
If you couldn't tell, this was just a distraction. All this time you've been reading, I've taken action!
Check your pockets, you fool! Sure, I broke the law 'bit, because while you were reading this... I stole your wallet 8)
SnowFire
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Subject: Re: My Random Poetry Tue Feb 11, 2014 3:02 am
I like them! Especially the second one! Keep it up!! :D
zellblack
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Subject: Re: My Random Poetry Fri Feb 13, 2015 3:13 pm