Brendan Richards

Name: Brendan Richards
Nickname: N/A
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Rank: Trainer
Birthplace: Johto
Battle Style: Strongheaded but effective. Always making stupid decisions in battle that end up working at the last minute to save his skin and prove that he knows what he is doing.
Looks:
Personality: Brendan is kind of a lazy slacker. He doesn't seem to do much but lazy around and train his pokemon. He is a talented trainer when he puts his mind to it. He seems to understand adult situations but he is very childish. He loves to eat, relax and train his pokemon. He hates to do actual work and tall grass. He is a funny character with lots of heart but is very childish. He is a fun loving trainer and never takes things seriously. He tends to spend more time training his pokemon then worrying about the trouble that often finds its way into his lap.
History: Brendan was born in Ecruteak, Johto. His father is a mail-man but he was raised by Norman and his mother which would explain why he has white hair unlike his father. He and his mother moved from Johto to Hoenn to be closer to his father and for Brendan to follow his father's footsteps and become a trainer. He formerly had a odd blue Taros by the name of Mr. Beefy. He has a fear of tall grass since he moved to Hoenn and ran into many pokemon. He is a laid back character and can be serious from time to time. He has caught pokemon in Johto but left them with Prof. Elm.
Badges:
Items: 15 Poke Balls
Money: $4,200
Pokémon

Pokémon: Torchic
Nickname:
Gender: Male
Level: 5
Moves: Scratch, Growl, Rock Slide (EM), Aerial Ace (TM)
Ability: Blaze
Personality: Obediant
Exp: 0

The majority of this looks good~

I'd perfer if Battle Style were a bit longer, the other lengths look good. Please remove everything in parenthesis, and you need to add a Personality to your Torchic.

Also, you do know Brendan hasbrown/black hair...the white is just a part of his hat.

Updated

You didn't get rid of all of the information in the parenthasis nor made the Battle Style any longer. please fix these.

Fixed

Looks decent. Approved~