HomeHome  Latest imagesLatest images  NewsNews  PollsPolls  EventsEvents  Rules and Info.Rules and Info.  SearchSearch  RegisterRegister  Log inLog in  

Share
 

 Yurei Sky

View previous topic View next topic Go down 
Yurei
4
Yurei
4
Posts : 130
Location : Currently Wondering

Yurei Sky  Empty
PostSubject: Yurei Sky    Yurei Sky  H6Q0F8zTue Apr 16, 2013 7:37 am

Name: Yurei Sky
Nickname:Ghost Kid
Age:16
Gender:Male
Rank: Trainer
Birthplace: Kanto;Lavender Town
Battle Style:is more of the balanced kind,likes to lure in his foes with baited moves and suck them down with tricks and traps. basically a strategist.
Looks: Yurei Sky  1278711827_2249_full
Personality:Yurei is a calm,quite natured boy who has a passion for adventure and exploring.coming from a young age,he is usually playful,care free and very cunning.being a prankster at a young age gave him the title ghost kid. being known for the mis-deeds he was very well know almost notorious. being born and raised in lavender town would make you assume he was a gloomy dark kind of kid who moped around and had his head down,well not Yurei. at young he seemed to express more feeling then most and some how never went into the "Lavender sickness" that most people caught. instead he was a go happy kind of kid, growing up he grew custom to being more quite and silent,like his favorite pokemon, ghost. he also grew much wise and trouble some he can prove to be a problem at times but it's all in good fun.even thought his appearance would let off a rather dark and upset mood, he dose rarely feature these emotions and moods of sadness thought rarely.
History:Yurei as a kid was branded one of the most expressive kids there was.being born in Lavender town and all,the home of "the lavender sickness" where everyone was supposedly sad and upset.well not this kid he was always hyper and energetic which made him odd compared to the others who live in the town. as time went by and he matured he grew more quite and distant from his people and grew hunger for adventure wanting to explore the world and see all the brand new stuff in store for him that this world bestowed.eventually granting his own wish he ran away at the age of 14 thinking he could do it all his own not entirely sure nor understanding of the wonders that he would encounter or what awaited him in the near future.
around the time of his escape he heard noises coming from the pokemon tower near by. running in and seeing a Gastly in danger from other Gastly's he quickly rushed to it's aid,completely unsure what to do at the moment he quickly shouted out to the pokemon to follow him running off into the distance. seeing his old hiding spot he use to always run to when ever he was in trouble he quickly notified the pokemon of it and they both hid quietly to pass the time.morning came and his mother had found them both in the pit sleeping away awaking Yurei. He astonished yelped loudly awaking the pokemon startling it as well as it began to freak out almost in sync the two ran back and forth as his mother laughed of this site.after that morning she had known that Yurei was one of exploration and adventure as a child and decide to let him go on his own seeing as he had a companion already some how she smiled to this and nodded giving him a bag with a few supplies a map of the region and a kiss good bye.
ever since then Yurei has been on his own adventure exploring the world for new and exciting adventures and tales to come by and experience with his partner Gastly who is ever so grateful to him ever since that night. Gastly was as faithful a pokemon as ever.
Badges:none
Items: 5 Pokeballs, map from mom, 6 Potions, 3 Antidotes, 5 Rare Candies
1 Full Heal
Money: $4,200

Pokémon

Pokémon: Gastly
Nickname: Tenshi
Gender:male
Level: 8
Moves: Hypnosis and Lick,spite and mean look
Ability: Levitate
Personality:Gastly acts like Yurei.  They are almost identical with their actions.
Exp: 0

Pokemon: Litwick
Nickname:
Gender: Male
Level: 10
Moves:
Ember, Astonish, Minimize, Smog, Fire Spin, Confuse Ray
Ability: Flash Fire
Personality: Very determined to win a battle no matter what.
Exp: 0

Pokémon: Aron
Nickname:  
Gender: Male
Level: 11
Moves: Tackle, Harden, Mud-Slap, Headbutt, Metal Claw
Ability: Rock Head
Personality: Friendly, but a bit shy as Aron is still young.
Exp: 0

Ghost Type Egg

Random Type Egg


Last edited by Worthless Nobody on Tue Apr 16, 2013 2:05 pm; edited 1 time in total
Leo
12
Leo
12
Posts : 4328
Location : Sunagakure

Yurei Sky  Empty
PostSubject: Re: Yurei Sky    Yurei Sky  H6Q0F8zTue Apr 16, 2013 7:40 am

it looks great i am sure one of the staff will approve it :)
Lucretia
10
Lucretia
10
Posts : 1281
Location : Institutionalized

Yurei Sky  Empty
PostSubject: Re: Yurei Sky    Yurei Sky  H6Q0F8zTue Apr 16, 2013 7:59 am

Could you please put periods in your paragraphs? Right now you only have one long run-on sentence for each which makes it very distracting and hard to read. Please separate it into sentences, thank you.
Yurei
4
Yurei
4
Posts : 130
Location : Currently Wondering

Yurei Sky  Empty
PostSubject: Re: Yurei Sky    Yurei Sky  H6Q0F8zTue Apr 16, 2013 2:07 pm

fixed, sorry about that i have a tendency of doing that I've gotta work on knowing the difference.
Card
12
Card
12
Posts : 3318
Location : Cat Paradise

Yurei Sky  Empty
PostSubject: Re: Yurei Sky    Yurei Sky  H6Q0F8zTue Apr 16, 2013 3:40 pm

I don't see anything wrong with this. Unless someone else says no, I'd say this is approved.
Yurei
4
Yurei
4
Posts : 130
Location : Currently Wondering

Yurei Sky  Empty
PostSubject: Re: Yurei Sky    Yurei Sky  H6Q0F8zTue Apr 16, 2013 4:51 pm

So Am i official or are there still issues i must fix? i want to make sure there are no issues at all.
Lucretia
10
Lucretia
10
Posts : 1281
Location : Institutionalized

Yurei Sky  Empty
PostSubject: Re: Yurei Sky    Yurei Sky  H6Q0F8zWed Apr 17, 2013 2:03 am

You are approved, just remember some basic structures for the future; space after a period, capitalize names and the first word in a sentence. Start a new paragraph when a new person begins to speak, and use the appropriate punctuation to signify dialogue. ("") Have fun, and play on!
Sponsored content

Yurei Sky  Empty
PostSubject: Re: Yurei Sky    Yurei Sky  H6Q0F8z

 
Yurei Sky
View previous topic View next topic Back to top 
Page 1 of 1

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Pokémon World Forum :: Pokémon Role Play :: Creation Station :: Trainer Creation :: Approved Trainers-
Jump to: