Erica Strider

Posts : 402 Location : EAT DIRT!!!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAH!!!!

|~ Gen. Information ~|
Names: Erica Streak, Jet[NN]

Age: 20| Birthplace: Rustboro City | Gender: Female

Trainer Rank: Aura Trainer

|~ Characterization ~|
Appearance:
Erica is a tall, lean girl with long, jet black hair down to her back. She always wears a black leather vest over a red T-shirt. She also wears beige jeans, that were once ripped from a fateful encounter with a Salamence. She wears red sneakers with black laces and a blue arrow design on it. Her eyes are as blue as water, and she has a huge scar near her eye from getting bit by a Poochyena, and a huge gash where the jeans were ripped.

Personality:
Always head-strong and brave, she will be willing to accept any challenge, even if she is underleveled. Erica is intimidated easily though, and if she knows a pokemon is much stronger, she starts running away from it to avoid getting hurt.

Battle Style:
During Double and triple battles, she likes to immediately target 1 pokemon, and in single and rotation battles, She sets up for massive damage.[/b]

Past Experience / History:
As a child, Erica loved Pokemon ever since she saw Roxanne defeat a traveler using only Geodude. At the age of 10, she was enrolled at the pokemon academy, and at the age of 12, she was given an Exeggcute.

1 year later, Erica had left the Pokemon Academy and had attempted to battle Roxanne. Before Erica battled, she saw a youngster's Raticate battle Roxanne's Geodude. The Geodude was absorbing every attack Raticate was using, and then the Geodude used Rock Tomb, leaving Raticate wide open to attacks, and then
it was defeated. Erica then battled, defeating Geodude, but the Nosepass defeated Coco.

At the age of 14, Erica's family went to Saffron City to meet her aunt. Erica wondered if she could actually win against her. Erica's aunt had a Masquerain, and it happened to know Infestation, which took out Coco quickly. Later, Coco learned Dream Eater from her uncle(who had the TM) and rematches her aunt. This time, Coco was not OHKO'ed by Infesation, it had used Hypnosis instead, which made the Masquerain fall asleep. After taking a lot of Dream Eater damage, the Masquerain was defeated.

A few more years later, Erica attempted to catch a Poochyena, and it bit her face. She also made a risky move by going to Slateport via the ferry service, and saw a trainer's Salamence. The Salamence was angered and the trainer did not have any badges, so it cut a huge gash on Erica's left leg, and she was in the hospital until it healed.

At the age of 19, a Spinarak had ambushed her and bit her on the neck. The Spinarak chased down Erica all the way, defeated Coco, and was eventually caught.

The day that this gets approved is Erica's in game birthday, she plans on beginning her pokemon journey then.

|~ Inventory ~|
Badges:
~Kanto~
~Hoenn~
~Johto~
~Sinnoh~
~Unova~
~Kalos~
~Other~

Money: $6,200
Items:
05x Pokeballs

|~ Pokemon ~|
Species: Spinarak
Nickname: String
Gender: Male
Level: 19
Experience: 0
Ability: Insomnia
Personality: Very courageous, String is very trustworthy.
Moves: Venom Drench, Fell Stinger, Bug Bite, Poison Sting
String Shot, Scary Face, Constrict, Leech Life, Night Shade, Shadow Sneak, Toxic[TM], Megahorn[Egg]

Species: Exeggcute
Nickname: Coco
Gender: Female
Level: 12
Experience: 0
Ability: Harvest
Personality: Unable to describe feelings well, she draws or provides eggs to express feelings.
Moves: Barrage, Hypnosis, Confusion, Stomp, Psyshock, Uproar, Reflect, Dream Eater,[TM]Moonlight[Egg]

Posts : 1696 Location : England

I've said this to you already, but I'll say it again. In twenty years of her life, a hell of a lot more will have happened to her than just encountering Pokemon, so expand on history and also on personality. There's basically nothing there. A person is deep, complex and so layered. Explore her and actually give her some substance.

Posts : 402 Location : EAT DIRT!!!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAH!!!!

Added a part where Jet battles Roxanne and loses.

Posts : 1696 Location : England

You don't seem to grasp what I mean. I mean what it was like growing up, things that shaped who she is, perhaps not even to do with Pokemon at all. Have a look around at approved characters to see what I mean. And the personality still needs doing.

Posts : 402 Location : EAT DIRT!!!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAH!!!!

Fixed the personality and added a battle against her aunt's Masquerain.

Posts : 1696 Location : England

Still nowhere near enough for personality. I'm not going to repeat myself about history, it's like you're not even reading what I'm telling you at this point.