Yup, another one

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((To replace Ziar Zakura))

Name: Zalazhar Slytherin
Nickname: Zy
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Personality: Zy is mature yet slightly childish in times. He loves a joke but cann be as cold as steel. Zy likes to stay as high as possible and in a place where he can jump to any place. He barely has anyfriennds but likes to have everyone in his deppt. Eventhough Zy had a tough life, he is friendly and open minded.
Battle Style: Zy fights offensively.
Trainer Type: Traier, but will once in a while breed a pokemon and may enter a contest, not really aiming for badges.
Home: None, was born in Twinleaf in Sinnoh though
History: Zy onced lived in a rich family. He was a great acrobat and was good at prettymuch all martial arts. He passed his days playing with wild pokemon. One day, a assasin killed his parents. His fury was so great that a wild pokemon he was playing with and him jumped at the assasin and knocked him out by using the element of surprise. Sonce then Zy was a homeless kid, still a great acrobat ad martial artist for his age. He had Inherited his family's money but fled from it. He roamed the regions, all of them. When he discoverd Sinnoh, he went there and decided to become a trainer. He decided to get his first pokemon there, or maybe not, he didn't know for sure. It ended up being a Croagunk he foud in the woods, he called him Y
Looks:

Money: $6,200

Bag

Items:
5 Pokeballs
Badges or Ribbons

Kanto:
Johto:
Hoenn:
Sinnoh:
Unova:

Pokemon

Pokemon: Croagunk
Nickname: Y
Gender: Male
Moves: Mud slap, Poison Sting, Shadow Ball TM, Drain Punch EM
Ability: Anticipation
Level: 16
Personality: Lonely ((Its a Croagunk, what do you expect >.>))
Exp: 0

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1] Please get your character retired before this is approved
2] Please set the topic name as the name of the character
3] Please bold the correct words, such as "History" and "Personality"
4] Please fix your typoes throughout the application
5] I don't see anything under looks

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Fang, I know I'm not supposed to be here but shouldn't Personality be written right before History? And the Looks somewhere around the first parts? I think following the correct order of the template's areas is also a requirement for approval. And who the Hell is that adorable dog on your avatar? :D