FlyingNinja1 Posts : 15 Location : FL
| Subject: Jack Reed Sun Jun 30, 2013 2:10 am | |
| Name: Jack Reed Nickname: Jackie Age: 14 Gender: Female Rank: Pokémon Trainer Birthplace: Litteroot, Hoenn Region Battle Style: Jackie uses moves like thunder wave, toxic, ember and ect. to give her advantages. Other than that, she loves strong attack powers over high defense. Because of this, she uses pokemon with greater attack and Sp. Attack. Jackie's favorite types are Dragon, Fire, and ice. Personality: Jackie is outgoing, fun loving and always happy. Because of her over protected parents, Jackie is always in for some trouble, loving the rush she gets when she runs from authority. She's always energetic, rarely tired of talking or walking. Her favorite things to do is skating boarding, hanging out with friends and tasting the sweet taste of victory. Her dream is to become a 'Pokémon Master' to make her parents proud. History:Growing up Jackie always wanted to be like her mom and go on a pokemon adventure, battle her one rival and beat the elite four. Despite her dreams, her mom was always overprotected and didn't let her go until now. Jackie wasn't that upset though since her dad was able to bring her over to the Almia Region every once and a while, being a pokemon ranger and all. Because of this Jackie was able to learn how to get along with Pokemon, clean up injuries, feed them and more. Now being 16 and all, she's finally able to set out on her life long dream. Badges: Items: 5 Poke Balls Money: $6,200 PokémonPokémon: Treecko Nickname: Blade Gender: Male Level: 6 Moves: Pound, Leer, Absorb, Toxic (TM) Ability: Overgrow Personality: Upbeat, Energetic, Playful and overprotected Exp: 0
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Card12 Posts : 3318 Location : Cat Paradise
| Subject: Re: Jack Reed Sun Jun 30, 2013 7:50 pm | |
| Could you make the history just a bit longer? Two more sentences should suffice. Also, could you further explain Jackie's Fighting Style? Just writing that 'she uses mostly offense and defense' is a bit vague. You could explain with Pokemon Types. |
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FlyingNinja1 Posts : 15 Location : FL
| Subject: Re: Jack Reed Sun Jun 30, 2013 9:32 pm | |
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Card12 Posts : 3318 Location : Cat Paradise
| Subject: Re: Jack Reed Sun Jun 30, 2013 9:59 pm | |
| Approved and have fun on PWRPG! ^ ^ |
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