TyranitTitan12 Posts : 2302 Location : Stop stalking me, creep
| Subject: Atlas Harrikan Tue Aug 07, 2012 3:46 pm | |
| Name: Atlas Harrikan Nickname: 14 Gender:Male Rank: Trainer Birthplace: Sinnoh, Oreburgh Battle Style: Use one attack to defend the other pokemon, Atlas allmost only fight double/triple battles. He likes to Use Prinplup to protect Vulpix. Looks: Personality: Atlas is king harted and open. He is friendly and excactly the kind of person any one wants to meet twice. Atlas has a wierd way of making everything sound nice. Atlas has many friends. Atlas loves his pokemon, He doesn't battle with Vulpix often though. History: Atlas's life was normal. Too normal. He spend all his life with the Vulpix he got for his birthday. He grew up with a normal life and nothing special in it. His life was is too boring and simple for his taste. The boredom and simplicity stopped when he became a Pokemon Trainer. He kept his Vulpix but got a other pokemon. The new pokemon was a Piplup! It soon evolved into Prinplup! Badges: Items: 5 Pokeballs Money: $6,200 Pokémon Pokémon:Vulpix Nickname: Gender:Male Level: 10 Moves: Ember Roar Tail Whip Quick Attack Ability: Flash Fire Personality: Friendly Exp: 0 Pokémon Pokémon:Prinplup Nickname: Gender:Male Level: 20 Moves: Start Tackle Start Growl 4 Growl 8 Bubble 11 Water Sport 15 Peck 16 Metal Claw 19 BubbleBeam TM: Blizzard EM: Hydro pump Ability: Torrent Personality: Friendly Exp: 4
Last edited by Atlas on Tue Aug 07, 2012 4:14 pm; edited 1 time in total |
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Fox Demon Avaritia12 Posts : 3342 Location : On her train, her hype train o3o
| Subject: Re: Atlas Harrikan Tue Aug 07, 2012 4:02 pm | |
| Great job on punctuation and grammar! Just make Personality longer, as a paragraph is the minimum, and add a few more sentences to both Battle Style and History~ |
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TyranitTitan12 Posts : 2302 Location : Stop stalking me, creep
| Subject: Re: Atlas Harrikan Tue Aug 07, 2012 4:15 pm | |
| Oh well, it was stupid to belive that i could get a one post approval XD edited anyway |
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Fox Demon Avaritia12 Posts : 3342 Location : On her train, her hype train o3o
| Subject: Re: Atlas Harrikan Tue Aug 07, 2012 4:33 pm | |
| It looks as if it meets the minimum, approved unless otherwise stated~ |
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