Hiro Reks

Name: Hiro reks
Age: 12
Gender: male
Birthplace: odale town
Trainer rank: novice Pokemon trainer
Appearance: has black hair with gold streaks. Wears blue jeans, white t shirt, sneakers, wears a black leather jacket with a gold chain. Has cold blue eyes. Clean shaven. Has a black tribal tattoo on his back
Personality: cold, distant and without mercy. Never shows any emotion, ever. Speaks in a low, cold voice. He prefers to be alone and hates big crowds. He is a loner. Doesn't see what friends can get you what he can't get for himself. Not really a jerk but confident. Doesn't really brag. Has big abitions in life. Dreams of being Hoenn region champ and world champ
Battle style: cold and calcuating but loves to unleash a furious offense. However he has a solid defense but is a offensive trainer. Looks for his oopenet to make a mistake then capsizes on it. He is a opportunist.
History: grew up in the sleepy town of Odale town with his uncle. His uncle never really cared for him. Ever since Hiro was a kid he wanted to be a Pokemon trainer. His uncle always told him it'll never happen. One day he was invited to prof. Birch's lab where he got his first Pokemon.
He set off on his journey immediatlely. His uncle is a member of team magma and tried to get Hiro to join. Hiro refused and left, and vowed never to see his uncle again.
Inventory
Badges
Kanto
Hoenn
Johto
Shinnoh
Unova
Kalos
Money: $6, 200
Pokeballs: x5
Pokemon: Torchic
Nickname: doesn't have one
Gender: male
Level: 5
Experience: 0
Abiltity: blaze
Personality: hyper but obedient. Likes to run around but hard working. Kinda goofy
Moves: peck, ember, scratch

Appearance:
I'd appreicate more details being put into this; perhaps there is a design on the t-shirt... Can you describe the tattoo? Perhaps you can describe his built or the length of his hair? Appearance looked rushed

Personality:
There are too many sentence fragments in this. Please fix that; also, what are some of his likes and dislikes? How does he treat his pokemon or others? Does he just avoid them altogether or just until he needs something?

Battle Style:
Again, sentence fragments need to be fixed; also, he has a solid defense how exactly?

History:
The history doesn't really seem to completely match up with everything written. If he's cold and hateful, wouldn't joining team Magma make things better for him? Also, the history is really short; there has to be more that has happened to him throughout his life.

Formatting:
This is just me but the template needs to be formatted better so it's easy to tell where things are.