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PostSubject: Re: Does anyone notice I am being ignored?   Does anyone notice I am being ignored? H6Q0F8zWed Mar 27, 2013 1:41 am

Links:
http://www.pokemonworldrpg.com/t4213-welcome-to-lavaridge-city
http://www.pokemonworldrpg.com/t4232-surskit-s-best-feat
http://www.pokemonworldrpg.com/t4225-time-to-train-remoraid

Alright, so first off, I find your roleplays a bit difficult to follow.
1] First off, you have those images and moving sprites, and these aren't even separated on their own line, and this makes the post unorganized/ un-neat, and hard to write a response to
2] I think you need to work on adding details, or even adding more lines to describe your scenes
3] Using multiple emoticons instead of just one also makes the post a bit hard to write a response to

Evidence:
Quote :

*yawn*
AAAGGHH!! Got to get in the sunlight! My colors faded!
AAH! That's better.
What the----- OWWWWW! I got slugged by a _____________
I have to run!!!
Alright, so in this spot, I can see that your trainer has obviously just woken up. However, where did he wake up? All we know is that the character's 'color' is faded, and he must get into the sunlight. Then you jump directly to being outside, with no transition between, which if followed logically, says you are still inside...

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Not only this, but if you look at the first two links that are shown, you started one topic DIRECTLY after the first. If you want a moderator to moderate your topics, you shouldn't post more than one for each character until you are actually going somewhere else, such as a different town or region, or even jumping into another character's topic.

Evidence:
Quote :

I finally made it this far! Said Ledi, who flew miles to get here. Ready Surskit? Skitttt! said the fun skater pokemon, jumping for joy. Let's train! Surskit walked into the thick grass and camoflaged in. Suddenly, a pokemon attacked Surskit, and sent her flying. Oh! It's a __________ screamed Ledi, attempting to cure Surskit by petting her.
This looks like a good paragraph, unlike the post I stated above. However, you're missing quotation marks, and even though I can live with this, there is a god-mod attempt in the post. You're going to attempt to cure your pokemon by petting it? I don't think that's possible. Also, I'm wondering about that camouflage, though considering which pokemon is there, I don't really have much say...

Link:
http://www.pokemonworldrpg.com/t4233-looking-for-trainers-with-2-characters

Also, what I see here is a request for a battle. If someone accepts this [which I personally doubt, considering that section isn't the most popular], your characters would probably be suspended in roleplay until the battling is finished as it is, so there's just more confusion there...

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Also, if you truly want your topics moderated, you could go to the Mod Me section:
http://www.pokemonworldrpg.com/f140-mod-me

If your topic isn't responded to when you post here [even though I don't see one for your second character], you could ALWAYS send a private message to one of the staff members so that your topic will be modded. I don't think that you've done this, so there's another suggestion fro you. Though I see you say that you don't want to, and truthfully, that's partially what the private messaging system is for! It's for you to give that moderator a nudge or talk with someone privately, so I don't see why you'd have a problem with it.

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I hate that I had to post it in this topic, but I felt that you needed to know.
Also, I need to point out that I don't think that you've read the rules, and before you continue / restart roleplaying, you need to go do this to prevent further troubles.

Don't believe me? Here's a list:
1] You have double-posted more than one time I've witnessed
2] You have posted the same topic twice, which is also double-posting
3] You posted in Prize Shop without looking at how many prize points you have, which is none [0]

-Matt

 
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