Logan Hamilton

Name: Logan Hamilton
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Rank:Aura Trainer
Birthplace: Goldenrod City, Johto
Battle Style: Fire No Madder What
Looks: Blond hair, green eyes, tan, Always  wears green!
Personality: Long story short, Logan acts like a Flareon.Likes:Money,Fire,Fire type pokémon,Flareon. Dislikes:Waiting,Lt. sarge,Water.

History: To get where he is now, Logan took some hard training. He can also be seen at casinos, playing.But at his young age, how? Logan has one little secret- he has a permit! He is consedered the youngest. But his pokemon and his pokemon and him went to Unova to level up and went. Pretty far.
Badges: (New Trainers leave blank)
Items: 79 Poke Balls (New trainers do not change)
Money: $6,200 (Do not change)

Pokémon

Pokémon: Flareon
Gender: Male
Level:70 (level 1-12 for first Pokémon)
Moves:Fire spin,Bite,Fire blast,last resort,Quick attack,Smog
Ability:Guts (Your Pokémon's ability)
Personality:Friendly
Exp: 0 (Leave as zero)

Alright, I'm going to start with this. What's the point of the poll? This is a trainer application; I don't really think that's necessary for it. You could post something with a poll in the introduction forum if you want.

1. Your age is a bit low for the trainer application. ~12 years old is a recommended starting age for most.
2. Your personality is literally only one sentence. This does not fit with the requirements of the template. Also, you need to clarify exactly what you mean about him acting like a flareon
3. Saying the simple word of "fire" is not a battle style. Does he fight fire with fire? Does he fight using mostly fire-typed moves for his pokemon? You need to clarify this further and write more.
4. The history isn't even explained. You need to clarify the details; for example, where did your character get his permit? Are there even casinos in the pokemon world? Also, you need to add more events, describing the character's past. Right now all I'm seeing is one to two events, and that just won't cut it.
5. How does your character have 79 pokeballs? Why would he need that many at the current time? This isn't explained in the history, and isn't even recommended for the first trainer application you submit.
6. Your pokemon's level is way above the maximum allowed for even one pokemon of your team. Considering that it's also your first pokemon, it needs to be level one to twelve. You clearly left this in parenthesis, so did you not see it?
7. The formatting needs to be redone. The history, personality, name, and so on need to each be on their own line so that they can easily be determined. The same thing goes for your pokemon the character has. You need to remove the exposed BBCodes and follow the trainer template.

I understand you are new to the forum, but this is a bit ridiculous... I don't really have any other ways to put it. I recommend that you reference the Rules and Information forum so you can read up on all the rules and information before you edit this.

As well, I recommend going and taking another look at the Trainer Template before you revise it. This is because you are to adhere to the guidelines and parenthesis for the template.

If you have any questions, you can ask a staff member for assistance or post your questions in this topic.[/b]

This is my final copy. Oh and why dosen't I have a Aura Trainer(Wow)Post tag?   

logan5123 wrote:

This is my final copy. Oh and why dosen't I have a Aura Trainer(Wow)Post tag?   

What do you mean by final copy? There shoudl be an edit button on your first post so that you could go back and edit it. You won't recieve a name color until one of your trainer applications has been approved, and so far, I'm not very willing to approve this app.

Okay, I was nice enough to fix your formatting. :3 Please use it for reference should you decide to make another character after this. Anyway, this does not yet meet approval requirements. Please revise it as Fenrisulfr has instructed.