Beckett Altoro

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[This was edited by Dovah on ug07 behalf]
Name: Beckett Altoro
Nicknam: Bec
Age:14
Gender:Male
Birthplace:Nuvema town,unova.

Trainer Rank:
Pokemon Trainer

Appearance:
Beckett has brown buzzed hair and has Hazel eyes also slightly tan skin, he wears a navy blue jacket overtop of a Black shirt, blue jeans and a pair of grey sneakers and a grey computer bag. Beckett stand 6 feet tall and weighs about 135 lb.

Personality: Bec is a very polite, kind, and gentle person who often shows respect to everybody he meets. Bec is what you would call a social butterfly he likes to surround himself with people and share in there experiences, Bec's moral compass always points north meaning he will never do anything that would be morally wrong. He will always go out of his way to help someone or society believing one persons act of kindness and generosity can inspire others do to the same.

Unfortunately, Bec has parts of his personality he wishes to cover up. He sometimes gives up too much of himself to solve problems for others and does too many things at one time. He is also very secretive to people he is not close too.

Battle style: Beckett fights violently using mainly attacks and rarely uses defense moves

Past Experience / History: Beckett's father dreamt of being a pokemon master, training as much as possible. He left his wife and son to travel and become a stronger trainer and never returned. Beckett promised his mother he would travel the world and find his father and reunite their family. When bec was born he often played with the pokemon in the woods and this would so lead his love for pokemon

|~ Inventory ~|
Badges: -None-

Money: $(if you could add the amount here that would be Dandy)
Items:
05x Pokeballs

|~ Pokemon ~|
Species:Vaporeon
Nickname: Allie
Gender: female
Level:12
Experience:0
Ability:Water Absorb: The Pokémon heals up to 1/4 of it’s maximum Hit Points when hit with Water-type moves.
Personality: very active, tries to get involved in fights alot, very kind, forgiving, naive
Moves:
-Tackle
-Helping Hand
-Tail whip
-WaterGun

Posts : 1696 Location : England

This quite frankly looks like a troll profile. Firmly rejected until edits are made.

You have to start with a basic form Pokemon with no experience points - it blatantly says in the profile not to change this and that Pokemon can only be level twelve or below. The moveset was also done incorrectly and I'm quite sure you changed the money as well. There's barely any history or personality there and both should be elaborated on.

Posts : 1696 Location : England

It has to be Eevee, not a Vaporeon. Also, the amount that should be there was on the profile sheet. It should've been plainly copy and pasted, that's what the coding is there for with indications of what to erase/fill in. Personality's almost acceptable now, but nobody's perfect. He will do things that are morally wrong at times whether he chooses to or not. Everyone has flaws. More detail on history, please. What it was like growing up, what gave him such a strong moral grounding and need to be kind. How did he meet Eevee or has he not met it yet?