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| Subject: Nefertari Vivi Thu May 08, 2014 4:00 am | |
| __________________________________________________________________________________________ "When the world shoves you around, you just gotta stand up and shove back. It's not like somebody's gonna save you if you start babbling excuses" __________________________________________________________________________________________ Name: Nefertari ViviNickname: Princess ViviAge: 16Gender: FemaleRank: CoordinatorBirthplace: Sinnoh, Jubilife CityBattle Style: Rarely battles.Looks: Vivi has long wavy blue hair, with two bangs hanging down, one on either side of her head. Her bangs started out at about chin-length, but were past her shoulders by her last appearance before the timeskip. She most often has her hair pulled back into a ponytail. She is also very slender-bodied, having long thin legs and arms and prominent large breasts. She tends to wear non-revealing or non-alluring clothing.Personality: Despite being a princess, Vivi never demands any special attention, nor does she put herself first above others. She often thinks of others before herself, risking her life to help anyone who needs her. She puts the needs of others far above her own needs and wants and is hesitant to rely on others or ask for help with her problems.
She is modest and seldom dresses or acts like a stereotypical princess would.History: Vivi grew up in Jubilife city with her grandparents. She lived a happy life until she was about ten years old, the tragic death of her two parents sent her over the edge, she went from a cheery, happy, playful little girl, to a crying mess. She loved her parents so much, although she rarely got to see them, due to the job they had.
Vivi dropped out of school for a little while to mourn over her parents death, but eventually got over it after a few months. Her Grandparents felt she was, missing something, a friend maybe. So her grandfather went and got her a Pokemon, afterall, she was the rightful age of 10. When Vivi went to school, her grandfather went out of the house and caught her a pokemon. The pokemon he caught was, a Roselia. When Vivi got home that day, she was really happy because she had aced her math test, but the day got even better when her grandfather showed her the Roselia he caught for her. She was so happy.
She and Roselia became good friends over the years, and Vivi finally decided to set off into the world when she turned 16 years old. She and Roselia set off from Jubilife city, and are going wherever the world decides to take them.Badges: Items: 5 Poke Balls Money: $6,200 PokémonPokémon: RoseliaNickname: Rosey Gender: FemaleLevel: 5Moves:
- Stun Spore
- Petal Dance
- Petal Blizzard
- Sweet Scent
- Magical Leaf
- Swift
Ability: Poison PointPersonality: Roselia is a very Shy, playful and happy Pokemon.Exp: 0 |
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Nishwishes11 Posts : 1696 Location : England
| Subject: Re: Nefertari Vivi Thu May 08, 2014 4:05 am | |
| It doesn't matter that she rarely battles, she needs a battle style. Please expand on her personality more as well. Also, you say she's a princess, and then completely miss that out of her history? How did her parents tragically die? Did anything significant happen before they died? Why did she live with her grandparents and not them? Please explain more about her. |
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Bryan12 Posts : 3201 Location : Parts Unknown
| Subject: Re: Nefertari Vivi Sun May 25, 2014 10:25 am | |
| Your high demands are driving members away. Look at the trainer creation with all the unapproved applications wherein you've posted. Some authors have not edited their applications and have chosen to leave because of this. |
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