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PostSubject: Castien Aarons   Castien Aarons H6Q0F8zTue Feb 04, 2014 6:45 pm

Name: Castien Aarons
Nickname: Cass
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Rank: Trainer
Birthplace: Hoenn - Littleroot Town
Battle Style: Any Type but usually only an Offensive battle style using mostly brute force with little in strategy
Looks:
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Personality:
Castien is a very friendly person, often looking for people to travel with him or people he can just laugh and have a good time with. He is easy going and not very motivated when it comes to strict battle training with his pokemon. Although he doesn't train as often as he should and is more likely to goof off, Cass is someone who loves to spend time with pokemon and his goal is to one day be a pokemon breeder so he can care for many pokemon and have to raise them as well. He loves to play video games and climb trees, very often scraping his knees or elbows when falling from the branches above.
History
Cass was born in Littleroot of Hoenn to a family who moved from a region known as Kalos when they were tired of being bullied by the region's Team similar to Team Rocket. While there was little known about Team Flare, Castien's father had been threatened several times by the Grunts of Team Flare. His father was never around as he had left to go become a Gym Leader but Castien didn't care because he was able to play with the pokemon in the town and laugh and joke around. Cass was young when he decided he was ready to be a pokemon breeder and so he asked his mom if he could and she told him he would have to be really strong to do that. One day, Cass was out in the grass playing with one of his mom's pokemon when he saw a Vulpix being bullied by a Machoke. He ran over and jumped in front of the Vulpix, wrapping his arms around it until the Machoke left. Castien ran with the Vulpix to his mom's house crying because he thought that she was too wounded to be saved and he didn't like it. For two hours he sat with the small Pokemon while she rested and was tended to until she woke up and he could see that the Vulpix was okay. In that time he had gotten to where he cared about this particular Vulpix and didn't want harm to come to her again so he sat there when she woke up and smiled warmly. It was four weeks before the Vulpix was fully healed from broken bones and in that time Castien spent every day with the Pokemon taking care of her. The Vulpix started to trust Castien and at the end of the four weeks the Pokemon remained with him, telling him she was his Pokemon.
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Items: 5 Poke Balls
Money: $6,200

Pokémon

Pokémon: Vulpix
Nickname:
Gender: Female
Level: 12
Moves: Flamethrower (TM) Ember, Roar, Quick Attack,
Ability: Flash Fire
Personality: Friendly
Exp: 0


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PostSubject: Re: Castien Aarons   Castien Aarons H6Q0F8zWed Feb 05, 2014 12:09 am

I'd personally recommend putting that image in a spoiler... It distorts the page for me and possibly 99% of others. The battle style is a bit broad; what kind of offensive fighting? Strategic? Brute force?

There are also two things confusing about the history;
1. What is the "Team" you speak of? There isn't really much else on this note.
2. I personally think that a bit more shoudl be added on how the vulpix became the trainer's pokemon. Yes, he protected it from a machoke, but afterwards all that's written is that he picked it up and ran home. What happened after this? Did the vulpix trust the trainre?
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PostSubject: Re: Castien Aarons   Castien Aarons H6Q0F8zWed Feb 05, 2014 12:32 am

Okay I fixed those things
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PostSubject: Re: Castien Aarons   Castien Aarons H6Q0F8zWed Feb 05, 2014 12:45 am

Good, everythign seems in order. Just edit out the large red text [that is only there as a note for you] and then it'll be 100% approvable o3o
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PostSubject: Re: Castien Aarons   Castien Aarons H6Q0F8zWed Feb 05, 2014 12:52 am

Done
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PostSubject: Re: Castien Aarons   Castien Aarons H6Q0F8zWed Feb 05, 2014 12:55 am

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