Zack Dragonart

Name: Zack Dragonart
Nickname: Zar
Age: 14
Gender:Male
Rank: Trainer
Birthplace: Johto, Cherrygrove
Battle Style: Get close, finish fast by using a power move.
Looks:
Personality: Both bossy and friendly. A born leader. Hes the kind of person you turn too when things are going wrong. Friendly toward his pokemon but rather pushy to make them strong. A very bit rude but still friendly. Zack puts his pokemon in priority and does everything to maker them happy.
History: He was coming back from karate school when he saw a pokemon circus coming trough town. There where a bunch of pokemon: Chimchar, Infernape, Tyranitar and a good 10 other!. Then he saw trainers battle he saw a tyranitar fighting a Haxorus!. Then he thought: I want to be like that too one day!. He knew his family didn't want him to become a trainer so he got his pokemon undercover. He left leaving only a big letter behind: a good half meter letter!. the letter explained what he had done there was also a picture a few to say better he had taken a few pictures of his family with him and promised to call everyday. the day after the Dratini he got and him where battling a few pokemon! the second had a attack hit Zack! Blast was so so so furious that he one hit K.O'd the pokemon it level'd him up which was enough. They left on their journey. Some time later, Blast evolved. Over time, Blast and him got some more pokemon.
Badges:
Items: 5 Pokeballs
Money: $15,000

Pokémon

Pokémon: Dragonite
Nickname:Blast
Gender:Male
Level: 75
Moves: Twister, Hyper Beam, Thunder Wave, Aqua Tail.
Ability: SandStream
Personality: brave and friendly
Exp: 0



Pokémon: Charizard
Nickname:Solar
Gender:Male
Level: 75
Moves:Dragon Claw, Inferno, Flame Thrower, Smoke Screen
TM: Dragon Tail
Ability: Blaze
Personality: brave and friendly
Exp: 0


Pokémon: Dusknoir
Nickname:Lunar
Gender:Male
Level: 75
Moves:Night Shade, Shadow Punch, Curse, Will-O-Wisp
Ability: Pressure
Personality: brave and friendly
Exp: 0

Ok, Its ready.

??? Reread the History Atlas then Cross Reference with your pokemon ok?

To make it simpler.

In History you said "the Larvitar he got and him where battling a few pokemon!" However you don't have a Larvitar or Pupitar or Tyranitar in your List of your Pokemon, Whereas you have a Dragonite called Blast which, has an evolutionary line of, Dratini, Dragonair, Dragonite, No Larvitar. Also then you never put in the history a Trade if one happened to take place to get Dratini/Dragonair/Dragonite instead of Larvitar.

Therefore Correct it either in the history or Pokemon List. (Tyranitar ------> Dragonite) or (Dragonite ------> Tyranitar) ok.

Yeah sorry but i was editting a old char, and i forgot that part edited anyway

Now Approved!