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 Replacing Maya, it's Shade!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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PostSubject: Replacing Maya, it's Shade!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Replacing Maya, it's Shade!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! H6Q0F8zFri Mar 15, 2013 7:15 pm

Name: Shade Eroka
Nickname:
Age: 11
Gender: Female
Rank: Trainer
Birthplace: Aspertia City, Unova
Battle Style: It's never really a solid battle style, it always changes XP
Looks: Replacing Maya, it's Shade!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Meh11
Personality: She loves music, and sometimes sings to herself and Z. She never denies a challenge to a Pokemon battle, but tries to protect Z, just as Z protects her. She hates people who abuse Pokemon as well. Almost anyone who cares for Pokemon and treat them kindly, she will try to be friends with. She hates people who steal things too, and she's a bit short-tempered just as Z is. She loves cute Pokemon, and liked it when she had friends. She doesn't like it when people make fun of her or Z for needing each other either.
History: Shade has the ability to understand Pokemon that can't talk or use telepathy. Due to this, she was given Z as a guardian at the age of 4 when this was discovered. She wans to become a Pokemon Master, but certain people hd tried to kidnap her in the past. At the age of 7, her house was destroyed while she was on a walk without Z. Z managed to escape, very injured that day, and Shade waned to get revenge on whoever had done it. She now lives just outside Nuvema Town with Z, and sometimes sings to herself. She decided that she would probably begin her journey from there.
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Items: 5 Poke Balls
Money: $4,200

Pokémon

Pokémon: Zorua
Nickname: Zekora, or Z for short, which annoys her
Gender: Female
Level: 10
Moves: Scratch, Leer, Pursuit, Fake Tears
Ability: Illusion
Personality: Friendly and protective, but gullible in most situations and also short-tempered.
Exp: 0

[-Ghost Type Egg-]

[ This is to replace: http://www.pokemonworldrpg.com/t3511-it-s-anotha-character-of-mine-already-xd#62791 ]
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PostSubject: Re: Replacing Maya, it's Shade!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Replacing Maya, it's Shade!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! H6Q0F8zFri Mar 15, 2013 9:37 pm

Alright, so this looks good. Just lik eI tell the others, you need to separate the fields to make the apps clearer.
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PostSubject: Re: Replacing Maya, it's Shade!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Replacing Maya, it's Shade!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! H6Q0F8zFri Mar 15, 2013 10:19 pm

I copied the coded section, there was no seperation.
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PostSubject: Re: Replacing Maya, it's Shade!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Replacing Maya, it's Shade!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! H6Q0F8zSat Mar 16, 2013 2:44 am

Fang,

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That ain't in the code, dood. That shouldn't be wrong.
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PostSubject: Re: Replacing Maya, it's Shade!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Replacing Maya, it's Shade!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! H6Q0F8zSat Mar 16, 2013 2:54 am

Shadow wrote:
Fang,

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That ain't in the code, dood. That shouldn't be wrong.

I know it isn't in the code, but it makes an app clearer and easier to read. About 90-99% of the apps do this
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PostSubject: Re: Replacing Maya, it's Shade!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Replacing Maya, it's Shade!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! H6Q0F8zSat Mar 16, 2013 3:05 am

My point is the member has followed the app correctly so adding fancy-ness in the application is optional. And it's already easy to read. You can't really "not approve" an application just because you find it hard to read or don’t like the style. And that's what the Bold is for. If you want your said style to be done, and then go discuss that simple change in the staff.

EDIT: Wes, is putting a shitload of exclamation marks on the subject really necessary?
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PostSubject: Re: Replacing Maya, it's Shade!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Replacing Maya, it's Shade!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! H6Q0F8zSat Mar 16, 2013 4:03 am

Just, approved... No other word
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